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right what it says on the tin
1.) Magnolia May showing off her green thumb. She loves running her beauty salon, but weeding and tending to her flower garden is where she truly feels home. She loves nothing more than gifting her friends and family with enormous, stunningly arranged bouquets, each one having its own meaning in the language of flowers.
2.) Revamped Cloudburst's design.....yet again. I finally like her. A lot. Of Rainbow Dash's three crotch goblins, she's still the smartest, though often seen as the weirdo that everyone forgets about. She has a good relationship with both her older siblings, and is one of the brave few that can call Phoenix on her shit without getting decked.
3.) So following this:
Rosemary was naturally pretty upset about falling out with her BFF. Phoenix awkwardly lends a sympathetic ear, and then oh whoops what is happening
Doth Magnolia's senses deceive her, or is some beefy orange mcchicken musclin' in on her secret lady love? Must TERMINATE RIVAL
4.) Rosemary and Phoenix ended up having a sorta-fling for a while. Stormy wasn't happy to learn his (former??) best friend was dating his younger sister. He figured it to be either some petty revenge scheme on Rosemary's part, or just Phoenix being a dick. Either way, he was hurt and confused, but refused to show it, and latched harder onto his then-boyfriend, Chakra Blossom.
Chakra, unfortunately, quite enjoyed Stormy's newfound isolation from his best friend and family, and started slowing ramping up his manipulation. He began corrupting Stormy into becoming a sort of second Chakra, roping him into his unsavory lifestyle of drugs, drinking, and mooching, all while eroding Stormy's self-esteem with back-handed compliments and chipping away at his boundaries. Stormy was pressured into doing a lot of things he's not proud of, including being an ass to ponies that were only concerned about him.....
The gas-lighting and emotional abuse finally led to Stormy becoming an abuser himself, and his once half-decent relationship with Chakra festered into a miserable co-dependence between two people that quite enjoyed tormenting each other. Stormy really didn't like who he was during this period. He both loved and hated Chakra, and finally, when Chakra does something unforgivable, Stormy retaliates by breaking his nose. This act of violence rattles Stormy to his core, and he ends the relationship right there, leaving Chakra shocked and wounded, in more ways than one.
Rosemary later finds Stormy facedown in a puddle of whiskey and tears. He can only miserably blubber that she was right, he is an idiot- and Rosie can only sigh in frustration.....and relief. Oh, Stormy.
She physically hefted him upright, smacks him sober......and starts blubbering herself, because how dare he have been so cruel to her? And Stormy starts bawling apologies, and then they're both bawling like babies and clinging to each other. Phoenix walks in the room, sees this soggy melodramatic reunion, then walks back out. Alright then. Good for them.
(Then, with Cloudburst's covert aid, she lit Chakra's tent on fire.)
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Comments: 180
teeneetinee [2020-05-19 17:16:03 +0000 UTC]
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LittleSlimy [2020-04-26 00:33:44 +0000 UTC]
I didn't notice this stupid thing until today, but Phoenix smug smile makes Rosemary looks like having a horn.
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AlanNights2013 [2020-04-24 21:29:50 +0000 UTC]
~ Gay Vibes going strong ~
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LucienCreates [2020-04-24 03:15:22 +0000 UTC]
I amΒ Cloud...Β
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CourierBell [2020-04-24 02:45:56 +0000 UTC]
I know this is silly but for some reason I thought it was described that Cloudburst wrote excellent smut for sometime until checking this post.
She is still one of my favorites of your ponies, regardless.
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Lopoddity In reply to CourierBell [2020-04-24 02:52:09 +0000 UTC]
Cloudy does indeed write a lot of smut
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livesfordrawings [2020-04-16 21:03:11 +0000 UTC]
I know all of your characters are adults but I really think Cloudburst would be the most Gen Z character of them all
Her sense of humor, making everyone around her being slightly confused about whatever the hell she is talking about, with a dash of worry
Using very weird slangΒ
Doing cringy things "ironically"
*minor inconvenience* "This is why God left us"
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Pandorose [2020-04-08 16:06:58 +0000 UTC]
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bobshmit13 [2020-03-31 08:40:50 +0000 UTC]
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Xionveon [2020-02-19 19:16:54 +0000 UTC]
I reeeally love Cloudburst's main colors and she's so cute!! I adore her mane style and would actually die for her, Lop, don't test me on that.
By the way, what do Phoenix and Cloudburst think of Chakra? Obviously they lit his tent on fire, but like, before then, throughout the duration of the unhealthy relationship? I can't imagine it was easy watching their brother self-destruct.
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jendoes [2020-02-01 23:22:54 +0000 UTC]
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MSSSFANGIRL [2020-02-01 04:11:27 +0000 UTC]
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lesbeanie [2020-01-27 23:18:16 +0000 UTC]
are Cloudburst, Zee, and Vogue still pals?? I like the idea of their friendship, but I'm not sure if Cloudy's revamp would change anything!
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Kylecope [2020-01-26 09:30:50 +0000 UTC]
Cloudburst sounds familiar.
Me and a bunch of friends
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GAYSWILLRULE [2020-01-25 03:36:43 +0000 UTC]
Rereading this, I had a thought; is it possible Magnolia would go after Vogue in an attempt to get Phoenix and Rosemary jealous? I feel like Mags and Vogue would work well enough together. Maybe in some Jealous Girlfriends AUβ’ Magnolia and Vogue would attempt to sabotage Rosenix, but instead the two end up hooking up themselves, possibly ending in the four becoming a poly quad?? :> I'm heard you say sometimes that a ship isn't canon unless you want it to be, is it cool if I headcanon them as a quad?
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theWeaverofTales [2020-01-15 18:50:47 +0000 UTC]
That top Magnolia May one immediately melted my heart into a lil puddle
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BlizzardsDrawings [2020-01-10 11:40:16 +0000 UTC]
Cloudburst is me but i not small i am vewy tall
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Jackie-SugarSkull [2020-01-10 02:14:27 +0000 UTC]
Then, with Cloudburstβs covert aid, Phoenix lit Chakraβs tent on fire.
Chakra would never admit it, but he learned something that night; never break the heart of someone that has a sibling that you know can kick your ass.
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Zcat91819 [2020-01-07 01:07:59 +0000 UTC]
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honkachu [2020-01-06 01:41:51 +0000 UTC]
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FireLizard2005 [2020-01-05 18:01:24 +0000 UTC]
Ponies became furries,oh no...
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XxBlueJaexX In reply to Lopoddity [2020-01-07 19:16:04 +0000 UTC]
I mean people still like Bruce, even when he was lashing out and being shitty, I'm sure we'd still love Stormy too <3
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YesTrashCan [2020-01-04 17:19:31 +0000 UTC]
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EdwennLaPikachuNoire [2020-01-03 08:31:54 +0000 UTC]
I love big punk ladies dating smol soft hippies lol but really, your Au and characters and their relationships and actions, all is so well written, so believable and realistic, my heart pumps happily every notification I see of your <3
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SiriuslyAnArtist [2020-01-03 08:04:34 +0000 UTC]
I fucking love phoenix
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lololomacho [2020-01-02 09:15:08 +0000 UTC]
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DUJ-ou-DO [2020-01-02 04:29:49 +0000 UTC]
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koffeebat [2020-01-02 00:47:03 +0000 UTC]
Why does Cloudburst make me think of you Lop
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MissIp [2020-01-01 21:33:45 +0000 UTC]
I really want to see Chakra make amends with Rosemary and Stormy. Honestly he is one my favorite characters and I love seeing him make progress and grow. It's probably gonna hurt a lot knowing what it is he did exactly, because it must have been pretty damn awful.
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kingofswing617 [2020-01-01 16:53:30 +0000 UTC]
What did Stormy even see in Chakra?
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ChibiCreates [2020-01-01 16:53:03 +0000 UTC]
I wanna see the tent fire shenanigans o.o that sounds fun
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CastoroChiaro [2020-01-01 15:48:08 +0000 UTC]
Oof. Poor Stormy. Every time I read about his and Chakra's relationship it just makes me even more sad.
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