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Published: 2018-05-03 00:30:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 122045; Favourites: 3200; Downloads: 0
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Description y'know, i was never really happy with my original concept for Nocturnus' and Chakra's hypothetical second child, Aloe Leaf:
so i decided to scrap the idea and return the character back to my original concept for her.

"Ash" (real name unknown) is a little homeless bat filly that breaks into Noct and Chakra's home one night to plunder their kitchen pantry (and maybe steal any neat shiny things she happened to spot). Noct and Chakra find themselves at a loss of what to do with this loud, brash (and quite rude) little girl, especially as she seems terrified of them and lashes out at whoever comes close. Only Primrose is able to draw near enough to coax the girl into accepting a meal (which is ravenously wolfed down after only a moment of suspicion). Prim talks to her, learning her name, but Ash refuses to disclose anything else, only that she doesn't have any parents, and nopony is lookin' for her, so butt out!

She does panic when Noct brings up contacting the authorities. It seems that wherever she came from, she isn't in a hurry to get back to. Still, Noct hates the idea of a child left to fend for themselves, so he opens their home to the girl, to Chakra's complete and total annoyance. Chakra really doesn't like the little brat, and busies himself trying to learn everything they can about her, and hopefully find somepony else to dump her on.....but everything about the girl remains a mystery. She gets registered as a ward of Equestria, and as Noct (and later Chakra) become slowly, inevitably attached, they are made her legal guardians.

More eventually comes to light about Ash's past, despite her best efforts to conceal it, but it's all quite sad and terrible. In the end, Chakra, most of all, vows to keep this little brat safe, no matter what.
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bornthiswayfox [2021-01-07 13:02:12 +0000 UTC]

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sonicXD1998 In reply to bornthiswayfox [2022-01-07 00:49:08 +0000 UTC]

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bornthiswayfox In reply to sonicXD1998 [2022-01-07 18:21:14 +0000 UTC]

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Lopoddity In reply to CaffienatedChaos [2020-07-10 21:44:22 +0000 UTC]

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CaffienatedChaos In reply to Lopoddity [2020-08-17 18:20:42 +0000 UTC]

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PapiSmoothie [2020-04-25 05:04:55 +0000 UTC]

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JurassicJasper [2020-04-08 19:42:37 +0000 UTC]

can't wait to see more of them! ;w;

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RadioactivePotato123 [2020-03-10 21:28:01 +0000 UTC]

ACK SHES SO PRECIOUS

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Chordata-Flyer [2019-12-05 01:57:31 +0000 UTC]

i'd love to see more on ash and chakra! your characters are just so fun to follow!

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COS-ChildOfShadows [2019-05-21 15:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Not gonna lie but I prefer the original concept of them compared to Aloe leaf. Ash looks great!Β 

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elfmage666 [2019-04-21 08:10:29 +0000 UTC]

I would love to see more or noct, chakra, prim and ash as a family and learning more about the new little bat filly's backstory. I am curious.

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VividSpark [2019-02-15 02:12:31 +0000 UTC]

Β Can't wait to see more of her

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silverpeltwolf [2019-02-14 22:28:26 +0000 UTC]

I'd love to see more of this explored. I'm so curious about Ash.

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NightRain96 [2019-02-10 10:37:14 +0000 UTC]

I can't stop comparing Ash to Dani from Danny Phantom.Β 

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SeaBreezyy [2019-01-03 14:53:24 +0000 UTC]

Have you considered Lucy and Ash being friends?

Ash being mostly alone and standoff-ish and overall terrible at making friends accidentally befriending the literal hellspawn of the two most powerful ("reformed") villains in Equestria who is the polar opposite of Ash in almost every way. (Maybe they had art class together in an attempt by their parents for them to make friends?)

Sombra and Tirek are proud she made a friend with a rough and tumble, foul-mouthed, "looks cute but will fight you to the death over the last popsicle" bat ponyπŸ˜‚ Meanwhile Chakra is far less amused by his adopted daughter's new spider-face halfbreed friendo who eats all of Prim's cookies before he has a chance to get any. Prim thinks Lucy's adorable and loves how cute and nice she is and is also probably the only one immune to her crocodile tears. Noct is a little overprotective at first bc Ash has been through a lot but as soon as Lucy and Ash pull some dramatic stunt on chakra, she's on his good list.

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prezaurian [2018-09-16 18:12:28 +0000 UTC]

I don't enjoy thinking about what may have happened in her past (those bands of hairless scar tissue covered by bandages are telling).Β  But for future?Β  Took a page from both legal guardians.Β  Therapist for PTSD soldiers.

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thecolorlesscrayon [2018-09-16 00:14:41 +0000 UTC]

I think she went and became an apprentice of tempest, and decided to join Luna’s royal guard to follow in her bat dads footsteps

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SnowyLilacs [2018-09-15 13:40:12 +0000 UTC]

I kinda want to see something like a run away from a cult/science laboratory that does cruel experiments on kidnapped/given up children and other animals/creatures.Β Lets say they where trying to either make the bat ponies into "normal"ponies(these folks have a misguided hatred for the bat ponies/Princess Luna) and others become super solders

I want to say she was taken away as a newborn foal and her "parents" where the ones who put her up to/forced into the various tests and experiments (think of Eleven from Stranger Things or Maximum Ride from the Maximum Ride series,or even some of the history of the X-Men)


IMO I find the whole abusive parents very cliche.Yes its real,but this does not have to be.

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VividSpark In reply to SnowyLilacs [2019-02-15 02:10:44 +0000 UTC]

Β That's a great concept! Love it! Wonder if Lop agrees

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SillyWriterGall [2018-09-15 11:02:14 +0000 UTC]

HEADCANNON ACCEPTED!!!!

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DawnsyBebo [2018-09-15 04:15:29 +0000 UTC]

AWWW she’s so small and precious! Primrose will be such a good sis and Chakra and Noct are sweet doofy fathers that will never let anyone hurt so much as a hair on her head aaaaaa

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Sarcosse [2018-09-15 02:31:02 +0000 UTC]

I really hope you draw more of her, like perhaps an adult version? I'd love to see that, she's absolutely adorable and I wanna know her complete backstory. My theory is either 1.) She was abused, like many comments have mentioned.

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LunarSkies92 [2018-09-15 02:29:03 +0000 UTC]

are those burn marks on her forearms?

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ilovecoffee65 [2018-09-15 00:47:14 +0000 UTC]

I think Ash might have been abused, so she run away ended up in Canterlot (I assume that’s where Chakra, Noct and Primrose live judging by the fact that batponies arent usually seen around any other area)
And so she stumbled upon Chakra or Noct, and decided to adopt her. That’s my theory

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kinda-lost [2018-09-14 23:56:52 +0000 UTC]

I think Ash went to school but got a bit bullied and became homeschooled and began to train with Bat Dad to be part of the Night Guard, she develops a close relationship with Chakra due to him having a calming aura. Soooo it’s like... Chakra she can talk to but Bat Dad she can hang out with.

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UntappedChaos [2018-09-13 04:30:40 +0000 UTC]

I honestly need more NoctBlossom in my life, and all the filly hijinks that come with it.Β  //faceplants

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Lowee333 [2018-09-11 21:48:30 +0000 UTC]

When can we see more of ash and how she fits into her new family?

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Pinka13 [2018-08-14 05:18:34 +0000 UTC]

Now I really want to know more about Ash

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IloveGasterSans [2018-08-05 02:44:11 +0000 UTC]

CHAKRA DAD GIVES ME HOPE

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Sakura-Kagurazaka [2018-07-21 13:58:11 +0000 UTC]

I noticed on the last sketch Chakra has a medic symbol on his sleeve. Did he become a doctor or something?
I love the idea of Ash. It gives him someone to connect with on how they grew up

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mossscales In reply to Sakura-Kagurazaka [2018-07-29 08:36:01 +0000 UTC]

I'm not Lop, but I'm pretty sure Chakra's special talent is therapy and calming + helping people, so he became a medic of the Lunar Guard with Noct (who is a general or smthn)? I believe, though I couldn't tell you where I read that

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Sakura-Kagurazaka In reply to mossscales [2018-08-18 14:02:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!Β 

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KawaiiKitsuneStudios [2018-07-14 19:47:59 +0000 UTC]

I cried real physical tears when I saw the last one. Not joking.Β 

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AceGamer114 [2018-06-22 10:35:56 +0000 UTC]

aw i loved aloe, oh well.

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ReflectingDusk [2018-06-20 12:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Primrose is so cuuute <3

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Light-Dusk [2018-06-13 06:48:37 +0000 UTC]

The only reason I'm sad about this (so far) is no more preggers Chakra.

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RobotRabbits [2018-06-11 00:27:24 +0000 UTC]

Tell us what happened to her arms you coward

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Lopoddity In reply to RobotRabbits [2018-06-11 01:37:55 +0000 UTC]

haha i am a coward

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RobotRabbits In reply to Lopoddity [2018-06-12 22:55:53 +0000 UTC]

HNNNNNG
I'll just have to keep following you forever until the story comes out I guess...

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g1ngerpop [2018-05-30 22:05:00 +0000 UTC]

is ash canon?

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slayerfan45 [2018-05-28 23:48:58 +0000 UTC]

Is chakra a paramedic?

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Lopoddity In reply to slayerfan45 [2018-06-08 02:23:28 +0000 UTC]

He's a medical officer in the Lunar Guard~

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slayerfan45 In reply to Lopoddity [2018-06-08 11:50:36 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, that’s an interesting direction to take the character, Β But I like it!

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Reading4halfmylife [2018-05-27 20:45:03 +0000 UTC]

FUCK, I need more of this babu! Is she canon, she's canon, right?

Can't wait for Ash's birth parents to meet the lieutenant of the night guard. Noct is going to drop kick them.

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Goldfirewolf [2018-05-25 14:50:13 +0000 UTC]

Normally I don’t like black and red for OCs but there’s something about Ash’s simple design and brownish tints and the way she meshes with the rest of the family that’s just captivating.Β 

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ElfEatsWorld2424 [2018-05-23 22:04:32 +0000 UTC]

I'd like to know more about the scars on her arms, she's seems like a tough little rascal and I absolutely love her colors. Great work once again!! Hopefully someday soon some backstory will come along, until then we wait ^^ ❀️

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AnonymousEgg [2018-05-23 01:32:59 +0000 UTC]

Welp there goes my heart breaking again

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