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peterku In reply to ??? [2022-12-21 08:57:59 +0000 UTC]
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Avarus-Lux [2016-10-17 16:10:27 +0000 UTC]
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well, another grenade, another Critique.
while i adore the previous designs and visions, this one in all honesty misses the point of a frag grenade, i'll explain why below, please bear in mind this is a opinion, not a personal offense.
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vision,
for a frag grenade, i'm sorry, but in my honest opinion this is not very usable as a fragmentation grenade, first of all, the spoon, or in this case button(s), does not look like it ejects very far or has to make a long turn before it activates the grenade, likely forming a risk to a user in a tense situation. add to that that the button looks slippery and i wouldn't advise on this aproach.
it also looks overly complicated for the simplest grenade available in any military arsenal, aka over-engineered, even for a sci-fi concept.
less palstic, bigger shrapnel plating/pads (pattern on the sides need to be extended way more)
any fragmentation grenade is optimized for sending lethal shrapnel in every possible direction while using the least amount of materials to be able to do the job.
this grenade makes it look that this design only goes sending shrapnel to the sides, and even if that is not the case, plastic is not a good fragmentation material, it has low energy and loses whatever energy it has very quickly.
and if there is a metal casing underneath that plastic, which i doubt due to its small size (pull ring, grenade size ratio), the plastic would dampen the shrapnel effect and probably leave gaps in a few angles of its blast radius, potentially leaving hostiles alive.
i also see no proper way to attach this grenade to a vest, other then by putting it in a pocket, which is not always a good thing, and a lot of grenade designs use the spoon for this, as for using the pull ring for this... well thats suicide.
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originality,
i have to give you credits here, i like how the design interests the eye, i like how you tried to change established concepts, but again its no grenade, it makes me think of a bluetooth speaker, or a gyroscopic wrist trainer orb with a ring-pull cord to get it going. ergonomic but not a proper grenade. but you get 4.5 stars for the effort here.
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technique,
your plastics look top notch, you got that really nice this time, only thing you mised the spot with is the metals this time around, while i see you wanted to go for the darker metal, it looks more like the plastics as it misses a bit of shine, especially on the outer right ring, the light doesnt really look right on the ring., the metal also seems a bit to course instead of smooth, o maybe to matte... see the followingnimage for my comparison: i.ebayimg.com/00/s/MzkyWDMwMA=… the middle part of this band looks like what you were aiming for, however you overdid the matte just a little.
the text on polymer looks good although a bit small, but since its highly definable due to shape and size you dont need any other marking bands so thats good.
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impact,
i see you changed the floor to tiling, good improvement, you can now easily identify and orientate, small change big effect., your presentation is for the rest about the same as your other grenades so cant really complain about that other then what i have already said about this.
overall a nice ida, but not the best, original but you dont get me fired up for this one....
i hope this helps you with other future designs.
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Oroum [2016-10-17 09:05:25 +0000 UTC]
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Once again, not an artist myself so I'll have a hard time judging the quality of the art itself. I can, however, take a gander at a potential weapon and see if there might be something wrong with it.
Good stuff: I can see the essentials of a grenade, the pin and the spoon. It also look like it would be easy to hold in hand and throw.
Bad stuff: My first problem is that I have a hard time imagining an efficient way of hanging/storing those. My second problem is the "fragmentation" part. The point of a fragmentation grenade is for the blast to make metallic shrapnel fly in all directions, which is why the current ones are covered in this square-like texture.
On this grenade, the only sources of shrapnel I can see would be the two "circles" on the sides (which look more like speakers to me, by the way XD). Which would only be deadly in two directions. The fact that these are the flattest parts of the weapon also means they have a high chance of rolling and stopping on them, which would make the deadly zone be "up" and "down", one side being on the ground.
One could wager the shrapnel is underneath the plastic-like outer layer, but it would really be less efficient for the blast to need to break the casing, before sending the fragmentation flying.
One could also say that the outer case is supposed to fall off with the pin and the spoon. If this was to be the case, I couldn't pronounce myself on how effective it would be, though the weapon seems pretty small overall. Losing the outer layer wouldn't lave much space for the payload and the shrapnel.
Overall, I think it looks nice on the first glance and is pleasant to the eye, but it doesn't seem practical.
All this, of course, is only my opinion and I can always be wrong.
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spankin123 [2019-07-23 23:45:58 +0000 UTC]
Reminds me of the grenades from Fallout 1 & 2. Digging the design!
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ForgottenHonor0 [2018-06-13 05:02:21 +0000 UTC]
Quick question, are you left handed?
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swindoMMT [2018-01-27 20:31:33 +0000 UTC]
looks more like it could be a sonic grenade with those speaker looking things.
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peterku In reply to swindoMMT [2018-01-28 10:15:17 +0000 UTC]
yea could be. you are not first one pointing it out....
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Overloner [2017-11-27 08:53:37 +0000 UTC]
its lovely
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Rasimu [2017-09-18 15:54:17 +0000 UTC]
Sweet I can see this going somewhere
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Axei [2017-09-07 06:28:45 +0000 UTC]
If this is a frag grenade, then the shell must be designed to fragment in a roughly equal pattern in 360 degrees in 3 dimensions. This is why most frag grenades have an all-around ribbed surface or smooth surface, so that the fragments get evenly distributed.
This would create two conical zones where there would either be more or less chances of hit than the rest of the blast radius, depending on the materials used to make the different parts of the significantly complexified shell.
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peterku In reply to Axei [2017-09-07 08:38:11 +0000 UTC]
Hi. tnx for review. Most people see in that sonic grenade. My idea is that that shell is just plastic part around metal perforated ball with expolisive material inside. so explosion inside split the metal ball into many pieces flying 360 degrees around and that plastic shell get broken apart as well but not making big resistance to explosion....
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685eric685 [2017-07-20 14:46:24 +0000 UTC]
What's the button for?
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peterku In reply to 685eric685 [2017-07-21 06:26:02 +0000 UTC]
it is safety. grenades used tri points safety system. So I use 2 button and one ring on the pin.
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BloodSoacker [2017-07-17 13:34:41 +0000 UTC]
Cool af o3o how does it work?
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BloodSoacker In reply to peterku [2017-07-18 07:36:36 +0000 UTC]
Hahahaha X"D okay. Ya got me.
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peterku In reply to busyorca [2017-06-05 14:03:37 +0000 UTC]
tnx you mate. I also have EMP grenade there in my gallery.
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DylanPierpont [2017-03-16 00:35:12 +0000 UTC]
Love this look. Really fresh take on a classic design
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KaribuXY [2017-02-13 16:58:43 +0000 UTC]
You should do a sonic boom grenade.
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Khyber42 [2017-01-11 19:58:27 +0000 UTC]
Great concept, looks awesome, Always love your work.
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peterku In reply to Khyber42 [2017-01-12 07:12:53 +0000 UTC]
tnx you mate.
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DanRambo [2016-12-30 01:53:34 +0000 UTC]
B
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Never seen anything like it! Incredible!
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peterku In reply to DanRambo [2017-01-03 08:18:20 +0000 UTC]
tnx yoou.
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FaceGenerator [2016-12-16 03:35:26 +0000 UTC]
Awesome work!
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Spaun13 [2016-11-21 16:06:29 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!
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peterku In reply to Spaun13 [2016-11-22 06:08:37 +0000 UTC]
tnx you.
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MajorDiarrhia [2016-10-31 22:27:14 +0000 UTC]
I like this grenade a lot. For a moment I thought it was for lefties, but quickly realized it would be easy to pull the pin just by turning the right hand 90 degrees to face the pin toward the body. I can't help wonder how easy it would be to throw given its unusual, though attractive, shape.
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peterku In reply to MajorDiarrhia [2016-11-01 16:55:58 +0000 UTC]
tnx you mate. it was just idea to bring something new caused most designs on the web are similar.
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wbyrd [2016-10-24 04:28:01 +0000 UTC]
Okay the styling is very different than the typical grenade. Not at all a bad thing.
It looks far more practical than a lot of sci-fi grenades. the lack of sharp edges would be an advantage since there is nothing to snag on gear or clothing. while it would be hard to use for an off-hand user. but that's a problem with any grenade.
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wbyrd In reply to peterku [2016-10-25 04:28:38 +0000 UTC]
I'd add a ring somewhere on the case so that it could be clipped to the soldier's web gear. As it is it can only be carried in a pouch or pocket.
I don't like to tell an artist how to create their designs. especially when they already look so nice. I assume the part that looks like a speaker is a fragmentation panel. Most modern grenades use a pre-formed shells that are designed to create fragments of a specific size and shape. When I first saw the image my brain tried to picture its internal layout. I sort of saw a spherical core with a plastic shell around it holding the fuse,timer, and safety devices
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peterku In reply to wbyrd [2016-10-27 12:12:03 +0000 UTC]
hi mate. I have no problem with critic. feel free to put any. and you right. that gragmented ball is source of fragments.
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