Comments: 36
ShadowstrikeArtists [2016-11-28 03:33:00 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
This is some beautiful art, and a great story! It gives some detail, and you have a great backstory! Although, in the first and third box, His face looks a little odd, position-wise. Still beautiful, a great backstory. It isn't mary/gary-sue, but it isn't boring. I think you should've added all the names in hte last panel, for you just said the names of Badjaw's pack, not Kraman's. I love this though, and it is very unique! I hope you make another page soon, I love this so far, keep going! I love that you added shading, since most people forget that, hence making it look like they spent less time. I love it!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
GuesssWho9 [2016-11-30 22:55:25 +0000 UTC]
So the war wasn't that long ago, then . . .
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
kuroimeo [2016-11-30 18:26:15 +0000 UTC]
I really like your drawings, i would like to know what it is your job, You do a comics or is it just a passion?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Paperiapina In reply to kuroimeo [2016-11-30 18:31:54 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm a jobless blob who occasionally does work gigs as a freelance animator. Being able to earn a living from my comics is a dream of mine, but it's not really a livable dream right now, so I'm mostly just sinking my free days into comic making and dreaming.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
kuroimeo In reply to Paperiapina [2016-11-30 18:41:05 +0000 UTC]
(I sympathize, I'm a jobless blob too)
it's a shame, you do not have a website for people to donate you? for your work
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Paperiapina In reply to kuroimeo [2016-11-30 18:48:45 +0000 UTC]
I have been thinking about maybe making a patreon or something in the future, but I haven't yet gotten to it. Donation collecting is illegal in my country, so there's stuff I need to clear out first before I can start seriously considering it.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
kuroimeo In reply to Paperiapina [2016-11-30 18:59:12 +0000 UTC]
Crap sorry for you, if ever one day you get a donation site sends a post on deviantart, I'm sure it would work
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
MistingWolf In reply to Starlit-Pawprints [2017-01-20 05:12:53 +0000 UTC]
Ah, yep, I remember that one! Was just hoping for something a little less tiny. XD
Thanks!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Raidrar [2016-11-29 05:49:42 +0000 UTC]
Let us all take a moment and bask in the prettiness that is Crippled's smile.
(Crippled himself I'd say, too!)
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
LttleGhost [2016-11-29 02:55:37 +0000 UTC]
so I've been reading this comic for, I don't know how many years, but quite a long time, and it is one of my very favourites, the detail in the world and societies of these pups are amazing and I wanna know everything about them, I love the art (Crippled's smile is so sweet and I love the stylized silhouettes in this page in particular) and also I'm a sucker for monster dogs in general
but it's only just now that I suddenly realize that I've been reading Iralbe's name wrong in my head (for some reason my brain read it as Irabel) for all this time that I've been following this comic and I feel quite silly
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
StewCat52 [2016-11-28 23:58:07 +0000 UTC]
I think I geek out a little every time the awesome hieroglyphs show up in the comic!
(And whenever Crippled smiles! ) Can't wait to hear the whole backstory!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
MicaelaM2016 [2016-11-28 23:07:59 +0000 UTC]
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh what will happen next I sit her and wait
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Ranono [2016-11-28 20:17:42 +0000 UTC]
I found your comic today but I like it and read it to this page. ^^ Im really interested in their names too. What do they mean?
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
awesomefox02 [2016-11-28 16:05:18 +0000 UTC]
Awesome 👏. I am so excited now 🌟.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Limwen-Benaway [2016-11-28 13:12:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh this looks cool!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Tyraka628 [2016-11-28 09:58:07 +0000 UTC]
Alright! Backstory!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Bloodwolf-Xx [2016-11-28 06:17:34 +0000 UTC]
I love Crippled. He's so kind and understanding.
I love back stories.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
whitesky10 [2016-11-28 03:22:40 +0000 UTC]
WHOOOOOOOP
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
LunarEstrella [2016-11-28 03:08:17 +0000 UTC]
Ahhhhhj soooo excited!!!!!! Back story!!!!!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
RainfoxArts [2016-11-28 00:49:46 +0000 UTC]
That fourth pannel... can't stop looking at it c:
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
StarshadowDragon [2016-11-28 00:43:08 +0000 UTC]
Crippled's face is so happy!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Fluff-Kitten [2016-11-28 00:42:27 +0000 UTC]
Crippled has his feet back then I guess?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
reddog-f6 In reply to Fluff-Kitten [2016-11-28 01:38:29 +0000 UTC]
yeah its been shown a little what he was like as a pup. in fact, the point crippled mentions here is whats going on in this unfinished part.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Fluff-Kitten In reply to reddog-f6 [2016-11-28 02:24:36 +0000 UTC]
I know, it also mentioned what happened to his legs in the comic. I just didn't know he had his feet when the pack formed.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0