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Tetiel — Sailor Ariel
Published: 2009-04-30 20:44:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 5504; Favourites: 259; Downloads: 286
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Commission for who has been really wonderful for commissioning me so much lately. It's actually for for her birthday so happy belated birthday to you! I really hope you like it
I thought I'd have it done last night but it didn't turn out that way 
Anyways I tried spreading the legs out more as well as trying more dynamic poses. I still fail miserably at feet v_v Oh yeah and for the record this is NOT Ariel from The Little Mermaid xD
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i wish i could draw like you. its so nice!! you deserve a dd for this its beautful!!
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Yay for another sailor.. Still waiting for my sailor dozen..
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omigourd.
purple overloaaad~! X3~~~~~~~~
she's really cute and adorable~♥!
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Hehehe yep Purple overload again! Thank you
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Hahahah!!! She looks like she is playfully skipping!! n__n Adorable!!:heaHahahah!!! She looks like she is playfully skipping!! n__n Adorable!!
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Hehe thank you! 
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Uwaaahhh!!! Sooo cute!!!!
She is soo adorable! I love her smile and her pose!
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She's so~ sweet~!! ^o^
And the pose looks awesome~!! ^__^
Cute as always~! <3
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You're welcome~! ^_^
I always love your work! <3
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Wow So Cute! The way you color and the way you draw it is very pretty just like the ones in your gallery.
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the way you color and the way you use the colors is always so so so pretty. <333 i really like the face in this, i love the angle you chose and of course the facial expression is so cute! <3 and i love all of the movement in her pose and her hair, i do like the more dynamic poses you're trying! ^^
As for things that can maybe be improved on.. i think her legs do look a bit awkward the way they're positioned, like if one was positioned a bit more similar to the other I think her pose/action would look more fluid and realistic. As for the feet, maybe if there was more definition from the ankle to where the foot begins it would help? ( i'm terrible at trying to explain things, i'm so sorry, this is why i don't give the proper critique haha 
I hope that sounds fair and makes sense and maybe help. Again I'm sorry I'm not better at explaining, it's easier for me to draw what I'm trying to say. XD;
But yeah, still overall it's another wonderful picture~ <33 I'm really excited to see how you improve as your style is just so cute and pretty!
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Aww thank you ^_^ Yeah I had the worst problem with the legs and the feet suggestion is actually really great. I think that'd help a lot and that's what's killing it. Ankles are good xD I try for references but I tell ya, I search for feet on deviantart and all I see are bottoms of feet. I don't want those!
Thank you so much for the critique 
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ohhhh yeah, i didn't think about red liningit.. maybe i'll try that next time!
and ahh i'm glad!! and since i'm being all over sensitive lately i try to sound as positive as possible in my critiques so i hope that comes across too. XD;
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as usual, i love how you color your drawings. For some reason i can't mix colors like this X|
Well done C;
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Aww thank you!
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Very nice pose, and the colors are great like always, Tetiel~~ Nice job~
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Thank you!
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awww cutie! I hope you make a collage with all of them sometime, although I know that will take a hell of a lot of time
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Oh I might. Titan actually wants me to make more eventually so maybe I can make a huge wallpaper for her. Naturally, I'd do that for free since I already drew all the images xD
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oh okay i'll view all the rest till the big finish!
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Whoa, that would be sweet.
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Oh just to let you know, if you did want me to create a desktop background or something out of all these, I'd be perfectly happy to for free since after all, you've been so kind to commission me so much
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Oh wow...that would be super-sweet. You don't have to, though. I might wait until you at least do Miranda, though, since the three + Miranda are the senshi in the first arc.
Or might just wait until I'v commissioned all of them...
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ph33r the Moon Senshi, creating angst, drama, and additional character development for Chibi-Usa and Helios, and later the Asteroids!
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Hehe I always did like red hair
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Thankfully, she does not have to sit in the hallway.
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Aww thank you
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Feet are really tough. I do like that you tried a different type of pose, it doesn't look fluid though, it helps to think about where the body is in space, like is she running or jumping or standing because that would make a difference. The angle also makes her legs look a little flat in comparison to the rest of the piece, but it's not all that noticeable. I try to give a non bias crit. I hope it helps. *hugs* She is very cute though~
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Oh god yes they are. Bane of my existence I swear! I think it has to do with me disliking feet in general xD Anyways, thank you for the critique! She's meant to be jumping and halfway there to making an epic sailor pose
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Oh believe me, I know I haven't gotten it write when I draw, but I am good at spotting it. All of those art classes I suppose. So...can I interest you in maybe some buttons of my SM busts for some of your little commissions pixel avatars?
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Oh yeah, sure. I'd be happy to. I need more practice with pixeling anyways xD
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Weee~ What would you like? Say 2 buttons per pixel cause I believe you said they were $5-6. Do you have an idea of which ones you'd like? I have at least two pixel ideas, but it could easily be more. I just love how you do them.
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Oh yeah that's fair. Are these just plain and unanimated?
*takes a look at your buttons*
I'd love to have one of Neptune, Saturn, that one of Neptune and Uranus, Oh, and do you have a button of Cosmos? ^_^ Just let me know what you want pixeled
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I do and does it cost more to get it animated? Probably, right? I would really like one of my OC Sailortitan (she's the for sure one). I'm trying to think of which version I'd like the most. And yes I do have a button of Cosmos I also plan on getting the inner senshi done this week and Super and Eternal and Chibichibimoon.
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Yeah typically five bucks more to have animation. Chibi Chibi Moon will be adorable I bet
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Venus is done as you saw. I'm currently working on my Sailorearth entry for drachearannak's contest. But then I'll be slowly working through the inners, then Chibichibi and then the last two Moon ones for the full set.
Okay. Which would be easier for you with ball hair or a braid?
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Oh either one. Usually all animating is, is just blinking and maybe some sparkles ^_^
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