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Magpie8spook [2009-04-29 02:17:06 +0000 UTC]
And what, pray tell, will we find there,
On yon island set with so grim an air?
But lead on captain, lead on!
I enjoy this series a lot.
And I'm not just making this up, am I, or seeing things, I mean? This island has definitely got a personality, and it is not a happy one. It's alive. *shudders*
I really like the way you've done the forest here, all bright and dark and shadowy, depending where you look. It's detailed, but in a background-ish sort of way. Very fitting.
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travisJhanson In reply to Magpie8spook [2009-04-30 15:02:02 +0000 UTC]
i am so glad to hear that- i think that this will be a fantastic adventure as well
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travisJhanson In reply to Derfblue [2009-04-30 15:03:23 +0000 UTC]
then careful we should be
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AaronHoustonArt [2009-04-28 20:30:12 +0000 UTC]
looks great man. see, i told you the bears is the one you should go with first. these are alot of fun. great work
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Murasaki99 [2009-04-28 03:54:54 +0000 UTC]
This is coming along really well. The rolling sea and fiery volcano give a good sense of movement. The landscape could definitely be called "forbidding" with all those frowning rock formations. Very cool!!
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travisJhanson In reply to Murasaki99 [2009-04-30 15:04:32 +0000 UTC]
it is - it has been very healing as well
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frozen208 [2009-04-28 00:34:28 +0000 UTC]
I think this ties with The Hunt as my favorite drawings. Are you going to add in any sea gulls flying around the boat?
Is your back better now?
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travisJhanson In reply to frozen208 [2009-04-30 15:05:19 +0000 UTC]
i don't know i have not yet decided about the gulls- (rats with wings)- maybe...
as for the back it is improving- yet i still have to be careful
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Dieman [2009-04-27 21:19:51 +0000 UTC]
(from crows' nest) CAPTAIN! Seems like there's some sort of fire going on up on top of that mountain, there! (Has a very good grasp of the obvious)
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travisJhanson In reply to Dieman [2009-04-30 15:05:47 +0000 UTC]
that's why your up in the crows nest
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Dieman In reply to travisJhanson [2009-04-30 18:38:09 +0000 UTC]
On a slightly more serious note... the trees in front seem a little too vague, I kinda feel like they should have individual outlines as well... they just don't sit right with me, anyways!
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travisJhanson In reply to Dieman [2009-04-30 21:35:42 +0000 UTC]
and why does it have to be serious- remember what happened to the last guy who was "so serious" he found out about the pencil trick.
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Dieman In reply to travisJhanson [2009-05-01 00:07:37 +0000 UTC]
...... He wasn't serious, boss. He was a friend I made when I was on another ship that harboured in Gotham. He was just a little too eager to obey orders.
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Dieman In reply to travisJhanson [2009-05-01 00:51:47 +0000 UTC]
That's why I'm a bit of a rebel. One can never be a "boy who pulls someone's ears off" because such a task has a high probability of disaster. That's why I declined your offer to be an "enforcer/guy who dies in a battle right away because he has no personality".
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jonepone In reply to Dieman [2009-04-27 22:03:31 +0000 UTC]
*rubs my sleepy eyes* what's all this shouting about then? You woke me up and it isn't even my watch yet!
oh..OH MY! A firemountain, well spotted *waves to you*
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Dieman In reply to jonepone [2009-04-28 03:04:04 +0000 UTC]
YO HO HO HO I have coffee on~...!!
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jonepone In reply to Dieman [2009-04-28 11:18:17 +0000 UTC]
*gestures overanimated thumbs up* I'm coming up!!
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Dieman In reply to jonepone [2009-04-30 18:33:29 +0000 UTC]
LET'S DANCE!!!
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jonepone In reply to Dieman [2009-04-30 18:56:04 +0000 UTC]
AYE!!
just let me have some coffee first - still sleepy...
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travisJhanson In reply to Derfblue [2009-04-16 19:13:34 +0000 UTC]
Careful how you steer her than
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Draggah-N [2009-04-15 02:11:39 +0000 UTC]
I like the faces and how you did the tiers of the jungle. I know this isnβt finished yet but the volcano could use some reds I think. Do you plan to subtly highlight the faces at all? I think that would work really well, but itβs hard to really say at this stage.
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HenrikeDijkstra [2009-04-14 21:35:17 +0000 UTC]
Crew: wow, how are we every going to find that treasure here in this wilderness!
Captain Trav: Trust in me treasure map mates!
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oesalces [2009-04-14 21:34:42 +0000 UTC]
you did a great job here.
just a small remark. the wind is blowing from left to right (according to the ship's sails and the smoke of the volcano) but the flag of the ship seems going against the wind. which could not possibly happen... ^_^
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travisJhanson In reply to oesalces [2009-04-16 19:17:59 +0000 UTC]
I noticed that too- I was hoping for a high cross wind- I'll have that fixed top shape
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AaronHoustonArt [2009-04-14 16:56:19 +0000 UTC]
i see faces in them rocks..... looks good man.
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Grinning-Oni [2009-04-14 15:50:04 +0000 UTC]
I like the faces in the rocks.
I do feel you should be able to see more of the shoreline, like beach or cliffs rather than going straight into the trees.
Also I'm not entirely digging the trees in the midbackground that have been shadowed out, I think that's kind of an abbrupt transition and would suggest colouring them (and let the gradation in colour show the depth), rather than leaving them a black.
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travisJhanson In reply to Grinning-Oni [2009-04-14 19:58:40 +0000 UTC]
part of the problem is that I had not added the shadows on the trees to help the depth, I am adding that now, and I think it adds the depth you are talking about. though there is still much to do.
As for the trees in the back that are black I have some ideas on how I am planning on tackling them - I do not want them to be jet black but I do have some plans.
Thanks for the notes -
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travisJhanson In reply to Asarea [2009-04-14 19:59:36 +0000 UTC]
they are worked on a another layer, usually the line art layer itself. I find working in several layers and treating colors as objects allows me to do all sorts of things
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travisJhanson In reply to Murasaki99 [2009-04-14 19:59:59 +0000 UTC]
i'll check for repellent, you never know what your going to run into here
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travisJhanson In reply to Murasaki99 [2009-04-16 19:21:26 +0000 UTC]
it will prob be needed and a few gallons of bactine
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travisJhanson In reply to Murasaki99 [2009-04-17 05:40:55 +0000 UTC]
They still have off- great stuff-
oh yeah one would have to watch for those pesky ninjas
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travisJhanson In reply to eaross [2009-04-14 05:18:49 +0000 UTC]
well it is a mysterious island and all mysterious islands need mysterious faces do they not?
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