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VisualPoetress — Key To Your Heart Had Spares

Published: 2008-11-05 03:51:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 1982; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 33
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Description About: How you thought you were the only one who held the key to his heart. (Note: This is from the past, when I discovered that someone I thought I loved had, was seeing someone else on the side and maybe more).
Poem by: VisualPoetress

Deviant Stock Artist: CB Stock
Deviation Entitled: Locked Heart Located Here: [link]
Her Gallery: [link]

Song Inspiration:

"Womanizer" by Britney Spears
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Comments: 59

VisualPoetress In reply to ??? [2010-09-27 23:45:44 +0000 UTC]

It is from the past when a boyfriend was messing around behind my back.

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Miarath In reply to VisualPoetress [2010-09-28 18:52:09 +0000 UTC]

I see. I hope you're doing better now.

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VisualPoetress In reply to Miarath [2010-09-28 19:08:21 +0000 UTC]

Yep Rich made it all better

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Miarath In reply to VisualPoetress [2010-09-28 19:15:47 +0000 UTC]

That's good to hear.

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Pola-444 [2010-08-03 16:35:20 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely adore the idea!!! Well done.

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VisualPoetress In reply to Pola-444 [2010-08-04 02:30:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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Pola-444 In reply to VisualPoetress [2010-08-04 03:16:39 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome

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33M [2010-07-27 18:25:39 +0000 UTC]

awesome work

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VisualPoetress In reply to 33M [2010-07-28 02:47:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks babe

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silentfuneral [2010-07-23 06:53:43 +0000 UTC]

sooo true

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VisualPoetress In reply to silentfuneral [2010-07-23 07:05:48 +0000 UTC]

Yep

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silentfuneral In reply to VisualPoetress [2010-07-23 07:12:30 +0000 UTC]

yeppers

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touchn2btouched [2008-11-16 01:45:05 +0000 UTC]

sweet words and imagine!

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VisualPoetress In reply to touchn2btouched [2008-11-16 02:30:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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fairyfreind101 [2008-11-15 02:43:52 +0000 UTC]

wonderful, as usual

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VisualPoetress In reply to fairyfreind101 [2008-11-15 03:18:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you dear

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fairyfreind101 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-11-15 03:46:20 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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mode-de-vie [2008-11-12 04:17:34 +0000 UTC]

I love the concluding line, about how you're changing the locks to your heart. If only it were that easy. Good work.

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VisualPoetress In reply to mode-de-vie [2008-11-12 04:29:57 +0000 UTC]

Yep I wish it was that easy too

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lovelife7 [2008-11-08 09:34:18 +0000 UTC]

I weep...

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VisualPoetress In reply to lovelife7 [2008-11-08 09:40:32 +0000 UTC]

I did too when it happened to me

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1001G [2008-11-08 01:17:15 +0000 UTC]

loved the way this all rhymed.......fun

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VisualPoetress In reply to 1001G [2008-11-08 03:40:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Edie have a good weekend coming up

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1001G In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-11-08 05:20:04 +0000 UTC]

ty michelle but i doubt it dear

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VisualPoetress In reply to 1001G [2008-11-08 05:23:35 +0000 UTC]

How is she? You and the family are in my prayers

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TheseKrimzonFlames [2008-11-07 07:27:51 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE the last line.

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VisualPoetress In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2008-11-07 07:41:08 +0000 UTC]

I am glad you do

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bigsharn [2008-11-06 09:10:18 +0000 UTC]

I've been there before... it's not a good thing



Amazing writing as well, can't help but shed a tear reading it

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VisualPoetress In reply to bigsharn [2008-11-06 09:24:34 +0000 UTC]

Me too Thank you

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Aussie-Blonde [2008-11-06 08:54:35 +0000 UTC]

oh u are so good with words!

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VisualPoetress In reply to Aussie-Blonde [2008-11-06 09:20:44 +0000 UTC]

thank God rich has the only key to mine and vice versa

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Aussie-Blonde In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-11-07 04:32:53 +0000 UTC]

woohooo so u love birds getting closer to seeing each other now?

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VisualPoetress In reply to Aussie-Blonde [2008-11-07 04:48:31 +0000 UTC]

Yes my friend is coming over to see how many people it will take to move the rest of my stuff in storage.

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Aussie-Blonde In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-11-07 04:55:58 +0000 UTC]

today?

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VisualPoetress In reply to Aussie-Blonde [2008-11-07 05:19:08 +0000 UTC]

He is coming over on Wednesday to help see how many people it will take to move, he will get the people and he will drive me to where I can rent a car.

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Aussie-Blonde In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-11-07 07:27:31 +0000 UTC]

but today is Friday!!! and the 4th of November has gone!!

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VisualPoetress In reply to Aussie-Blonde [2008-11-07 07:32:24 +0000 UTC]

Wednesday coming up .... I will try to get him over sooner, but he is going fishing and he has to be in court for his divorce. But he has a truck and will help me move, he is one of my church friends. Nice older guy.

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Aussie-Blonde In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-11-08 07:09:00 +0000 UTC]

Common on Wednesday!!

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DragonsChest [2008-11-06 00:44:56 +0000 UTC]

Very well written sweetie...

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VisualPoetress In reply to DragonsChest [2008-11-06 05:37:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks hun .. some women and men are such pigs when it comes to treating their loved one right.

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DragonsChest In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-11-06 15:34:31 +0000 UTC]

I agree whole heartedly...

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thy-sun-himeko [2008-11-05 20:05:54 +0000 UTC]

Great poem like always! ^_^

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VisualPoetress In reply to thy-sun-himeko [2008-11-05 21:12:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks dear

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FireOpal14 [2008-11-05 16:39:03 +0000 UTC]

Very well done Michelle

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VisualPoetress In reply to FireOpal14 [2008-11-05 19:51:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Rhonda

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FireOpal14 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-11-06 17:31:47 +0000 UTC]

It was a great title too, Michelle, I never really thought about it like that before

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VisualPoetress In reply to FireOpal14 [2008-11-07 04:39:00 +0000 UTC]

I heard it on a comedy show joke about how he had her heart but she had many spares... I went OOOOH what a great poem title and theme

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TheDauphine [2008-11-05 16:03:26 +0000 UTC]

Amazing poem dear

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VisualPoetress In reply to TheDauphine [2008-11-05 19:50:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks hun

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TheDauphine In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-11-05 20:53:46 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome dear

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