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Published: 2009-06-19 21:53:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1088; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description OK i had this idea then decided to put the poem visually - but written it in such a way that ther is no beginning and end to it - that the end essentially can lead right back to the beginning over and over

the words read as follows..

Every tender word that
Became another stitch
That helped to repair
The rips in my heart
And affix it back
With so much care
Within my chest
To beat afresh with….


and in turn the last line could lead straight into the first line again round in a circle if you will
enjoy

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Comments: 25

Salli-Jo [2010-06-19 00:43:11 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderful! The way it cycles back thru again...beautiful visual poem!!

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rockgem In reply to Salli-Jo [2010-06-19 12:22:42 +0000 UTC]

thankyou so much for the compliment i remember jotting it down and couldn't decide on the order i wanted the lines in as to which ought be the beginning and which ought be the end. i'm a tad indecisive at times but the visual poetry overcame that and i could circle the words as such a slight echo of a star piece of mine the beginning leads back to the end - i'm not sure if there is a specific name for a piece like this

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Salli-Jo In reply to rockgem [2010-06-21 04:00:57 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!

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JacquiJax [2009-07-13 04:41:42 +0000 UTC]

cute

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rockgem In reply to JacquiJax [2009-07-13 11:36:30 +0000 UTC]

thankyou i jsut thought putting the text liek that was a good idea because the end of the verse can lead straight back into the beginning also it was lucky enough to be featured in =simoneyvette s DEVIANCE

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JacquiJax In reply to rockgem [2009-07-13 16:25:18 +0000 UTC]

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LgthAoshi14 [2009-06-21 14:11:48 +0000 UTC]

thats very creative

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rockgem In reply to LgthAoshi14 [2009-06-21 14:49:31 +0000 UTC]

thankyou so much for the compliment

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LgthAoshi14 In reply to rockgem [2009-06-22 00:27:09 +0000 UTC]

of course! you're welcome!

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Apheline [2009-06-20 23:15:21 +0000 UTC]

That's really cool, it reminds me of some hindu mantras that have that same effect, a never ending cycle, where the final word brings in the first word logically.

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rockgem In reply to Apheline [2009-06-20 23:18:15 +0000 UTC]

thankyou for the compliment and the never ending cycle was an accident of sorts but i thought it would be cool to go with it

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Jazzman1989 [2009-06-20 17:37:47 +0000 UTC]

love this darling

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rockgem In reply to Jazzman1989 [2009-06-20 19:19:34 +0000 UTC]

thankyou so much for the compliment

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Jazzman1989 In reply to rockgem [2009-06-20 19:23:51 +0000 UTC]

you're so welcome

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Rimi717 [2009-06-20 11:00:26 +0000 UTC]

red i like red :yay: i love heart too is my favourite symbols lol

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rockgem In reply to Rimi717 [2009-06-20 12:21:13 +0000 UTC]

glad you like this one - and everyone loves hearts!

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Rimi717 In reply to rockgem [2009-06-20 13:05:19 +0000 UTC]

haha of course hehe heart is really special lol

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rockgem In reply to Rimi717 [2009-06-20 13:59:23 +0000 UTC]

indeed!

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Rimi717 In reply to rockgem [2009-06-20 15:22:56 +0000 UTC]

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JPelmen [2009-06-20 02:45:13 +0000 UTC]

love it!

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rockgem In reply to JPelmen [2009-06-20 09:53:50 +0000 UTC]

thankyou for the compliment and

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JPelmen In reply to rockgem [2009-06-20 18:09:43 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure ^_^

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Venthor78 [2009-06-20 01:26:35 +0000 UTC]

nice X3

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rockgem In reply to Venthor78 [2009-06-20 09:48:47 +0000 UTC]

thankyou - was fun to try to create the fabric like patterns with photoshop to put this together - the end leading back into the beginning like a circle - no real start or end - i thought that was cool but a happy accident on my part - and visual poetry displayed it better than if i had just typed it - though i am also not sure if this particular structure of poem has a specific name

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Venthor78 In reply to rockgem [2009-06-25 06:37:06 +0000 UTC]

haha ^^ good job!

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