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funkygirl4ever95lit — Be Careful What You Wish For
Published: 2010-06-20 03:21:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1289; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Constructive Critique appreciated =]
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thank you very much
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I cried when I read this.
It is beautiful and a very good warning all should listen to.
You should try to get this published.
Write to live...
Live to write..
Blessed Be.
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Oh wow thank you so much! 
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Try going here [link] they have a contest and publish poems.
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Thank for the link =] I'd have to be 18 to enter though :/ but maybe in 3 years time... xD
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Try looking up teenage poetry contest on google.
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High marks.
Your profile says your from Malta. Is that the Island of Malta?
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Um yeah the island. Why? Have you been here?
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Just curious. My ancestors (according to my great great aunt) came from Malta probably during Sicilian rule (considering that side of my family is Sicilian-Italian).
Sorry to pester. It just caught my attention is all.
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oh lol no that's fine ^.^
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thank you
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I love this. Its both a poem and a story. Great job. Keep up the good work.
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I'm glad you like it 
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thank you
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You're welcome.
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this is fabulous! 
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thank you so much
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This is very beautiful. i love it and i especially like the picture. it is a nice thing to add because it really does show the poem's meaning.
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thank you so so much
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