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Description Two hours ago, Pete had been pulled gasping from a tank of jelly. Now he sat in an immaculate office, wearing borrowed clothes with his employer staring him down from the far side of a granite slab desk top.

"Welcome back, Pete." Terrence Carter, syndicate heavyweight and the man Pete ran data packets for. "I must say, you look better than you did the last time I saw you."

Pete sat straight in his chair, tentatively rolling and flexing muscle that remembered thirty eight years of abusive mileage, but didn't feel a days wear and tear. "What happened Terry, what's going on?"

"You were running a very special package for me Pete, one we couldn't copy, one we had to risk transporting as original data." Terry paused, pulling at each of his white shirt cuffs in turn, evening their length against the dark fabric of his suit. "You had an incident Pete, for some reason you seem to have hidden my package from me. I don't know exactly what went wrong in your head, Pete, but when we finally... recovered you, what remained of you no longer had my package installed. We want it back, Pete, I want it back."

"What are you talking about? I don't remember that, I'm not on an assignment yet." Pete shook his head, his face a puzzled frown. Sometimes he had episodes if he stored data too long, there could be cross talk, and data fragments without context drifting in his head caused all sorts of unpredictable things, some unpleasant, but he couldn't remember anything about this.

"Of course you don't remember, you're not the Pete that carried. We just finished growing you from the backup sample we took before we briefed the original you." Terry pushed himself back from his desk, steepling his fingers. "We keep insurance in case things like this happen, in case we lose a good carrier, especially one with a package installed.

"So I'm a snapshot of myself, from before I left?"

"You're a cleaned up version of the old you, rechipped and hot-wired to carry. You were the best we had Pete, so I was a little disappointed when you betrayed me."

Pete ran a hand across the fresh stubble on his head. "What do you want from me now?"

Terry's eyes narrowed to slits. "I want you to figure out where you put my package Pete, I want it delivered."

"Wait a minute, if I'm a snapshot from before the briefing, I don't have any memory of what happened later. That knowledge died with the original Pete," he shuddered involuntarily, "I mean the original me."

"True. You don't know exactly what you did, but you can figure it out. Situational familiarity, behavioral predispositions, pattern predicability. Faced with the same objective, and in the same circumstances, you'll know what you would have done, where you would have gone. Quite frankly, you're the only one who can figure out what the hell you've done with my package, and I suggest you put some effort into doing just that if you want to get another day older."

Pete regarded his employer as he weighed his options. He couldn't help but wonder what bled out of the package he'd been carrying to make him want to risk crossing the syndicate. He also wondered whether he'd been dead when they'd found him, or if death had come later.

One thing was certain, he was being given a second chance, and a short leash. He'd better be very careful not to slip up again, one way or the other.
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SRSmith In reply to ??? [2019-06-23 15:53:41 +0000 UTC]

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Lady-Pilot In reply to SRSmith [2019-07-03 16:27:10 +0000 UTC]

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SRSmith In reply to Lady-Pilot [2019-07-16 15:50:33 +0000 UTC]

Richard Morgan's books sparked the same paradigm shift for me later that Gibson's did early on. Altered Carbon/Fallen Angels/Woken Furies are brilliant, and his Thirteen/Black Man book is similar but different, and equally brilliant. I've picked up but not started reading the sequel to that Thin Air.

Neal Stephenson's Snow Crash andΒ Cryptonomicon are brilliant.

There are so many others, but those would be a good start!

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Lady-Pilot In reply to SRSmith [2019-07-28 20:42:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the insight!

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SRSmith In reply to Lady-Pilot [2019-07-29 05:44:02 +0000 UTC]

I hope you find something in there to enjoy!

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Friend-of-the-turtle [2009-08-14 13:53:15 +0000 UTC]

the title made me laugh, after i'd read the work. I likes it

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SRSmith In reply to Friend-of-the-turtle [2009-08-14 14:22:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment and - I'm glad you liked it!

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Friend-of-the-turtle In reply to SRSmith [2009-08-16 17:37:25 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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Shards-of-Shame [2009-06-16 04:08:29 +0000 UTC]

Another nice one to read. Gah, I've missed your writing so much. I will catch up one of these days!

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SRSmith In reply to Shards-of-Shame [2009-06-16 04:35:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I've missed your reading!

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Mantisss [2009-04-19 00:59:36 +0000 UTC]

Another enjoyable story from my favourite DA author that I'm glad I took the time to read

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SRSmith In reply to Mantisss [2009-04-20 00:26:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much - I appreciate you taking the time to read it too!

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LadyCrimson [2009-03-15 10:11:03 +0000 UTC]

I'd love to know how this story would continue. It definitely has potential for added length

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SRSmith In reply to LadyCrimson [2009-03-16 03:39:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I don't know that I could continue this story (without ruining it), but there's a good probability that the characters and tech will show up in longer works in the future.

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LadyCrimson In reply to SRSmith [2009-03-16 08:37:39 +0000 UTC]

I guess I was just very curious to see how it would continue

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SRSmith In reply to LadyCrimson [2009-03-16 14:19:04 +0000 UTC]

Who knows - maybe one day!

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daddio301 [2008-08-08 03:49:47 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!!! This is exactly the kind of thing that I like, especially the whole idea of a person (or maybe he's a robot, I love the ambiguity) being able to carry data literally is cool, along with the idea of creating a copy of someone from earlier using backup data. My favorite part is that I REALLY want to know more about the syndicate, the package, who the characters are, and evrything else about this universe.

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SRSmith In reply to daddio301 [2008-08-08 04:12:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! There are a lot of elements in this that I want to explore in more depth, and that's going to require a much longer piece. I don't have any idea when the mood will strike to write one, but I will.

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daddio301 In reply to SRSmith [2008-08-08 04:18:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh, well, it could require a long piece, or a bunch of shorter pieces. Either way, it would be awesome.

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batousaijin [2008-06-21 09:10:05 +0000 UTC]

influenced by johnny mnemonic?

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SRSmith In reply to batousaijin [2008-06-21 10:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Maybe on some level, but that wasn't really what I was focused on. The idea of enhancing one's body to carry data really is just a logical extension of the USB key on a lanyard, and it's a theme that gets quite a bit of play. That element was just a sideline to the 'grow a backup of your staff in case something bad happens to them' theme that the story formed around.

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batousaijin In reply to SRSmith [2008-06-21 14:37:25 +0000 UTC]

cool

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lambs2ndseal [2008-06-21 06:14:18 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

I like the flash fiction myself, but im not too good at it

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SRSmith In reply to lambs2ndseal [2008-06-21 10:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. It's taken quite a bit of practice to get here myself, I wasn't too good at it when I started.

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Asune-chan [2008-06-21 04:28:48 +0000 UTC]

Very eerie and fascinating. Where did you come up with such a (I'm at a loss for words) unique and original idea?

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SRSmith In reply to Asune-chan [2008-06-21 04:35:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Most of my ideas spark off of an article I've read in a magazine, or a news story or snippet of a conversation, and then that seed churns around in my brain until something like this forms. The original bit that caught my attention likely had little to do with where the story ended up, it just started a cycle.

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senoritafish [2008-06-21 03:11:23 +0000 UTC]

Enjoyed a great deal; thanks! I know I read some thing of yours once before, but I can't think why I haven't haven't read more of it.

You know, I always kind of forget DeviantArt has writing too (even tho' I've submitted a couple of thing myself). So I may need to start watching some writers.

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SRSmith In reply to senoritafish [2008-06-21 03:47:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, for the comment, the 's and . There are some really good writers on here, it's hard to keep up with all the talent.

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chocolatesa [2008-06-21 02:36:44 +0000 UTC]

Lol so I see where the inspiration for your title came from, the usual Pet pi Repete joke in french Or I assume, since you're in Ontario. Great story!

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SRSmith In reply to chocolatesa [2008-06-21 03:07:36 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha - I hadn't even thought about that angle!
Thanks very much!

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chocolatesa In reply to SRSmith [2008-06-21 13:13:33 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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LiveBleedDie [2008-06-21 00:21:42 +0000 UTC]

bravo this is really good! cant wati to see more from ya!

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SRSmith In reply to LiveBleedDie [2008-06-21 02:31:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!

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LiveBleedDie In reply to SRSmith [2008-06-21 18:47:14 +0000 UTC]

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Azulcat [2008-06-20 20:13:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is amazing! It totally captures everything that makes up a story (plot, drama, etc) in less than 1000 words. Crazy.

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SRSmith In reply to Azulcat [2008-06-21 02:40:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! It used to make my head hurt, trying to fit it all in and then edit it all out again. I find I'm getting better at conceptualizing stories at the shorter length, which makes writing them less of an aneurism inducing exercise than it was when I started.

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Azulcat In reply to SRSmith [2008-06-21 03:03:30 +0000 UTC]

Haha wow. When did you start?

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SRSmith In reply to Azulcat [2008-06-21 03:10:44 +0000 UTC]

I joined 365tomorrows as a staff writer in Aug 2006, and started working up to suitable flash fiction pieces a couple or four months prior to that, so probably two years now?

I used to write 1,500 or 2,000 word stories and then edit them down to 700 or so words, now I write pretty much to 600 words first time and then edit for better language.

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Azulcat In reply to SRSmith [2008-06-21 19:14:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow. So I guess you've had a lot of practice. ^^"

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SRSmith In reply to Azulcat [2008-06-22 19:39:00 +0000 UTC]

Lots of practice, and still always learning!

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maffthelight [2008-06-20 19:36:42 +0000 UTC]

this is great. reminds me of a movie i saw once, well, minus the dead part lol

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fewrevelations In reply to maffthelight [2008-06-21 06:14:07 +0000 UTC]

The Paycheck, right?

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maffthelight In reply to fewrevelations [2008-06-23 18:31:52 +0000 UTC]

YES! Thats what that was called. god that was an awesome movie, which makes this story even cooler!

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fewrevelations In reply to maffthelight [2008-06-24 18:51:04 +0000 UTC]

That /is/ a really great movie!
That it does.

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maffthelight In reply to fewrevelations [2008-06-25 08:10:11 +0000 UTC]

i just put in my netflix queue lol

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fewrevelations In reply to maffthelight [2008-06-30 05:13:09 +0000 UTC]

rofl!

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SRSmith In reply to maffthelight [2008-06-21 02:43:28 +0000 UTC]

Haha - Thanks!

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maffthelight In reply to SRSmith [2008-06-23 18:29:58 +0000 UTC]

no prblemo

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Maang [2008-06-20 17:29:18 +0000 UTC]

I want the rest of the story! This is goooood

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SRSmith In reply to Maang [2008-06-21 02:44:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! There are themes in here that I'm really fond of, so you'll see elements of this come around again in other stories.

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