Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2011-01-15 09:35:33 +0000 UTC]
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Ok, let's get critique-y e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>Right first off, let me just say that all five versions are beautifully put together e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>Of the five, I'd say this one appeals to me the most. The blue filter adds a delightfully eerie and more mystical quality to the setting.The hardest part is finding something that I think needs improving. I mean the whole thing looks seamless.The light interacts beautifully with her body, and the sort of whispy aura really helps to make her stand out from the background, while at the same time fits the concept of her being part of the water itself.The way her cascading hair blends into the falling water is inspired, and looks flawless to me.Her expression and pose suggest that she could be a dangerous temptress and that she is hungry for company.I'm probably failing at the critique business because I can't see anything that needs improving, but I hope that my analysis is to your liking and that I didn't miss the point anywhere e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="16" alt="" title="Blush"/>
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Selene-Blackthorn In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2011-01-15 12:13:57 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much for giving me a critique too bad you don't have any improving suggestions for me, I would have appreciated a few. nonetheless, it's very good to know that i didn't make any critical and obvious mistakes [though I'm sure I made a few... I HAD to make a few mistakes, right? I'm having trouble spotting them myself though]thank you so much for taking the time to write this!
Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to Selene-Blackthorn [2011-01-16 19:16:35 +0000 UTC]
It was my pleasue sorry about the lack of improvement suggestions, but when mistakes can't be seen, they can't be seen.Oh, and I can't resist doing this every time someone uses that smiley on me.Ack, not the tight hug! Not the tight hug! Air! I need air!
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figjamplay [2011-01-14 02:50:07 +0000 UTC]
wow so beautiful I think this one and vs.2 are the best
Selene-Blackthorn In reply to figjamplay [2011-01-14 11:18:45 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much