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This is for the contest 'Love Your Body' . What I was aiming for when I took the photo was to show people who 'hide' and who have low self-esteem. As for the free verse poem, these are some things that people with low confidence think about themselves or what bullies might tell their victims and manage to convince them of non-existent faults in their bodies. Just remember that nobody's perfect and if someone doesn't like you, that's their problem not yours =]

"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder"

I would like critique on this piece as long as it is constructive. Any mistakes there might be please tell me =] Do you think that this gets the point across and what can I improve in this deviation or in future ones? What about the poem? Is there something that should be changed? For all critics, thank you for taking the time to read this and the poem and writing a critique =]

Description
This is for the contest 'Love Your Body' . What I was aiming for when I took the photo was to show people who 'hide' and who have low self-esteem. As for the free verse poem, these are some things that people with low confidence think about themselves or what bullies might tell their victims and manage to convince them of non-existent faults in their bodies. Just remember that nobody's perfect and if someone doesn't like you, that's their problem not yours =]

"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder"

I would like critique on this piece as long as it is constructive. Any mistakes there might be please tell me =] Do you think that this gets the point across and what can I improve in this deviation or in future ones? What about the poem? Is there something that should be changed? For all critics, thank you for taking the time to read this and the poem and writing a critique =]