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right what it says on the tin
1.) Magnolia May showing off her green thumb. She loves running her beauty salon, but weeding and tending to her flower garden is where she truly feels home. She loves nothing more than gifting her friends and family with enormous, stunningly arranged bouquets, each one having its own meaning in the language of flowers.
2.) Revamped Cloudburst's design.....yet again. I finally like her. A lot. Of Rainbow Dash's three crotch goblins, she's still the smartest, though often seen as the weirdo that everyone forgets about. She has a good relationship with both her older siblings, and is one of the brave few that can call Phoenix on her shit without getting decked.
3.) So following this:
Rosemary was naturally pretty upset about falling out with her BFF. Phoenix awkwardly lends a sympathetic ear, and then oh whoops what is happening
Doth Magnolia's senses deceive her, or is some beefy orange mcchicken musclin' in on her secret lady love? Must TERMINATE RIVAL
4.) Rosemary and Phoenix ended up having a sorta-fling for a while. Stormy wasn't happy to learn his (former??) best friend was dating his younger sister. He figured it to be either some petty revenge scheme on Rosemary's part, or just Phoenix being a dick. Either way, he was hurt and confused, but refused to show it, and latched harder onto his then-boyfriend, Chakra Blossom.
Chakra, unfortunately, quite enjoyed Stormy's newfound isolation from his best friend and family, and started slowing ramping up his manipulation. He began corrupting Stormy into becoming a sort of second Chakra, roping him into his unsavory lifestyle of drugs, drinking, and mooching, all while eroding Stormy's self-esteem with back-handed compliments and chipping away at his boundaries. Stormy was pressured into doing a lot of things he's not proud of, including being an ass to ponies that were only concerned about him.....
The gas-lighting and emotional abuse finally led to Stormy becoming an abuser himself, and his once half-decent relationship with Chakra festered into a miserable co-dependence between two people that quite enjoyed tormenting each other. Stormy really didn't like who he was during this period. He both loved and hated Chakra, and finally, when Chakra does something unforgivable, Stormy retaliates by breaking his nose. This act of violence rattles Stormy to his core, and he ends the relationship right there, leaving Chakra shocked and wounded, in more ways than one.
Rosemary later finds Stormy facedown in a puddle of whiskey and tears. He can only miserably blubber that she was right, he is an idiot- and Rosie can only sigh in frustration.....and relief. Oh, Stormy.
She physically hefted him upright, smacks him sober......and starts blubbering herself, because how dare he have been so cruel to her? And Stormy starts bawling apologies, and then they're both bawling like babies and clinging to each other. Phoenix walks in the room, sees this soggy melodramatic reunion, then walks back out. Alright then. Good for them.
(Then, with Cloudburst's covert aid, she lit Chakra's tent on fire.)
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Comments: 180
AviRayburn In reply to ??? [2019-12-31 23:46:53 +0000 UTC]
Probably Tansies, which mean "I declare war on you" in flower speak
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UabetAntu In reply to ??? [2019-12-31 12:53:27 +0000 UTC]
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tigreanpony In reply to ??? [2019-12-31 12:46:59 +0000 UTC]
That was cute, very nicely done.
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counterserum [2019-12-31 12:40:52 +0000 UTC]
Phoenix is definitely my favorite of your next gen OCs, aaa I'm just soft for butch women ;-;
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shady-maddness [2019-12-31 12:34:57 +0000 UTC]
i like to think when couldy gets drunk she and zee, dye her hair, find the tightest shorts get some 'safty' and hunt zippy down for a good time lol
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iRinda [2019-12-31 12:31:36 +0000 UTC]
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HisFavoriteDarkAngel In reply to ??? [2019-12-31 11:25:50 +0000 UTC]
Oh boi. I REALLY liked the past Cloudburst, cute lil party animal, but this one. This one speaks to all of us XD Is she still friends with Zee?
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ColourdropArt In reply to ??? [2019-12-31 10:23:17 +0000 UTC]
GAY PONY RELATIONSHIP?! I THING THE FUCK YES!!!Β
also, cloudburst is me, we are one and the same person, and thats on sleep deprivationΒ
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Freddy-kun [2019-12-31 08:46:10 +0000 UTC]
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ErrorVittra [2019-12-31 08:00:21 +0000 UTC]
Ah man I LOVE Phoenix
I Need to see more of her and vogue especiallyΒ ( Ν‘Β° ΝΚ Ν‘Β°)
Plus! Cloudburst's design is hella cool as well!
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Silver-OPs In reply to ??? [2019-12-31 07:57:48 +0000 UTC]
I AM CLOUDBURST
SHE IS ME
SHE IS MY NEW SPIRIT ANIMAL
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KisaraDoesArt16 In reply to Silver-OPs [2019-12-31 10:50:55 +0000 UTC]
I relate to cloud burst so much ;w;Β
Minus the skateboarding part, gotta still learn that
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Vixerox In reply to ??? [2019-12-31 07:57:44 +0000 UTC]
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TheDarkZifara [2019-12-31 07:51:01 +0000 UTC]
Yes yes yes more Phoenix content!! ^^ I also love what you did with Cloudburst and them beautiful Magnolia pictures ^^
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Soroneir [2019-12-31 06:37:11 +0000 UTC]
I love Cloudburst.
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drawingshady [2019-12-31 06:25:44 +0000 UTC]
"I sense... a disturbance..."
I
LOST
IT
LMAOO
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DarkWolfMightyena [2019-12-31 06:23:43 +0000 UTC]
I identify as a Cloudburst.
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Godzillamaster69 [2019-12-31 06:19:08 +0000 UTC]
I love the new redesign for Cloudburst; it suits her personality. And this was a harsh lesson for Stormy, but sometimes you have to learn the hard way. Hope Chakra ran around like a frightened chicken after Phoenix was done with him.
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Loryska [2019-12-31 05:40:20 +0000 UTC]
I love Cloudburst's new design! It's so mellow and unique, and tbh I get mad Sans vibes from it and that's a good thing. It fits her well. I also really enjoy the dynamic between these babs.Β
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Sikudhanii In reply to Loryska [2019-12-31 12:57:32 +0000 UTC]
Lol Iβm glad Iβm not the only one who thought of Sans while looking at her.
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Indigofray In reply to Lopoddity [2019-12-31 06:36:18 +0000 UTC]
Cloud is Sans, Blue Papyrus and Phoenix UndyneΒ
omg UT auΒ
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Lovebirdtreat In reply to ??? [2019-12-31 05:39:54 +0000 UTC]
This is my favorite version of Cloudburst yet!
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TheHaywaiianHorse In reply to ??? [2019-12-31 05:15:15 +0000 UTC]
i love how Chakra has his own merch line of his ass tattoo XD
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urzapw2000 [2019-12-31 05:08:53 +0000 UTC]
need pictures of Phoenix and Cloudburst setting Chakra's tent on fire!!!
awesome pictures and story bites!!
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zZNightmareZz [2019-12-31 05:03:08 +0000 UTC]
LOL MagnoliaΒ
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MapleLeafWind [2019-12-31 05:02:48 +0000 UTC]
Phoenix and Cloudburst lighting Chakra's tent on fire is the best ππ
sshhh!! No one knows it was them!!
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SailorSnowflack [2019-12-31 04:49:23 +0000 UTC]
Can we see the tent burn? Β
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PokemonTrainerMax In reply to ??? [2019-12-31 04:45:38 +0000 UTC]
This is all great!Β I'm glad to see that even though Magnolia once said she thought working with plants was beneath her in "My Better Half", she eventually finds enjoyment in maintaining and growing flowers as a hobby alongside running her beauty salon.Β I'm happy to see more of Phoenix and Cloudburst, and I really like Cloudburst's new look.Β Don't worry about how many times you redesign her; she's your character and you're allowed to redesign her as many times as you want until you're happy with her design.Β Also, I like how you're incorporating Phoenix and Cloudburst into past stories, like Phoenix having a fling with Rosemary during the falling-out between Rosemary and Stormy (and Magnolia sensing something going on with her secret crush), though I am sad to see that it resulted in Stormy falling further under Chakra's manipulations and becoming more like him.Β I'm looking forward to seeing the story of what Chakra did that finally pushed Stormy too far (and hopefully it ends with aforementioned tent-burning by Phoenix and Cloudburst).Β Can't wait to see what you work on next!
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CharleetheCat-Bat In reply to ??? [2019-12-31 04:39:59 +0000 UTC]
I love Cloudburst, I'm glad you found a design that you like of her. I hope she's still melodramatic and i'm glad that she's still a flirt. I'll miss her bright blue hair though unless she does dye it eventually but I still love her tired artist aesthetic, what a mood.Β
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DawnCatScribbles In reply to ??? [2019-12-31 04:34:07 +0000 UTC]
I love how you color their hair. Mostly hair like Phoenix and Magnolia, it's very satisfying.
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NyQuasha In reply to ??? [2019-12-31 04:31:18 +0000 UTC]
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ThetrueFebruary31 In reply to ??? [2019-12-31 04:29:22 +0000 UTC]
Is Cloudburst still friends wit Zee? and I really love the second drawing ofΒ Magnolia
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Lopoddity In reply to ThetrueFebruary31 [2019-12-31 06:40:27 +0000 UTC]
Yup, Cloudyβs still tight with Zee and Vogue
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EspyFandoms In reply to ??? [2019-12-31 04:27:48 +0000 UTC]
Now I wanna see Chakra's tent on fire
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Lopoddity In reply to DarkWritingsInc [2019-12-31 04:39:40 +0000 UTC]
Well, Stormy's kind of a boy scout by nature, a goodie-two shoes that just likes to please others. Chakra introduced him to vices he never would've tried on his own, and Stormy let himself be talked into it because he wanted to impress Chakra. Things like heavy drinking (Stormy turns into a destructive crass dude-bro when drunk, which is why he stays sober), psychedelic drugs, hanging with a sleazy crowd, mean-spirited "teasing" that'd sometimes leave Stormy on the verge of tears, insisting Stormy was being too sensitive when asked to ease up.Β Basically lots of emotional degradation that Chakra was careful to package as something Stormy both wanted and asked for...insisting this escalating cruelty between them was what Stormy wanted all along, because it was so much more thrilling and perverse than being doted on. After all, if things are so bad, why doesn't Stormy just leave? Oh yeah, it's because he drove away his friends and family on this road to ruin, because he's fucked up and broken just like Chakra is, that's why they're meant to be together forever. It was a slow corruption that left Stormy so confused and uncertain of his own boundaries and needs that he ended up forgetting who he was for a while.
As for the thing that broke the camel's back, Iunno. We'll have to wait and see~
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HeyYew [2019-12-31 04:04:31 +0000 UTC]
What unforgivable thing did Chakra do?
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sclongami [2019-12-31 03:57:36 +0000 UTC]
i absolutely love the new cloudburst....
she looks like she does nsfw commissions
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Lopoddity In reply to sclongami [2019-12-31 04:15:54 +0000 UTC]
let's be real, she definitely does
u need a sketch of obi-wan porking general grievous, she's gotchu covered fam
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Martyn-Arts [2019-12-31 03:39:41 +0000 UTC]
I would NOT mind seeing a drawing representing Phoenix walking into a blubberfest then walking back out. I feel like that is a perfect opportunity to go extreme with blubbery expressions.
.............blubberrr.......... ok I like that word at this particular moment in time...
Edit: In my comments I've noticed that I haven't been giving compliments lately. And I did that here. So here it is; freakin' phenomenal art as usual, absolutely love it, your dooles are SOOOOOOO enjoyable to see... AND READ. Thank you! Seriously, the only reason I don't contribute to your wonderful patreson is cause of money reasons (sob I lost my job 10 days before christmas SOB SOB SOB). Keep it up, wonderful job, I hope our compliments seem genuine and aren't becoming tiring after all this time.
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Martyn-Arts In reply to Lopoddity [2019-12-31 04:40:30 +0000 UTC]
Hopefully! Either way, I'm going back to school to get my bachelors degree, so, silver lining!!!
Thank you so much for the warm wishes <33333 I wish you great happiness and well deserved success for the next year too! (My god that sounded so cheesy but I don't even care cause holidays allow me to sound that way!)
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