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Dovesplash — TGB-Birds of a Feather
Published: 2012-08-02 23:53:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 458; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 6
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CRITIQUE PLEASE~ help me improve!
Just a doodle of Cadence with a bird that actually turned into a picture XD... :3
She always seems to get lost chasing a bird or something, so I figured that I’d draw her with a bird (it’s supposed to be a scarlet tangier) . I like how she came out specifically, but I don’t know, something bothers me about the background (probably the color of the grass XD)
Cadence ([link] ) and art copyright ~Dovesplash
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Comments: 17
Ooh she's soo beautiful <333
Do you have a skype account?
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Aww 
I unfortuanatly do not have a skype, it cost to much to run on our internet plan :c
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Aww Cay~ *huggles* Stop being so cute. <3
As for critiques:
Seeing as the sun is right behind Cadence, her shading should be darker (which also the grass should be). The grass is too green and should have a more orange/yellowish tint, Cadence could also have a bit orange colour but it's mostly the grass.
Otherwise really lovely, the water looks nice and I love Cay's pose.
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forgot to fav this! it looks really cute
love ur charrie
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Aww thanks <3
I love her too <3
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I've never seen this character!! I love it, it's beautiful art!!
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Yeah, the grass seems a bit lazy and doesn't have any lighting/shading, but it still looks great!
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XD I tried changing it to a yellowsih color, but it made the grass look dead ;3;
Thanks <3
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This is the most adorable thing ever
One thing I'd say to improve is to add whiskers(: Otherwise it's fabulous!
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Thanks Mist! <3
I KNEW I was forgetting something! And I even had them on the sketch! XD
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