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Reaper1998 [2024-10-08 02:57:18 +0000 UTC]
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thaliangel [2015-04-08 20:00:26 +0000 UTC]
The atmosphere of the piece is very cute and flows together. I suppose the things that throw my eye off a little are a few anatomy hiccups (like the differing lengths of Roy's arms and their lengths in comparison to his torso), and the vagueness of the wooden object upon which the three characters sit. If, say, the side that they sit on was directly in the lighting, but the vertical edge were in shadow, that would help them look more stable upon their seat.
I know this piece is older, but I thought I'd leave a comment anyway ^_^
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MinixLiky In reply to thaliangel [2015-04-11 03:14:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your critique,now that I see in more detail, i have found the same mistakes that you told me to do,with regard to the way which i've drawn the characters(that were quite disproportionate ) i have been studying a bit on the human anatomy to improve the disproportions that I have committed, in the colors and the shades that I have occupied in this drawing, really to was very strange, think that I have occupied the colors too loudly and that is too blurred
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Hantari [2014-10-16 15:51:44 +0000 UTC]
amasing)
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MinixLiky In reply to Werehorse89 [2014-09-01 23:31:05 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'm glad that it you liked
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2013Fangirl0511 [2014-09-01 00:17:39 +0000 UTC]
Awww, Roy Mustang and Riza Hawkeye!!!
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