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kalabadi-hallaj In reply to endave [2013-05-26 07:24:12 +0000 UTC]
Also do check this guy out refing some armour dets [link]
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kalabadi-hallaj In reply to endave [2013-05-26 07:09:20 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome Have a good day
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endave In reply to endave [2013-05-17 11:37:07 +0000 UTC]
Deviation Submission: Critique for rejection (Placeholder)
Hey there, this is quite a solid piece! But I do spot a few avenues for improvement, you are correct. So allow me to explain through a critique:
This is an ambitious piece! I'm a huge fan of painting armor myself and the texture is a really good addition. But be careful not to lean too much on textures, hand painted textures will always look best. A simple addition that you can add is some cracks and scratches which come equipped with their own highlights and shadows to add detail. I think the facial anatomy could also be improved a little. The hair is fantastic and the lighting on the right cheek is perfect. The lips however, are a thick, a little unshapely and a tad too dark for a typical white male. Male lips are an extremely difficult aspect of facial anatomy. I suggest looking at some portraiture and studying varying shapes for reference. A rule of thumb that I generally have learned is the subtler the better. One final point, is in the darkness of the area around his eyes. When an outline is so dark and clear, it can cause the eyes to look outlined and flat especially when the whites of the eyes are slightly too white.
You have a good composition and you definitely did not skimp out on the background! It is a solid piece with good areas for improvement and growth. Thanks in advance for your understanding! We look forward to any future pieces and will continue to try and provide unbiased and constructive feedback.
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endave In reply to endave [2013-05-19 11:53:28 +0000 UTC]
Deviation Submission: Critique for rejection (Placeholder)
Hey Endave!
I didn't vote on this piece but I'll try and give you some feedback ^^
First of all you have an excellent base down. The textures on the armor and the background are awesome. I really like his hair too, and his skin and stubble.
The only things that let me down are detailing and some anatomy. For example I'm very distracted by his lips, they look a bit low and undefined. As for the anatomy, something looks wrong about the body but I don't have a good enough eye to pinpoint what it is The thumb on his hand doesn't look like it's curling around the sword but just looks like it's sitting straight like one of the fingers.
I hope this helps, though of course it's only my opinion and other people might see it differently
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JaredTheDragon [2013-11-19 01:04:33 +0000 UTC]
What a dashing young fellow!
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rarefreak [2013-10-08 13:19:54 +0000 UTC]
always hard for me to imagine galad....he should like absolutely hard/just and absolutely stunning for women at the same time.
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S3cRt [2013-05-17 06:08:12 +0000 UTC]
Wow, amazing.
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endave In reply to S3cRt [2013-05-17 11:37:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!!
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S3cRt In reply to endave [2013-05-17 12:09:45 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome
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Angiepureheart In reply to endave [2013-05-16 15:57:02 +0000 UTC]
thats right you do XD !! hehe i have finally finished the book btw XD
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endave In reply to Angiepureheart [2013-05-16 16:00:26 +0000 UTC]
Nice! I have not finished the series yet. I am still on book 6!! lol
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Angiepureheart In reply to endave [2013-05-16 16:02:22 +0000 UTC]
not spoiling anything dont worry XD
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HannaClay [2013-05-13 22:02:20 +0000 UTC]
Good job. And you're right, after weeks fighting, he wouldn't be pretty any more. (though he's not drop-dead gorgeous...I think you manage female beauty far more easily.)
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Angiepureheart [2013-05-13 15:55:27 +0000 UTC]
ohohhh ohhhh i like it! lots! i just imagined him without the beard! XD
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endave In reply to Angiepureheart [2013-05-13 16:23:54 +0000 UTC]
Yea, I know most people would have imagined him without a beard especially since all the existing art on him depicts him as such. I wanted to have stumble growing on his face since it is more realistic for a soldier not to have shaved during battle. I guess I could always remove it if it takes away from the character.
Glad you liked it regardless of the beard!
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Angiepureheart In reply to endave [2013-05-13 20:48:09 +0000 UTC]
thats one awsome fellow, with or without the beard XD
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AngelOfBrokenHearts In reply to endave [2013-05-13 15:21:59 +0000 UTC]
I'm usually a huge stickler for accuracy in my WoT stuff but I accepted this with no problems! The books are lengthy and it can be hard to find the right descriptions. Let's just say the Children are just that desperate for recruits haha!
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