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Published: 2016-06-09 20:32:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 27972; Favourites: 687; Downloads: 712
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Concept of scifi gun - electric rifle - for fictional scenario. No ammo, but energy pack-battery. Display on the side is inside the body and can be covered by sliding panel over it. Worked in 3ds max, used vray rendering engine and finished it in photoshop. I did only two pictures.1. Onyx primary - Onyx-primary
2. Onyx secondary - Onyx-secondary
So what do you think. Do you like it or not? tnx for comments if any. bye.
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Comments: 35
Your technical work is always top notch, so I can never negatively review your renderings. They always appear so life-like. The design, however, I can make comments on. I really enjoy the color scheme you utilized; orange contrasting nicely with an otherwise monochrome scheme. The stacking of the frame over the barrel, along with the angled mag-well, makes me think this design was inspired by the KRISS Vector SMG. I have always been a fan of that design, and I like that it was incorporated here. I always like your muzzles; they are unique enough to stand out from the rest of the gun, yet fit with your themes. The only parts I didn't like were the angled mag-well fore-grip, and the holographic optic on top. There is nothing wrong in their designs, I just think that they are the wrong scale for the rest of this piece. The fore-grip seems a little too fat, and the optic seems bulky and obtrusive, adding unnecessary weight on top. Great job, Peterku, and keep up the great work!
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hi. tnx for critic. Yea good point. I started with KRISS super V and turned it into this. I did more designs on KRISS and will add them in the future to gallery. To hit right proportion is my bigest problem all the time. like holographic sight looks bulky now... Will have to work on this
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as I understand it is based on the kinematics of Chris vector (but may be wrong)))) ..... unlike many others, its layout gives the main plus... its return is not up and straight back..... Yes, and in the version of energy weapons....this thing won't go off the line of fire...
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one of my old work. has problem with proportions but yea definitely came out of vector.
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Looks like the starship troopers and a Kriss vector had a child
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I really enjoy your weapons! I would like to ask, my community who makes mods for the game ARMA 3 are in the process of making a SCI FI military mod, would it be ok if we use your weapons as either the weapons themselves or for inspiration for weapons?
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hi. mate. tnx you. I dont share models but if you do your onw based on mind and use it in non-commercial project then I dont mind. regards
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I am by no means a gun expert, but @TheAlexHardwick 's comments make sense to me.
I really like the design though. I would be curious to see a matching light, short-barrel version... carbine or SMG.
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hi. yea he is true. Ho hit right dimensions is my biggest problem all the time.
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lot of dirty and crap can get in there being so open and it wont work. not sure why u did that
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hi. maybe yes. but spicifically in this theare are not moving parts. I do it to bring some complexity into model. just not to be too simple because then there is not much to model.
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Man I would kill to see your designs in a SciFi game. Maybe a video fame of hc svnt dracones. Your designs are so well done. Even the impractical looking ones are awesome. And there's few enough of those.
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I like how there is a twin barrel and a charge meter on the side
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Looks like it would be handy weapon to have around. I'd love to have it in my secret arsenal .
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tnx mate. ready for apocalyptic scenario.
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Somewhat reminiscent of the KRISS Vector. Only it looks way better.
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good point for you. yea I started with KRISS Vector and turned it into this.
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I thought as much based on the basic shapes.
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Hah! I thought it looked like a vector. I love me that gun.... Especially the red jacket total recall version. Too bad that company has such a sordid history...
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yea I know this version. it looks really hot.
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Sick! Is there a technical term for that style of receiver/magazine well? I was trying to look that up a while ago.
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Also inspired the Hornet SMG in Mass Effect. It is a very cool design. I like the way it looks.
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Reminds me of the Kriss Vector.
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Yeah, that's what I used as reference for looking it up, but they didn't explicitly outline a name for that style of magazine well.
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tnx you mate. no technical background I leave for watcher's imagination.
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First time seeing your work and let me say, I am already a big fan. This blows my work waaaay out of the water (while I am self-teaching and only have a year of experience.. I can dream right?) My only problem with this is the sight. The glass on the sight looks somewhat disproportionate to the actual gun itself. Other then that, amazing work!
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tnx you mate. everybody has to start from beginning. I also did.
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