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Duiker ā€” Love Song - 5

Published: 2012-06-13 17:37:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 33563; Favourites: 163; Downloads: 145
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MyFanFictionPicture [2012-06-13 18:50:24 +0000 UTC]

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Awwwww It's so cute! So adorable!! So lovely!!!! Alvin and his brothers look like the "real" Chipmunks of the cartoon of BAGDASARIAN PRODUCTIONS! It's just so cute!!!! Very good!!! The room and the background of the image are so real and so good drawing! I love it!!! I hope you will make much Chipmunks Comics like this one and more Chipmunks draw! Your Chipmunks draw are just incredible! So real and lovely!!! Congratulations!!!! You're a great designer!!!! I can't wait for see the next page! I would love to see what happend to Alvin and his brothers! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Continue your art, my friend!!!e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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XGBlue In reply to MyFanFictionPicture [2012-06-15 05:49:33 +0000 UTC]

Like I said with the other all-five-star critique, it doesn't make sense to give this comic a five on originality. Alvin and Simon are a widely used couple, the chipmunks themselves are a widely used fandom, and to be honest the only truly original thing here is the art style and the plot.

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MyFanFictionPicture In reply to XGBlue [2012-06-15 12:01:52 +0000 UTC]

Everyone's opinion.

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Duiker In reply to MyFanFictionPicture [2012-06-13 18:52:27 +0000 UTC]

I will, thank you!

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MyFanFictionPicture In reply to Duiker [2012-06-13 19:02:50 +0000 UTC]

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crazedg [2012-06-13 18:30:43 +0000 UTC]

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this is absolutely outstanding! your past few comics have been a pleasure to see. you are a magnificent artist and i mean it. if there was one chipmunk artist that i would adore would be you, absolutely you. the background is well drawn, wait not well drawn it was greatly drawn. i hope u never stop drawing the chipmunks. this is your specialty! forever love the chipmunks, and forever love duiker! you should do some tutorials on how you make your comics. i'm should your tutorials will be as amazing as always. that i all i have to say friend and have a wonderful day.

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Duiker In reply to crazedg [2012-06-13 18:49:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I don't have any plans for stopping, don't worry about that <3 A tutorial is a good idea too! Though, there are many people who are better at comic work than I am.

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crazedg In reply to Duiker [2012-06-13 19:43:18 +0000 UTC]

^^

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XGBlue In reply to crazedg [2012-06-13 18:38:20 +0000 UTC]

I agree with all the text in this review, but the originality score is too high. Alvin and Simon is a widely used pairing and as such the originality score is definitely not five stars.

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XGBlue [2012-06-13 18:29:46 +0000 UTC]

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A great comic so far, and this page is no exception. Alvin looks great in all his pajama-clad glory, even when half asleep. The comic looks as if it was drawn by the original animators, brilliant! It has a good storyline so far, and I'm sure anyone who has read it will be itching for the next page the instant the finish this one. Of course, the pairing is widely used, so the originality score of the piece suffers. However, it's an interesting plot nonetheless. There is also a slight continuity issue, not that it really matters. This issue is that in page 4, Alvin appeared in boxer briefs, while in page 5 he appears to be in plain briefs. I guess maybe he is portrayed differently in the story. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Shrug"/>

Anyway, overall an amazing job!
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Duiker In reply to XGBlue [2012-06-13 18:37:48 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the briefs, haha! When I was drawing this page I decided I'd rather have him wearing those than boxer-briefs. More cute, I think. I could go back and change them, but... I'll chock it up to the story Simon was reading, or something! Much more conducive to my laziness.
Thanks for the crit <3

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XGBlue In reply to Duiker [2012-06-13 18:41:18 +0000 UTC]

Aha, I see. Yeah, he's so much cuter in this page than the last, and I think that change helps. ^^ I would say that whether or not to change them is up to you, but if not, saying it was part of the story would make sense.

You're welcome! ^^ (Although, I slightly disagree with the other one that has been posted)

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Duiker In reply to XGBlue [2012-06-13 18:48:18 +0000 UTC]

Aw well, people tend to rate their crits highly, anyway :3 Thanks again, though!

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XGBlue In reply to Duiker [2012-06-13 18:49:00 +0000 UTC]

Well I try to keep mine accurate. ^^ You're welcome!

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Alvin-1fan [2014-01-08 03:48:26 +0000 UTC]

COOL

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PankakeCarnivor [2013-07-04 22:53:17 +0000 UTC]

Uh oh....

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BrittanyMiller4Eva [2013-01-08 23:06:31 +0000 UTC]

I can't see the page on inkbunny. I don't have an account. Plz post it here on DA

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SummerCorn In reply to BrittanyMiller4Eva [2013-03-13 03:16:52 +0000 UTC]

You have the change the settings of things you want to see, but you don't need an account for it.

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SketchedImperfection [2012-12-06 10:43:21 +0000 UTC]

Can you please post it on dA? Ink bunny is not working at all for me.

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psuliem [2012-10-27 17:48:21 +0000 UTC]

I specifically made an Inkbunny account to read the rest of this and favorite them.
This is amazing. I love the emotions, the shading, the realism of the background. Not to mention the way you draw the chipmunks. It's extremely accurate and cute. I can't wait to see more.

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Duiker In reply to psuliem [2012-10-27 17:59:43 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Inkbunny is a great site, I hope you'll enjoy it there! Obviously, any of the comic that has r18 situations will be posted there only.
I am really happy that people seem to like this stuff <3

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psuliem In reply to Duiker [2012-10-27 18:08:20 +0000 UTC]

I probably will. I love furries, so.
I will look forward to seeing more of your comics and will pay better attention to stuff when it comes out.
I'm glad people do. It would be sad of they didn't.

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stephxanatos [2012-08-23 13:28:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh noes! Where is the rest?? Wanna see what happens! LOVE LOVE LOVE ur artwork!
Rock on!!

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Inoknow [2012-08-17 09:54:40 +0000 UTC]

Now I wanna hear Alvin sing the cheeky song, damn you, Lando!!!

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TheodoreSeville85 [2012-08-11 02:34:56 +0000 UTC]

Will you be continuing this? It's been amazing so far, and I want to see what will happen.

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zed15600 [2012-06-30 09:33:22 +0000 UTC]

Hey, can I translate your comics to spanish?
I really like these.

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Duiker In reply to zed15600 [2012-06-30 09:55:54 +0000 UTC]

sure

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lucario-sensei [2012-06-25 19:59:57 +0000 UTC]

I thought to myself: How there you stole from Lando!!!! and then I saw your page and then said ooooohhh!!! Just started to get interested in the munks again cuz of you XD!! I do hope i can draw as good as you but i'm still trying hard from trying different styles ^^ you're officially one of my inspirations :3

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CoreyAMurray [2012-06-20 07:56:06 +0000 UTC]

I see Alvin's butt!

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Duiker In reply to CoreyAMurray [2012-06-20 16:11:02 +0000 UTC]

yes P:

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CoreyAMurray In reply to Duiker [2012-06-20 16:37:23 +0000 UTC]

Well, anyway, thanks for drawing such a fine comic!

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AATC2282 [2012-06-18 07:50:59 +0000 UTC]

your works never cease to amaze me. Love the perspective, BG, and how well you put the story together.
I was going to write a critique, but I got lazy but pretty much, this is a really great piece in your comic. Love how you kinda blurred the BG of the first 2 panels, made it really seem that he just woke up.

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Duiker In reply to AATC2282 [2012-06-18 13:16:31 +0000 UTC]

Aw thank you for the kind words! I appreciate it

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FictionalMind [2012-06-17 01:40:51 +0000 UTC]

LOL! Cute, great drawing! I wonder what will happen next! Great and amazing work as always!

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Kilo60 [2012-06-16 03:09:37 +0000 UTC]

Nice underpants, Alvin

In all seriousness, you truly have real talent! This looks amazing!
I mean, you're working with Bagdasarian on something right?

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Kilo60 [2012-06-15 17:24:23 +0000 UTC]

You such raw talent. Everything looks real, your furniture and backgrounds have perfect shadows, and Alvin looks very cute too! I'm also glad you draw them in the 80's style.

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mizzy-snoezy [2012-06-15 12:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Just love it c:

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Duiker In reply to mizzy-snoezy [2012-06-15 12:12:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you <3

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CreativeMunk97 [2012-06-14 03:29:42 +0000 UTC]

._. ........... RETREAT!! XD hahahah nice drawing by the way I just wanted to add that comment

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PhineasFlynns [2012-06-14 00:04:45 +0000 UTC]

omg!!!


*flail* You must update!

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ChipmunkFan19 [2012-06-13 22:05:32 +0000 UTC]

Well I've sorta already said what I wanted to on IB but I figured why not comment on here as well.

As always I love your artwork because I love your attention to detail because your work looks awesome.And this is no exception and what is so nice is that your style for this comic is just as great and it resembles the 80/90's style so perfectly that it looks like it could be turned into an episode.

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AsherTye [2012-06-13 20:18:15 +0000 UTC]

I am constantly amazed at the quality of your work. Alvin just looks so adorable here. Cannot wait for the next page.

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Duiker In reply to AsherTye [2012-06-13 20:31:50 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you! I think I've settled on their style, now.

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MasterghostUnlimited [2012-06-13 19:43:25 +0000 UTC]

hm... this is new

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Duiker In reply to MasterghostUnlimited [2012-06-13 19:56:51 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm

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MasterghostUnlimited In reply to Duiker [2012-06-13 19:58:24 +0000 UTC]

well i never seen the chipmunks like this before

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Duiker In reply to MasterghostUnlimited [2012-06-13 20:32:38 +0000 UTC]

I blame television!

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MasterghostUnlimited In reply to Duiker [2012-06-13 22:31:01 +0000 UTC]

lol okay then

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Zep19 [2012-06-13 19:26:22 +0000 UTC]

Aww, Alvin looks cute and adorable! (Especially in his underwear ) I just can't get enough of the cuteness! And when he wakes up... absolutely adorable.

Poor Simon, fleeing in terror, and all lol.

Excellent Job as always!

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Duiker In reply to Zep19 [2012-06-13 19:37:10 +0000 UTC]

Now we just need more excuses to have them in their underwear, haha

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