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Description It's time for my January tradition - an Astrida painting!

Every January I paint a new portrait of this character of mine. The only major goal is to outdo the previous year's painting. This year I added an extra goal of sticking with a limited color palette, orange and purple (and some yellow and red, a bit). I really don't like orange or purple that much so this forced me to use some colors I don't often paint with.

This is the fourth year I've done this and every year I look at what I made and say to myself I can't possibly do better next year, and then I always manage to surprise myself!

Annual Astrid Painting Series:
January 2009: [link]
January 2008: [link]
January 2007: [link]
January 2006: [link]
January 2005: [link]

As for what's going on in it.. well, I just thought it would look neat. She's a very day-dreamy and apathetic character, so I imagine she'd stand around playing her violin while her city went up in flames. It fits. V V

Close up: [link]

Edit: Oh WOW a daily deviation!!!! I was out of town for the week and didn't know what to think when I came back to 640 messages in the inbox! Thank you =cryingsorceress and ^JunkbyJen ! And thank you everyone else for enjoying my art.

1.26.08 Image Update Sorry folks, I'm not a violin player and even though I used a few references, I missed some nuances about the violin's design. I've added some of the violin components that were missing and reworked the placement of some elements. I hope all you die-hard violinists find it a bit more accurate now. If not.. well, just pretend Astrida is from a far away place where violins are different.

Also, some people have pointed out that she is playing it "backwards". I didn't realize that both lefties and righties are taught to play the same way, though I did find a budding "movement" to change that! [link]

I realize I could just flip the picture and make everyone else happy, but I rather like it oriented this way and I don't think playing it "lefty" is such a bad thing. Perhaps in her world, violins come in both left-handed and right-handed varieties. Score one for handedness equality!
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Comments: 71

Crimson-Strength [2012-09-19 14:40:20 +0000 UTC]

I love violin! but look at that; is she left handed? I wish I could paint like that!

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voldee [2011-12-26 07:36:09 +0000 UTC]

How enchanting!

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Vampyre-Lover [2009-10-07 19:59:41 +0000 UTC]

WOW!!! I'm DAZZLED!!! SO BEAUTIFUL...

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dxmfan [2008-01-29 00:00:41 +0000 UTC]

This is the best one yet! The colors are nice and the entire picture is really interesting, even if the violin is all wrong. ^^

Really great work though!

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Cinnamoncandy [2008-01-24 04:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous.

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crazyraccoon [2008-01-23 08:07:00 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely adore this piece! I checked out the previous years, too, and you're definitely improving. That being said, you forgot the chin rest on the violin... she's also playing it left handed, unlike the 2005 piece, and you forgot a few other details like the f holes. It also needs tuning pegs and the bridge is too close to the finger board. (Yeah, I play viola, can you tell?) Anywho... great piece, I especially love the folds in her dress and the DD is well deserved.

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Majoh In reply to crazyraccoon [2008-01-26 15:22:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your comments While I used a few refs, I missed some nuances to violin playing that you and many others have pointed out. I never in a million years thought this many people would be looking at it and critiquing it!

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FlyingFelix [2008-01-23 07:20:32 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is compositionally beautiful. The way how the dark dress contrasts with the blonde hair matches the golden light of the burning city and dark mountains.

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Vueiy-Visarelli [2008-01-23 06:47:51 +0000 UTC]

It's gorgeous, and you've definitely improved, year by year. Keep it up!

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cryingsorceress [2008-01-23 06:18:19 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD

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Mallenroh001 [2008-01-23 03:55:07 +0000 UTC]

it's beautiful, I love how cold she is, the burning city was a nice touch, and her hands on teh violin are beautiful

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Lotus072 [2008-01-23 03:54:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I love this painting.
I loved looking at the links and seeing how much you've improved. You deserve a

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Machinacide [2008-01-23 03:34:58 +0000 UTC]

And yeah, I agree on the improving part. Your past works are great, but each one shows how much better you get. This one takes the cake. Love it. :]

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Machinacide [2008-01-23 03:33:48 +0000 UTC]

...Wow.

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neomeruru [2008-01-23 03:01:31 +0000 UTC]

Very nice work! It's good to set goals like this for yourself, and look back on how you've improved over the years. This is an incredible improvement from your first year, and even just last time!

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ILoveACullen [2008-01-23 02:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, I would love to learn more about this character

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kitkat-teh-mime [2008-01-23 02:27:33 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing! I love the details to the room, her dress, the background outside. On that note, its interesting that you have the city in flames while its snowing. Any reason for that particular combination? Its gorgeous.

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Majoh In reply to kitkat-teh-mime [2008-01-27 02:38:23 +0000 UTC]

There's no particular reason other than I like painting snow, and I always imagine her city as snowing constantly.

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kitkat-teh-mime In reply to Majoh [2008-01-27 03:15:25 +0000 UTC]

^w^ its spiffy. Thanks for its for explaining.

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sideshow-coholic [2008-01-23 02:07:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow this si lovely. The coloration is fab=ntastic and I love the way you desigened her dress it suits her. I also like the vilion too.

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LilRedAngel452 [2008-01-23 02:03:10 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful!!

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Bitter-beauty-riddle [2008-01-23 01:31:04 +0000 UTC]

well this is very cool, i really like the shadows and the depth specially. Great work

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purplerose [2008-01-23 01:09:06 +0000 UTC]

Nice work.

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Larien-ArFeiniel [2008-01-23 01:04:12 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderfully skillful: it's smooth, the palette is beautiful. Looking back at this series through the years it's great to see how drastically your style has grown and how you've improved.

It also reminds me of a piece I attempted once (similar composition and colors) and reminds me how much I failed at it. XD Haha. But really, keep up the great work.

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TsundereKit [2008-01-23 00:49:01 +0000 UTC]

I think this piece is beautiful, however I would suggest studying the violin/violinists just a little bit more. I wouldn't be so picky if I hadn't played for so long- other than the minor issues with the violin/position I think this is a beautiful piece very worthy of its daily deviation!

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Majoh In reply to TsundereKit [2008-01-27 02:37:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks As many others have also pointed out, there were some errors I made with the violin that I failed to pick out of the refs I used. I've changed the image somewhat to reflect the critique I've received, and I do care a lot about getting it "right", so thank you.

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TsundereKit In reply to Majoh [2008-01-27 04:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem. Like I said, it IS a very beautiful piece, instruments are tricky to draw- you can rarely draw someone playing an instrument correctly unless you have been playing for a few years. Keep it up though, with your talent, I know you'll perfect it one day!

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DrawItAll [2008-01-23 00:36:06 +0000 UTC]

okay, im sorry, but.... i play violin and..

1 wrong shoulder
2 the bow's too far up on the strings
3 the bridge is too far up on the strings
4 no 'f' holes

soo... either im an insane perfectionist, or it's not a violin.

sorry, but... yeah, im an insane perfectionist just some constructive critique... i hope

other than the technical errors w/ the violin... the picture is really beauutiful ^^

'as she played her violin, up in her castle, the village her window looked upon... burned to cynders in the snow and sun'

i really love this! it's awesome, especally the way you kept it to only a few colors with so many shades ^^

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Majoh In reply to DrawItAll [2008-01-26 15:22:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your comments While I used a few refs, I missed some nuances to violin playing that you and many others have pointed out. I never in a million years thought this many people would be looking at it and critiquing it!

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DrawItAll In reply to Majoh [2008-01-26 15:42:17 +0000 UTC]

sorry critique is kind of natural when you look at something you know well, but other than the flaws with the violin, this picture is really beautiful *envy you*

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Majoh In reply to DrawItAll [2008-01-27 02:36:38 +0000 UTC]

Your list of changes was concise and clear, so thank you, they were helpful in making some edits to the art! I do care very much about it being "right" since it's part of my professional portfolio, so thank you.

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DrawItAll In reply to Majoh [2008-01-27 20:41:43 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome im glad i could help some

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Hokoto95 [2008-01-23 00:28:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. you sure have gotten a lot better... even though your past pictures are pretty good too.

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Aneirin-Aryon [2008-01-22 23:51:54 +0000 UTC]

Looks very good. ^_^ I think it's very amazing and interesting. Good job.

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Poerti [2008-01-22 23:01:16 +0000 UTC]

Great work! You really deserve the DD!

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Zdragonblader [2008-01-22 20:13:26 +0000 UTC]

Great piece of art, but as many have commented, you've got her playing on the wrong shoulder ^^

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Majoh In reply to Zdragonblader [2008-01-26 15:30:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for pointing that out (you and many others have told me that she's holding it the wrong way!). My apologies to the violin players who saw this (I never anticipated a DD and such a wide audience!) and to Astrida for the pain I've inflicted. I like to pretend that Astrida is either left-handed or just really talented.

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hartandhunter [2008-01-22 19:49:40 +0000 UTC]

It's amazing to see how far you've come. Inspirational, really.

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C0ALHADA [2008-01-22 19:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Great piece! And the fact that you have this tradition really helps you too see how your style of drawing and painting improved over the years!

Keep up with the good work! ^^

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TheLunaticRen [2008-01-22 19:09:47 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps you should've referenced violin playing. Having been a violin player, I know it's impossible to play the violin on the wrong shoulder.

I shouldn't say impossible, but it's never done.

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Majoh In reply to TheLunaticRen [2008-01-26 15:30:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for pointing that out (you and many others have told me that she's holding it the wrong way!). My apologies to the violin players who saw this (I never anticipated a DD and such a wide audience!) and to Astrida for the pain I've inflicted. I like to pretend that Astrida is either left-handed or just really talented.

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Majoh In reply to TheLunaticRen [2008-01-26 15:17:08 +0000 UTC]

Interesting! I did use a reference, but I didn't know there was a "wrong shoulder". Would a left-handed person play it the "wrong" way perhaps? I guess I could flip the entire painting

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ParacelsusGod [2008-01-22 18:25:29 +0000 UTC]

Amazing!

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cardowl [2008-01-22 17:34:14 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!

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skachick [2008-01-22 16:46:52 +0000 UTC]

This pic is beaut. the only crit i have is that she is playing her violin on the other side. was this intentional? I play, so it just seems particularly uncomfortable to imagine !

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Majoh In reply to skachick [2008-01-26 15:28:38 +0000 UTC]

That was just an oversight on my part I found a composition I liked and never thought twice about whether it conflicted with a previous painting or not! She can be left-handed in this painting

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AliceThorn [2008-01-22 16:27:39 +0000 UTC]

Simply perfect.

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wanderlustartist [2008-01-22 16:11:44 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work! I am happy you included the previous works, because they show the tremendous growth in skill and depth that you have gained over a brief period of time! It seems like she is becoming more real, as are her surroundings! I will keep watch over your work so that I may see her reappear next January

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Shadowelve [2008-01-22 16:04:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh wonderful work.. I am totally in love with the details.. It looks incredible real in a way
Congrats for the DD ^^

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GeminiNinja8 [2008-01-22 15:31:56 +0000 UTC]

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