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TheElyzium [2011-04-10 15:54:41 +0000 UTC]
Hi! Nicely done! What font did you use?
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Aro-chan [2010-08-31 21:41:51 +0000 UTC]
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betwixtthepages [2010-07-25 18:44:58 +0000 UTC]
I really like that the piece of paper is torn and burnt around the edges, that it's more a scrap of brokenness than something of beauty--it really helps portray the message of your poem, that broken promises are never beautiful, that broken hearts are never nice to look at or to feel.
I love the words you chose for this piece. It's always painful, to have a promise such as this broken by the one who always swore to protect your heart and soul. It's like trusting a traffic cop to do his job...only to be run over in the crosswalk on a red light. Gorgeously done.
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