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Duiker — Love Song - 3
Published: 2012-04-28 06:50:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 25473; Favourites: 178; Downloads: 104
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What will Simon find on that phone I wonder
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First off, I'd like to say that you're nailing the whole comic book style. I really like the style you're doing since there are no blank spaces in between panels. the fact that you picked a scene that could be a BG pic and made it that was a very good idea to eliminate those blank spaces. I also like how the panes overlap sometimes like the phone, and also the way you censor brands ( I'm not so sure on what you call substituting the logo for a similar one is called)
Anyway, on to the details. The characters are drawn perfectly in my opinion. their facial expressions are perfect. Especially how you manage to make Alvin look almost too peaceful in his sleep.
About the BG now, it's really great too! perfect shading and perspective. I was just thinking that the window to the left also needs some light to shine through because it just seems a bit odd. I have this thing about the BG too, why are the windows open when Alvin's still asleep? When I think about it at least the windows should be less opened. Also the window to the top, they don't seem to have curtains. I find absolutely no problem with the pic other than those little details. But I feel that you might've not thought of that because your attention to detail is very impressive! you thought of what you could possibly put in the room and make it seem so real. ( the toys, books, computer, etc.)
Anyway, overall terrific job! can't wait for the next page and keep up the good work!
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Thank you so much for the critique! I really, really appreciate it. Regarding the windows, I figured Simon would have opened them when he woke up, just in hopes of encouraging Alvin to wake up at a decent hour, haha. The layout of the room was more or less lifted directly from the tv show and movies <3
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Oh adorable! Alvin looks amazing I just wanna cuddle him!
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thank you THANK YOU FOR FEELING MY SOUL
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There's a acorn on the back instead of an apple. That's brilliant.
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Thanks for pointing that out...I knew something looked different. Interesting^^
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So cool! Can't wait for the next one! All the blue, green, and white in the first panels made me want Alvin to show up so we'd get some red and yellow colors in there. 
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There's already two more pages after this, actually!
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Oh gosh, really? Wait, is it SimonXAlvin?
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can i have a link to pt 4 cuz on inkbunny it wont let me even though i have a account and im over 18
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This comic is terrific so far! I'm drawing mine at the moment, and I hope it's half as good looking as this!
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HOW DO YOU STINKIN DO IT! this looks like you bought it off the internet and faked it was yours it's that good! guh i wish i drew like you MAN! i wanna draw like this so bad what program did you use
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im soo jealous right now...your chipmunks are soo like the original...and how you do the comic is amazing!
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Oh gosh, you're so talented!!!
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AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! Please keep up with this!!!!! I love comics and Alvon and I swear you will make me as happy as can be if you work as fast(but as best) as you can in this series! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please!
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I think my favorite thing is the little acorn on the phone XD
Amazing job and I seriously wish I could do this 
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I like this very much, Duiker! Hoping to see the next page soon. I thought the Love Song name was for another comic strip lol. Oh well, beautiful work as usual!
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the art, the colouring, the cliff hanger and the panels!<3 i looove this! can't stop wondering wuts on that phone!! >_<
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AWWW SLEEPING ALVIN IS SOO CUTE!!! -GUSHES-
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awwww they're so cute!!!^^
Alvin is lovely!!!^^
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Wow.
I love all the faces on the page. So adorable.
Simon is such a nosy nerd, and I love him <3
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AWESOME!! just awesome. the acorn phone rolaf nice work. if htey ever restart up the series they need to hire you.
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ah no problem your welcome. love your art. all of it.
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Superb drawings. Just awsome! If this gets revivedin 2-D, you need to be an animator for the show.
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First I will need to hide all my porn of them I guess hahahah
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Nut phone, sounds to me more like that technology's built for chipmunks.
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Why wouldn't you take a nutphone to bed with you?
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My question is still valid. xD
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Awww, these are so cute! <3 You are soooo good at drawing these guys. Can't wait to see where this goes.
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I'll be sure to keep you guys updated!
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