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Published: 2011-03-30 00:56:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 971; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 8
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Description When the mists of darkness grow thick,
And you become lost because you let go,
You fall on your knees and weep, ready to give up,
Then comes the light and you hear a voice say, "Take my hand."

A mother cries herself to sleep at night,
Try as she might, it's just never enough,
"I'm not strong enough," she says, "to raise my children alone."
Then a feeling of calm overcomes her grief as He says, "Take my hand."

A pioneer trudges through the snow on bare feet,
Again to leave his home, his temple, and a piece of himself. . .
Along the path his baby boy is buried,
He too loses strength and falls in the snow,
As he's about to let go, he hears the words, "Take my hand."

A soldier fighting in a war most fierce,
Must also wage a battle deep within himself: one of faith,
Yet he's losing the battle, losing sight of the things he thought he knew,
Then he knows, when a voice breaks through his turmoil saying, "Take my hand."

A small girl hides in a closet as she tremors with fear,
The bruises are still fresh from where her father hit her there,
As her tears flow she wonders why she even lives, why no one loves her,
Then she looks up and sees only love and light pouring from the man who says to her, "Take my hand."

A man stands on the edge of a rooftop,
He's drowning from the deep depression inside,
On the edge of his whole world, about to take that fateful, step he stops,
In his head he sees the faces of his children, and he hears a voice say, "Take my hand."

He says to us all in our darkest hours,
"Take my hand, and I will lift you up.
Take my hand, and I will show you the way.
Take my hand, I will not leave you behind.
Take my hand, you are not alone.
Take my hand, I have not forgotten you my child.
Take my hand, for I love you.
All you must do is take my hand."
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Comments: 64

Golden-Leaves [2011-05-20 20:37:37 +0000 UTC]

I am Mormon also, and I found great inspiration and joy in this piece. I guessed what religion you were from that beautiful picture above.

Write on!

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Golden-Leaves [2011-05-20 20:59:08 +0000 UTC]

Ya, you're right I am! And then there's the reference to the pioneer, and the temple (Nauvoo) in that one stanza.

I'm so glad that you were inspired by this piece of work! I truly am.

Haha No worries, I intend to. Though, I'm very hesitant to write about gospel topics because they're so sacred and I don't want to mess anything up, or say something wrong, y'know?

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Golden-Leaves In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-20 21:04:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I know exactly. ANd then there's always the worry someone will get mad about something, and say something disrespectful, etc.

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Golden-Leaves [2011-05-20 21:17:08 +0000 UTC]

(Oh, and thanks so much for the fav AND adding me to your watch! )

Ya, exactly. I'm kinda more afraid that I might mislead someone by my words though. :/ By accident.

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Golden-Leaves In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-20 21:18:13 +0000 UTC]

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AussieJimfan [2011-05-19 03:57:33 +0000 UTC]

i love this poem and picture.

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to AussieJimfan [2011-05-19 03:58:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, I'm glad you do! (=

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AussieJimfan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-19 04:03:07 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome. always will i love Him more than one can imagine

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to AussieJimfan [2011-05-19 04:04:36 +0000 UTC]

As it should rightly be. Because He loves each of us more than we can possibly comprehend! ^_^

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AussieJimfan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-19 04:05:57 +0000 UTC]

yes, that is true! i too write poetry and thanks to him i can finally express his love and goodness to others. but not for my me but for him im not taking any credit but im giving it to him.

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to AussieJimfan [2011-05-19 21:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Hehe Well, He does give us all our gifts, so we should be very grateful to Him for that, and for everything we have because we wouldn't have ANY of it if it weren't for Him.

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AussieJimfan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-19 22:21:48 +0000 UTC]

Amen to that! and that is why i wrote this poem called "I gave you everything" as my journal and i shal make it as my art of poetry

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Yobi-chan [2011-04-08 19:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Your poem made my eyes fill with tears <3

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Yobi-chan [2011-04-08 23:49:59 +0000 UTC]

(= It did? Thats so amazing. Thank you for telling me that. I'm glad it touched you.

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Yobi-chan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-04-13 19:47:46 +0000 UTC]

It did <3 deeply~~ You're a very great writer (:

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Yobi-chan [2011-04-13 20:32:59 +0000 UTC]

That makes me very happy. ^_^ And I thank you, I much appreciate that. (= I hope to become an even better one someday.

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Yobi-chan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-04-27 21:07:51 +0000 UTC]

You will! You've got a really great talent! No exaggeration! x3

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Yobi-chan [2011-04-28 02:33:17 +0000 UTC]

Haha Thats wonderful to hear that you think so! ^_^ Truly, I'm very grateful for it.

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Yobi-chan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-04-30 08:35:13 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, that's good :3 I'm happy I could make you happy : D Have no one ever told you what I told you? :3 I bet you must've heard it from others, too : D

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Yobi-chan [2011-05-01 00:21:21 +0000 UTC]

I have heard similar things from ppl before, but coming from a stranger, its a little different. And I absolutely love feedback! = D So getting it, particularly positive feedback, makes me really happy.

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Yobi-chan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-01 10:04:22 +0000 UTC]

Aw, that's great! Now I'm more happy I wrote it x3

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Yobi-chan [2011-05-03 00:20:30 +0000 UTC]

Hehe You and me both. ^.^

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Yobi-chan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-03 19:18:17 +0000 UTC]

yes x3

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Yobi-chan [2011-05-03 23:18:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness that emote is amazing!!! *o*

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Yobi-chan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-04 14:50:31 +0000 UTC]

It is, right?? >w<

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Yobi-chan [2011-05-05 01:44:26 +0000 UTC]

I wanna try it! Wait... how do you do it again?

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Yobi-chan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-06 22:19:29 +0000 UTC]

furryglompplz x3

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Yobi-chan [2011-05-07 21:41:03 +0000 UTC]

like this? furryglompplz

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Yobi-chan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-07 21:51:30 +0000 UTC]

aw, no D: You don't know how to make icons? D: : icon[insertsomethinghere]: so it'll be : iconfurryglompplz : without spaces :3

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Yobi-chan [2011-05-07 22:02:56 +0000 UTC]

Nope, I've only been a part of DA for about a month. So I'm still learning! Thank you! Lets see if I can do it now! like that? XD I did!

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Yobi-chan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-07 22:14:09 +0000 UTC]

You did it!! >w< Great!
About a month? Awesome! x3 You'll get to know everything soon enough x3 I have to ask my sister for icons, and she's three years younger o3o

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Yobi-chan [2011-05-07 23:02:12 +0000 UTC]

Haha Hey, there's no shame in that if you ask me.

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Yobi-chan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-07 23:53:32 +0000 UTC]

No, there's not.. I think x3 I've learned, I just don't remember xD

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Yobi-chan [2011-05-09 01:18:37 +0000 UTC]

haha Yep, that'll totally end up being my prob to! XD

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Yobi-chan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-10 20:40:12 +0000 UTC]

Probably xD

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Yobi-chan [2011-05-10 22:42:39 +0000 UTC]

Its quite tragic.. haha

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Yobi-chan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-11 16:46:11 +0000 UTC]

yup o3o But tragedy makes a non-monotone life o3o

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Yobi-chan [2011-05-11 21:09:23 +0000 UTC]

Indeed, its true. That's why there needs to be conflict in any good story.

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Yobi-chan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-14 21:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Yup, or it would be so boring you could easily fall asleep at night if you had trouble sleeping... .______.

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to Yobi-chan [2011-05-14 22:23:07 +0000 UTC]

Haha Well, that would be nice at least. XD I have trouble falling asleep.

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Yobi-chan In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-05-15 21:03:23 +0000 UTC]

Me too xD I want such a book now~~

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offscreen-scream [2011-04-07 23:24:14 +0000 UTC]

That is very good.

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to offscreen-scream [2011-04-07 23:56:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, I'm glad you think so. I was so worried when I was writing it.

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offscreen-scream In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-04-10 23:35:55 +0000 UTC]

Well, it's one of the best things I've ever read.

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to offscreen-scream [2011-04-11 03:24:40 +0000 UTC]

You seriously believe that?

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offscreen-scream In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-04-11 03:37:50 +0000 UTC]

You bet I do!

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to offscreen-scream [2011-04-11 03:42:59 +0000 UTC]

I'm so touched! ^.^ That's some very high esteem for a writer. So I'm so glad you think so and I thank you very very much for that compliment! (=

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offscreen-scream In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-04-22 20:47:45 +0000 UTC]

No problem!!
(Keep it up!)

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Tara-the-Brave In reply to offscreen-scream [2011-04-22 21:50:01 +0000 UTC]

Hehe All right, I think I can do that. (:

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offscreen-scream In reply to Tara-the-Brave [2011-04-23 16:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Good.

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