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Published: 2009-05-31 12:56:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1222; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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half idea i had put together with photoshopin case the words are too unclear they read as follows
Bright stars in your eyes
From joy? Or from hidden tears?
Fame has a high price.
edit: in the original image as someone kindly pointed out i missed out one of the words in the second line thus making it only 7 syllables - the edit being a correcting of this
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Your Super Duper Aleuper Welcome!
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thankyou so much for the compliment on this
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I think it's great - love the picture and the words.
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thankyou for the compliment - i am far happier that the mistake i made was spotted and reported and got fixed quickly though!
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I love when you do this. Put pictures and words together. You always do it so masterfully. And this Haiku is brilliant. It's a shame you have to put a from in the second line, I really like the flow of it as it is.
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well if i didn't then it ruins the haiku structure so yeah i had to re-edit it but it stil works with the picture and its not anything overly drastically different
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yeah, i agree, it sounds better...
but it just doesn't work since it's a haiku~
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Yeah. But it still sounds good, just not as good
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In the picture it says 'From joy? or hidden tears?'
You left out the second 'from' making that line 6 syllables instead of 7.
But it's a great haiku and i love the picture~
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ah typical! i think its sorted and i miss something so silly! - thanks for pointing out the error I'll get onto it and get it fixed asap!
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right its fixed now - i can't belie i didn't spot the error! thanks again for pointing it out !
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don't worry, everyone makes mistakes :3
and your welcome
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thankyou glad you like it - i did make an error but i have fixed it - missed out a word when adding the text onto the image
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well it was - it started off as a photograph of one of mine that i chose to edit in photoshop - the idea was to make this originally a very positive sparkly glitzy fame themed piece - but as i began to edit the picture it seemed a sad one so that's the theme/direction the piece took
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It's very good, and it looks positive
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