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Published: 2018-04-24 14:17:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 1273; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 2
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Description Vortis nodded.  "That is noble."
Flyspur looked up at him and shook his head a little.  "It's not noble...It's the right thing to do."

A little sneak peek at the next chapter of Outlawed.  Yes, i am still working on it.

As you can see I've completely revamped Vortis.  
Here's the previous picture I've done of him:  chill13.deviantart.com/art/Vor…
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Comments: 26

FeatherQuilt1988 [2018-11-01 13:32:18 +0000 UTC]

Aww... I love Flyspur's quiet, thoughtful little look.

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chill13 In reply to FeatherQuilt1988 [2018-11-01 13:50:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Flyspur is not accustomed to being complimented by strangers.

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FeatherQuilt1988 In reply to chill13 [2018-11-04 14:34:09 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. Ah, you're right, with him being a Third on J'ssfloon... I tend to forget how that would've deeply shaped his outlook. Poor little fella.

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chill13 In reply to FeatherQuilt1988 [2018-11-04 15:55:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. He does not have a high opinion of himself and while Rover is always trying to boost his confidence he is pretty good at undervaluing his accomplishments.

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FeatherQuilt1988 In reply to chill13 [2018-11-18 15:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Awwww....

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AlexVanArsdale [2018-04-25 17:47:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh cool! That guy is big next to Flyspur. I like Vortis.

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Rebel-Rider [2018-04-25 04:34:23 +0000 UTC]

I keep looking at this and looking forward to the story. You've got me interested. 

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UniversesCollideInc [2018-04-25 01:52:15 +0000 UTC]

The thing I find most interesting about this conversation bit is that they're both right. Doing something because it's noble is great...but doing something because it's right is best.

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John-AM [2018-04-24 16:49:11 +0000 UTC]

Vortis looks cool! I like the isolated/emphasized shape of his eyebrows. And his more heftier build fits what he looked like in my brain while reading him. With his more squared-out facial features/head shape he now kind of reminds me of the t-rex dad on The Good Dinosaur. Just in appearance though, I imagine his voice isn't that deep.

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chill13 In reply to John-AM [2018-04-24 17:02:25 +0000 UTC]

I'm really happy with this new design. It fits his personality, and his backstory better.

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John-AM In reply to chill13 [2018-04-24 17:12:55 +0000 UTC]

It does fit him! Oh boy, I wonder what his backstory is. Has that been written about in the story already?

I also like the pin he's wearing. Looks like a... like a... like a shark Pacman!

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chill13 In reply to John-AM [2018-04-24 17:19:11 +0000 UTC]

Shark pagan! Haaa ha!

It's been hinted at. But not addressed.

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John-AM In reply to chill13 [2018-04-24 17:30:21 +0000 UTC]

Lol, maybe the aquatic version of the video game. Btw, have you seen the Wreck-IT-Ralph 2 trailer?

Ah ok. I'm curious what his backstory is. I just realized I probably missed a chapter or two. I havn't been around to do reading lately.

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chill13 In reply to John-AM [2018-04-24 20:05:10 +0000 UTC]

I have seen it. Can't wait. It looks hilarious.

Imp pretty slow...so you probably haven't.

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John-AM In reply to chill13 [2018-04-25 14:34:05 +0000 UTC]

It does! I can’t wait either. It’s funny cuz I finally saw Wreck-it Ralph like the week or two ago just before I saw the trailer for the sequel popped up on YouTube. So I’m all ready for it.

I don’t know, I think I’m slower then you are. Lol.

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chill13 In reply to John-AM [2018-04-25 15:03:29 +0000 UTC]

For the first time? What did you think?

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John-AM In reply to chill13 [2018-04-25 15:20:38 +0000 UTC]

It was awesome! I loved the movie! A movie where you go into the computer or a game is always awesome, but I also loved the characters! And the story. And who Turbo was.

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LeviaStar237 [2018-04-24 16:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Nice! I look forward to reading that!

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chill13 In reply to LeviaStar237 [2018-04-24 16:17:14 +0000 UTC]

Hope to have it soon

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Rebel-Rider [2018-04-24 14:57:06 +0000 UTC]

I really like the new design. He looks a lot stronger, very different from the prince. I wonder what they're talking about.

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chill13 In reply to Rebel-Rider [2018-04-24 15:08:17 +0000 UTC]

That is what I was hoping for. I wanted a lot of diversity in shape on these guys. And i realized Vortis design did not fit his personality....or backstory.

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Rebel-Rider In reply to chill13 [2018-04-24 15:30:59 +0000 UTC]

Ah, we need that backstory sometime. 

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chill13 In reply to Rebel-Rider [2018-04-24 15:41:57 +0000 UTC]

You will get it... I'm really liking him.

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Rebel-Rider In reply to chill13 [2018-04-24 15:42:41 +0000 UTC]

 

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ZackWriter23 [2018-04-24 14:28:03 +0000 UTC]

i let my arch nemesis live...

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chill13 In reply to ZackWriter23 [2018-04-24 14:44:49 +0000 UTC]

Heh, perhaps

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