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SRSmith In reply to Jshei [2008-06-21 02:45:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm gradually wrapping my head around plot lines for a longer story, so we'll see what happens.
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Jshei In reply to SRSmith [2008-06-21 03:57:39 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful.
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LadySphinx In reply to ??? [2008-06-20 16:45:00 +0000 UTC]
...more? D:
This is incredible stuff (congrats on the DD, by the way!). I'm hooked. @w@ Are you going to continue this?
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SRSmith In reply to LadySphinx [2008-06-21 02:46:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the comment and the congrats! I'm working out plot lines for a longer story that Pete may have a part in - we'll see whether he makes the final cut.
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LadySphinx In reply to SRSmith [2008-06-21 02:58:33 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, I hope so. I love the concept of it, and your execution is grand!
Do you have any books out, as possibly indicated by the bit in your signature?
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SRSmith In reply to LadySphinx [2008-06-21 03:01:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I don't have anything out, though I certainly plan to (and I've got a tremendous amount of respect for those that do).
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LadySphinx In reply to SRSmith [2008-06-21 03:19:30 +0000 UTC]
Aw, okay. :< Well, whenever you do get something out I'll do my best to purchase it. I may be a primarily graphic artist, but I have much higher respect for those who can use words to paint pictures, and I try to support them as best I can.
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SRSmith In reply to AWdeV [2008-06-21 02:46:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you - sometimes the titles are as much fun for me to write as the stories are.
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hackthefoible In reply to ??? [2008-06-20 14:05:36 +0000 UTC]
haha- Amazing. I loved it. Very easy to read and very intriguing. Good stuff!
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SRSmith In reply to hackthefoible [2008-06-21 02:46:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks - glad you liked it!
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SRSmith In reply to zenathena [2008-06-21 02:48:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank you - it's hard sometimes to fabricate a plot that builds when you know you've got to be tied up neatly in 600 words, so I'm always glad when people think it works.
This story won't go on from here, but the characters and concepts will likely surface in something longer.
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rainwisher2 In reply to ??? [2008-06-20 07:24:57 +0000 UTC]
Excellent job, especially considering the word limit.
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SRSmith In reply to rainwisher2 [2008-06-21 02:49:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much!
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windwater [2008-05-09 19:47:10 +0000 UTC]
I love it! It opens up so many possibilities.
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SRSmith In reply to windwater [2008-05-10 02:55:09 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you do, thank you! There are a number of elements from the short stories I've written that are gelling into a larger world, and a larger story. Some are concepts, some are characters and some are simply ambient technology. I'm always happy to find a story that people see as the start of something, as hopefully on some level it is just that.
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naiadgirl1012 In reply to SRSmith [2008-04-22 19:02:46 +0000 UTC]
Good. You'd better not resist it. ;D
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SRSmith In reply to naiadgirl1012 [2008-04-23 12:44:02 +0000 UTC]
How could I possibly resist a dare?
It's impossible.
Entirely not possible.
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CrystalSeeker In reply to ??? [2008-04-21 08:30:43 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it really does remind me of Johnny Mnemonic... A little too much...
Don't get me wrong, it's written OK, but it doesn't quite match your former works. As if you weren't inspired. :/
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DannyBlue In reply to CrystalSeeker [2008-06-26 08:28:57 +0000 UTC]
I loved Cats Cradle, and while I know what YouTube is I cant stand 99% of whats on it!
Thanks for the info on hot ice I think I have something like it from a camping store!
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SRSmith In reply to CrystalSeeker [2008-04-21 15:49:04 +0000 UTC]
The idea of people couriering data internally I don't think is unique anymore, so if I'm borrowing an idea there it's not one that hasn't been borrowed a thousand times before. I think what was visionary of Gibson is entirely too mainstream today.
The idea of focus here is that of taking a biological sample as a backup, so you can re-grow a copy of someone if something happens to the original. It's not data backup, as the data was introduced after the backup was made, but rather medium or transport backup.
Also, the idea that two identical people without knowledge of each others actions, placed in the same situation and faced with the same obstacles and stimuli are likely to behave in a similar if not identical manner.
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DannyBlue In reply to SRSmith [2008-04-22 07:43:52 +0000 UTC]
William Gibsons concepts, as Isaac Ascimovs, have not only become universal in their genre of fiction, but have also tended to be realised in modern technology. There is a great line in Dangerous Liaisons where the Marquise de Merteuil talks about how she educated herself in court; stating that she read philosophy to know how to think, and fiction to know what is possible.
If we discounted using Gibsons High Concept we would have to stop writing about the internet, as his writing is its precursor.
Again as I often have said to you; this could be a book. Excellent!
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SRSmith In reply to DannyBlue [2008-04-22 15:05:11 +0000 UTC]
Very well put, and agree completely. Thanks very much for your thoughts, and the kind comment. I'll be writing a book, just as soon as the pieces start falling into place in my head.
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DannyBlue In reply to SRSmith [2008-04-23 06:11:11 +0000 UTC]
Kurt Vonnegut wrote this:
[link]
I found it helpful to think about, but I did not stick to it
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NozeDive In reply to DannyBlue [2008-06-20 16:47:21 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, thanks for posting this. Vonnegut is/was one of the best.
Ice 9 exists!
Look up "hot Ice" on Youtube
lol
Β»TΓΈny
P.S. S.R.Smith, this was a really goos deviation!
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DannyBlue In reply to NozeDive [2008-06-23 13:34:41 +0000 UTC]
I hate using Youtube, what is it?
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NozeDive In reply to DannyBlue [2008-06-25 20:34:28 +0000 UTC]
Do you mean "What's YouTube", or "What's Ice-9"?
Ice-9 was used as a plot device in the Vonnegut novel Cat's Cradle. Basically, it was a form of ice that would instantly freeze any normal water that it came into contact with, and it's melting point was some where above 100ΒΊF.
Hot ice is a chemical reaction between Sodium Acetate and water. It appears to turn to ice instantly, but it actually become very warm in the process. Reusable hand warmers use this chemical.
Β»TΓΈny
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SRSmith In reply to DannyBlue [2008-04-23 12:42:36 +0000 UTC]
I love his work, and that's a great list of guidelines. Thanks for the link.
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apocathary In reply to ??? [2008-04-21 06:08:49 +0000 UTC]
Nice one Steve (:
I may or may not have submitted a story I wrote while drunk last night to your site. If I did and it's the one sitting in front of me right now, then please ignore it. It needs a trim and a redress, but you will see it again at some point.
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lpowell In reply to ??? [2008-04-21 04:21:51 +0000 UTC]
Good flash. Reminds me of Gibson's Johnny Mnemonic, but with a different sort of twist.
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