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ValGravel — Unbreakable Bond

Published: 2011-01-22 01:25:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1978; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 24
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Description Contest short story:

I slowly push the door to my room open.

I know it's passed midnight and I don't expect to find anybody awake in the castle. Even the guard that met me at the gate seemed to be fighting against sleep to the best of his abilities.

I detach the button that is keeping my hooded cape on my shoulders, it falls to the floor with a muffled sound, it's so heavy due the rain that has been pouring on me for the past hours.

I light a candle to better see around my room and there they are...lying on the large bed next to each to other...such a lovely sight. Slowly I make my way to the bed, not wanting to wake them up, but my husband opens his weary eyes, turns, and smiles to me saying:

"Welcome home darling... I believe you are a little late."
"I know, I'm sorry. The rain delayed the horses, we we're forced to take shelter for a few hours." I gently stroked my daughter's hair.
"When she heard the servants say this morning that you we're coming home tonight, she insisted on staying up to greet you at the castle gate..."
"...and you allowed her to remain awake for so long..."
"You know me, I have a hard time saying no to my little princess."

So true. Being the leader of the Grey Wardens of Ferelden keeps my away from my home more often that I would like to admit. I rarely see my husband Alistair and my daughter Eleanor... but seeing them tonight, how much they missed me and how much I longed to see them again...I know that I am loved and that this family is held together tightly by a bond that will never be broken. I will not fail them like I failed my mother and father, I will protect them with my life.

You guys would not believe how much time I spent on this...I thought I was gonna grab my computer and hurl it out of the window...but I didn't...Also, I thought I was going to hate this drawing in the end, but I do not...

This was put together as my entry for 's contest featuring a Grey Warden and their family some years in the future. Since I always liked the idea of marrying Alistair as a Cousland lady, I paired my Camilla with Alistair some years in the future (about 5 or something). I had a hard time with the kid I have to admit. She's still looks a little off to me. I didn't know if I was gonna give her her mother's dark brown hair or her father's golden locks, in the end, I made her a color of blond slightly different from her fathers. I colored Al's shirt in blue because all the noble clothing is Dragon Age is VERY BRIGHTLY COLORED, and he mentions once in the game that he likes purple...so, besides, with the sheets, and his shirt white like I wanted it to be in the beginning, it would have been too bland.

I SUCK at shading...that's why this took me so long to do. For the love of me, I just don't understand it...it's not that hard though, pick a light source and stick with it. I watch anime with much more attention now because I want to see how it's done, but it just doesn't register with me (you should have seen how long it took me to get the right pillow's shading like I wanted to). Overall even I will probably not win the contest (I never do), I still had a blast with this and I am very satisfied with the results. I'm trying to change my style, making my eyes less cartoony and my heads less square, not quite there yet... but still, not too bad right...

-Thanks for looking!-
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Comments: 29

tobi0crazy [2011-02-11 11:24:21 +0000 UTC]

I understand the wanting to throw your computer at the wall believe me there are a few time i would have done that to mine. But its a great pic and i love the lil story with it. I wish more people would do that. I think it adds something more to the pic.

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ValGravel In reply to tobi0crazy [2011-02-11 12:50:17 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you I know I'm not alone, when you work on something for a long time...you tend to just want to get it done no matter what the cost...But I'm glad I stuck to it and I really do love the finished drawing and all the positive feedback I'm getting for it. Thanks again

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NIELSPETERDEJONG [2011-02-04 22:02:21 +0000 UTC]

^_^ I imagine my Lyna and Alistair to also have a child together ^_^ I don't care what they say, a happy ending with a kid is just too darn cute!

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ValGravel In reply to NIELSPETERDEJONG [2011-02-05 04:10:57 +0000 UTC]

Of course it is! Besides, they say in the game that Grey Wardens "probably" can't have children together. Phooey, if you want Alistair and your Warden to have kids, I say go for it

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to ValGravel [2011-02-05 08:07:53 +0000 UTC]

Indeed!

I'm almost afraid to ask, but do you also take requests, as in draw a picture of my Lyna and their two kids for me?

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ValGravel In reply to NIELSPETERDEJONG [2011-02-05 13:57:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow. No one has ever asked requests from me before. I tried once on my journal, but no one answered. Sure! I could try to draw your family for you! However, I don't know when I'll do it because I'm busy with another project right now (another Dragon Age DA contest), but send me your information of what you want (I'm not too good at backgrounds) and some reference if you have any, by sending me a note and I'll see what I can do

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to ValGravel [2011-02-05 14:37:49 +0000 UTC]

That's great!

And don't worry, I don't mind waiting a little Just work on it once you have more time ^_^ And don't rush it, I don't mind waiting a little!

Tell me if you received it, and if you have enough information with it? ^_^

Niels

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Lamaraloon [2011-02-04 15:01:52 +0000 UTC]

I like your picture It's nice to see many possible takes on relationships with Alistair. I love that your couple have romantic and sweet relationships. Love the tender look in Alistair's eyes and adorable little princess They seem like a perfect happy family, and it makes me happy to look at them.

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ValGravel In reply to Lamaraloon [2011-02-04 15:33:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it's nice to see so many possible couple combinations and outcomes for Alistair Thanks for the nice comment, I'm proud of this picture and I'm happy to see it's getting such positive feedback.

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dashassfrost [2011-02-04 13:14:10 +0000 UTC]

Nice composition and very cute characters I like this nice guy! ;D
Very calm picture.

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ValGravel In reply to dashassfrost [2011-02-04 15:34:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much It's calm yes, but I had a lot of energy into making it (translations: it gave me a lot of problems...)

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dashassfrost In reply to ValGravel [2011-02-07 13:53:20 +0000 UTC]

No wonder... But it was really worthy!

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LadyTenebraeTabris [2011-01-22 17:56:37 +0000 UTC]

Oooohhh! Sweeeet! And it's coming so much warmth from it!
Emphasized by that wonderful story!

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ValGravel In reply to LadyTenebraeTabris [2011-01-22 19:44:33 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe, he's such a sweet character, it's easy to write a sweet story with him as a character

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LadyTenebraeTabris In reply to ValGravel [2011-01-24 21:53:04 +0000 UTC]

Aye! <3 He is!
But writing such a story isn't that easy, it is, because you're so good at it!

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ValGravel In reply to LadyTenebraeTabris [2011-01-25 01:00:18 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thank you so much

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bukittyan [2011-01-22 15:29:33 +0000 UTC]

It's really nice! Good luck with the contest!

As for shading, I'd suggest looking more at real life, or paintings and photographs rather than anime or cartoons. You'll get a better feel for how light works that way.

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ValGravel In reply to bukittyan [2011-01-22 19:43:59 +0000 UTC]

Huum, paintings huh, never thought about that. Thanks for the tip

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Dino-Myte [2011-01-22 15:11:09 +0000 UTC]

this is very sweet love it

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Amarevia [2011-01-22 14:18:32 +0000 UTC]

I still don't know much about this game, but this pic is very cute. I like the expressions.

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ValGravel In reply to Amarevia [2011-01-22 19:43:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Even if you don't really know the game, the fact that you took the time to comment means a lot

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ThePerrperr [2011-01-22 06:57:00 +0000 UTC]

Heartwarming

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Burnet9 [2011-01-22 02:54:36 +0000 UTC]

D'aaaaaaw! It's soooo cute I love it!

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ValGravel In reply to Burnet9 [2011-01-22 05:37:38 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe, thank you very much, so happy that you like it.

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Bella-Dean [2011-01-22 02:03:13 +0000 UTC]

Aw, cute. I always liked the idea of Alistair having a daughter more than a son. I love that you named her after Eleanor.

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ValGravel In reply to Bella-Dean [2011-01-22 05:37:02 +0000 UTC]

Well, in most of the fics that I read about Alistair having a kid, he always ended up naming his son "Dunca" which was what you would describe as a father figure for him. Decided my Cousland lady was going to name her daughter after her mother, it's only fitting.

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Frivole-Luciole In reply to Bella-Dean [2011-01-22 02:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Awww, cute.
Vraiment mimi, j'aime bien ce qui s'en dégage

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NoAng3l [2011-01-22 01:56:27 +0000 UTC]

Awwww, our very first entry
I think the pic is quite fine, you're just too big of a critic for yourself, we all are .

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ValGravel In reply to NoAng3l [2011-01-22 05:37:23 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I guess we are, but I am happy with how it turned out in the end

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