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Published: 2012-05-13 16:09:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 4629; Favourites: 167; Downloads: 25
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Description Our Word is Sacred:

We have struggled against the chains of fate
We've lived our lives on the edge of hate.
Oppressed by the taunting of the foolish and blind;
It is time we stood and responded in kind.

No more can we sit here, content with our place;
Else by apathy alone we shall be erased!
Our work is like a candle, a small one at best;
It is quickly snuffed by a single breath...

For too long have we accepted, the concept of equality;
Whilst simply accepting the crumbs of poverty.
Our people go unheeded, as madmen and sloths;
The "cultured" eat like kings, while we are fed with broth...

To create these verses, it takes a lot of time;
Have you ever tried putting your thoughts in rhyme?
Have you dealt with the frustration, of grasping at words?
Trust me my friend, it is like hunting for birds...

To put this in a structure, to give poetry a form;
It can take some men from dusk till dawn...
Yet we slave away freely and we beg for a chance;
But all we have earned is a pitiless glance...

Instead we are told to fight for the "bone";
Like ancient gladiators from the city of Rome...
We are told that only one can be free;
And it has to be either you or me...

"No, no more can I stand to simply see literature being trampled..."

-Chen Yuan Wen, 13th May 2012
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Comments: 90

WritingRollingGirl [2012-12-21 21:01:42 +0000 UTC]

I love it! ^^

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Getsuei-san [2012-07-12 15:35:22 +0000 UTC]

This was epic

Yeah, I agree, writers on dA have little to no attention by others, frankly I think people are just getting lazy :/. But I think there's hope , may take a while. I used to hate reading XD

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Nowcanneverbeforever [2012-07-03 17:13:48 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful...... You continue to amaze me!

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ioanaanghel [2012-06-13 09:09:18 +0000 UTC]

this is so good!!!

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LucienVox [2012-06-11 02:24:33 +0000 UTC]

I like this poem! I'm going to look through your gallery when i have more time man you very good!

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randomlyinspired-21 [2012-05-31 16:06:52 +0000 UTC]

I agree with you on this poem! Yeah writers on dA don't get that much in deviantart compared to image artists like painters and such. And I think it's about time that has to change for the better!

Amazing as always!

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edvalenz [2012-05-28 21:10:27 +0000 UTC]

This poem is awesome!

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Forgotten-Reaper [2012-05-26 16:48:28 +0000 UTC]

ivb fibvv v yio;itgsdjfsa!!! YES! SIMPLY, YES!

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Shiatanni [2012-05-21 13:14:26 +0000 UTC]

This poem make you sound like you're trying to bewitch everyone Captain?

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noorelven [2012-05-17 23:32:51 +0000 UTC]

Hear hear, the captain calls .. where is the avant guard ? where are the legions ? you little wenches the captain calls the campaign has begun!

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Myennaius13 [2012-05-17 21:49:37 +0000 UTC]

Writing in any form is a struggle to gain the notice of people. To put it in terms of entertaining the masses, video games and books both tell a story. However, seeing as how a game 'shows' you what the story is, and a book forces you to use your 'imagination' to see it for yourself in your own head, I don't think I need to say which is the harder task to create an effective piece of successful work.

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kedonsine [2012-05-17 21:36:35 +0000 UTC]

speechless as usual

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autumnlit [2012-05-15 16:24:25 +0000 UTC]

Love this. Powerful!!!

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WordOfChen In reply to autumnlit [2012-05-17 16:18:55 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye, I'm very glad ye liked me work ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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autumnlit In reply to WordOfChen [2012-05-18 01:39:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm delighted to see you keep up with this pirate thing. It's very cute. lol

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WordOfChen In reply to autumnlit [2012-05-18 02:35:32 +0000 UTC]

haha, tis me personal gimmick ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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Manigran [2012-05-15 04:21:42 +0000 UTC]

So strong and powerful. Love this poem to bits! I can't express enough how great this is.

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WordOfChen In reply to Manigran [2012-05-17 16:19:10 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye, I'm very happy that ye enjoy me work that much :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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Manigran In reply to WordOfChen [2012-05-17 17:47:09 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome. It's my pleasure.

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DeeryDeerth [2012-05-14 15:08:27 +0000 UTC]

Another awesome poem! You have such great skill! *-*

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WordOfChen In reply to DeeryDeerth [2012-05-17 16:19:20 +0000 UTC]

Aye thank ye Linda, but I'm still learnin' ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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DeeryDeerth In reply to WordOfChen [2012-05-17 17:08:04 +0000 UTC]

Still learning? It seems you have great skill and experience already, though.

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WordOfChen In reply to DeeryDeerth [2012-05-30 12:04:27 +0000 UTC]

It's never enough me dear Linda :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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DeeryDeerth In reply to WordOfChen [2012-05-30 13:11:26 +0000 UTC]

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Diluculi [2012-05-14 09:48:04 +0000 UTC]

Simply great!

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WordOfChen In reply to Diluculi [2012-05-17 16:19:26 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye Riddle :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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kitkat127 [2012-05-14 08:51:24 +0000 UTC]

wow wow wow! AWESOME!

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WordOfChen In reply to kitkat127 [2012-05-17 16:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye very much, I'm glad that ye enjoyed it and yer welcome ta come back and enjoy more new releases anytime ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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ExileFallen [2012-05-14 00:54:27 +0000 UTC]

Great Job!

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WordOfChen In reply to ExileFallen [2012-05-17 16:19:48 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye me friend :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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TwiUnderSeeker [2012-05-14 00:27:14 +0000 UTC]

Great job.

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WordOfChen In reply to TwiUnderSeeker [2012-05-17 16:19:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank ye so kindly ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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xXxFallenDreamerxXx [2012-05-13 21:50:41 +0000 UTC]

I agree. To put so much thought and effort into something that some people consider "meaningless" is quite frustrating. Maybe one day everyone can see what literature is to the rest of us, the ones that fight to keep it alive. :/

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WordOfChen In reply to xXxFallenDreamerxXx [2012-05-17 16:20:09 +0000 UTC]

Arrr definitely, and the fight will go on. Every week, FEATURE DAY :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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Gyrforce [2012-05-13 20:52:50 +0000 UTC]

A very accurate account of what writers here go through. Very well done!

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WordOfChen In reply to Gyrforce [2012-05-17 16:20:27 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye, it was just me quiet protest against what writers suffer all around the world ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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TexasDreamer01 [2012-05-13 20:18:33 +0000 UTC]

"Else by apathy alone we shall be erased!" That phrase. Is epic.

Also, did you mean to leave Rome uncapitalized?

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WordOfChen In reply to TexasDreamer01 [2012-05-17 16:20:41 +0000 UTC]

Arrr i think that was an error. I might go edit it now ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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TexasDreamer01 In reply to WordOfChen [2012-05-18 03:36:00 +0000 UTC]

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shad0wbeast [2012-05-13 19:51:54 +0000 UTC]

i love this one. keep it up my Captain!

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WordOfChen In reply to shad0wbeast [2012-05-17 16:21:17 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye Aslansa, I will do my best ta keep goin' ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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theGman0 [2012-05-13 19:21:04 +0000 UTC]

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WordOfChen In reply to theGman0 [2012-05-17 16:21:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank ye again ;3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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DustinRigg [2012-05-13 19:12:07 +0000 UTC]

deep man...deep!

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WordOfChen In reply to DustinRigg [2012-05-17 16:21:30 +0000 UTC]

Aye thank ye fer readin' and enjoyin' me work ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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DustinRigg In reply to WordOfChen [2012-05-17 20:57:24 +0000 UTC]

rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

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Spade9 [2012-05-13 19:07:53 +0000 UTC]

ooooooo, fancy XD

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WordOfChen In reply to Spade9 [2012-05-17 16:21:37 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I'm glad ye liked it me friend :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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D-A-Skelly [2012-05-13 17:06:26 +0000 UTC]

Really nice poem concerned with the plight of writers. I like the line 'Else by apathy alone we shall be erased'.

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WordOfChen In reply to D-A-Skelly [2012-05-17 16:21:43 +0000 UTC]

Aye, tis a powerful line ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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