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Published: 2014-11-11 07:56:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 3267; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Oh NO! Not HER again! What the heck's she up to this time!?


In case you haven't already guessed, I'm talking about HER, that rude, nasty, foul-mouthed little girl who thinks she's such hot shit! I don't know her name, or much else about her really, but anybody with half a brain can attest to what an unpleasant brat she is.


She generally comes this way in the mid-to-late afternoon, (probably sleeps until one in the afternoon) cruising along on her skateboard while listening to heavy metal, punk rock and gangster rap on her headphones with the volume WAY too fucking high and stuffing her face with cookies or chips. That Wonder Woman backpack of hers seems to carry a near endless supply of contraceptives and store-bought snacks, and she has an unfortunate habit of sagging her pleated-plaid miniskirt and exposing her black emo-girl panties with pink skulls on them for the whole wide world to see.


Whenever I tell her "No Fucking Skateboards Allowed" she flips me off, and I see her hanging out with the same three douche bags almost every time. THE ... SAME ... THREE roid-raging, spiky-haired, junk food guzzling, fist-fight starting, baggy shorts with wristbands and tube sock wearing skater dicks! I don't know who these boys are, but they all seem to adore that HORRIBLE girl, and I'm sure that the feeling's MORE than mutual! When she's not tearing up the sidewalks and causing mischief with all three of them, she's making out with a different one each time, and not only are her guy friends aware of this, I've even overheard them egging each other on!


That girl's a menace associating with boys like that, and I could tell she had loose morals the second I laid eyes on her! I don't care that there seems to be a great deal of mutual understanding, affection and respect between her and those jerks, and I don't care that all the local preteen girls think she's cool and that both the guy who runs the all-night deli and the old lady who runs the bagel shop think she's an absolute doll, I don't like the sight of her!


Nothing makes me more uncomfortable than her and her friends disturbing the peace and treating public property like it's their own, and nothing makes me angrier than seeing a young lady glamoring sass and vulgarity. I tell you, that little bitch is rotten to the core, and the world would be better off without people like her.
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Comments: 8

Adrianpink [2014-12-03 07:52:01 +0000 UTC]

Good job with the unreliable narrator - she seems like a judgmental hypocrite haha. Drea is awesome

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Drekeagan In reply to Adrianpink [2014-12-03 08:06:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks And the narrator could've been any type of person, but it's funny that both you and I envisioned the narrator as a she. A pretentious, prejudiced, conservative old lady maybe? (the type to observe other people's sex lives) I wrote this as a stand alone piece, but I thought you should see it after the Ferguson verdict. Profiling and premature judgement can happen to anyone, and sometimes it surfaces in very unpleasant ways.

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Adrianpink In reply to Drekeagan [2014-12-08 07:18:13 +0000 UTC]

Haha I realized that it could be another gender I sent that. And yeah very true. Good message.

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Souledge-master [2014-11-11 15:33:29 +0000 UTC]

This is a rather interesting poem you have here...in a way it kinda makes me think about people I've disliked due to their actions...perhaps if I got to know them better rather then just disliking them.....

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Drekeagan In reply to Souledge-master [2014-11-12 03:27:21 +0000 UTC]

That's true. And I'm sure we've all been on both ends of this kind of thing before.

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Souledge-master In reply to Drekeagan [2014-11-12 03:47:22 +0000 UTC]

indeed. its not often work on here makes me think. ^^ thanks for that.

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Drekeagan In reply to Souledge-master [2014-11-12 05:49:43 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. When someone says to a writer "your piece really made me think," that's one of the highest compliments a reader can give, so thank you as well.

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Souledge-master In reply to Drekeagan [2014-11-12 21:03:10 +0000 UTC]

^^ anytime.

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