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funkygirl4ever95lit — Broken Promise

Published: 2010-06-20 11:59:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 5212; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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TheElyzium [2011-04-10 15:54:41 +0000 UTC]

Hi! Nicely done! What font did you use?

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Aro-chan [2010-08-31 21:41:51 +0000 UTC]

hi, you've been featured here: [link]

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funkygirl4ever95lit In reply to Aro-chan [2010-09-07 12:03:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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betwixtthepages [2010-07-25 18:44:58 +0000 UTC]



I really like that the piece of paper is torn and burnt around the edges, that it's more a scrap of brokenness than something of beauty--it really helps portray the message of your poem, that broken promises are never beautiful, that broken hearts are never nice to look at or to feel.

I love the words you chose for this piece. It's always painful, to have a promise such as this broken by the one who always swore to protect your heart and soul. It's like trusting a traffic cop to do his job...only to be run over in the crosswalk on a red light. Gorgeously done.

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funkygirl4ever95lit In reply to betwixtthepages [2010-09-07 11:59:08 +0000 UTC]

lol yeah xD Thank you

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NekoJeanette [2010-06-20 17:09:50 +0000 UTC]

OOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGG!!!
That story happened to me... is so hard to handle but still
i made it this is one of my faves XD

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funkygirl4ever95lit In reply to NekoJeanette [2010-06-20 17:15:07 +0000 UTC]

thank you I'm really glad you made it through
And I'm glad it's one of your faves xD =]

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NekoJeanette In reply to funkygirl4ever95lit [2010-06-20 17:27:16 +0000 UTC]

lol <3

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