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Published: 2011-10-15 19:08:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 356; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 6
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This is my over due half of an art trade with .this is her character
I was inspired by this [link]
;3; I cant draw grass....help! if anyone knows an easy way to draw grass let me know ;3;
Anyway, I fhte shading looks random/splochy to you, Thats good! Beacause I wanted to imitate the look of her laying under a tree. I will have to admit this is not my best picture....well concedering im on artblock its ok...:3; I HATE art block....
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Since you wanted me to critique something, I'm going to critique this! Even though it was done in October xD
PROS
I love the ways you draw the eyes. Just the shape of them, it looks like an actual cat's eye. A lot of people draw them anime-ish. Plus, I love the ears. They're not too big, not too small, and they also look realistic. The paws also do too. Also like how I can see the cats shoulders behind her head.
The shading. I love it because you don't go overboard on it like I do. You also put it in the appropriate places [unlike some people who just follow the lines]. Maybe making it a little bit splotchier in some places, but it's fine.
CONS
Really all I could notice was the position. It might just be me, but normally when I see a cat lying down I see their back kind of to one side and the paws in the other direction. Kind of like this [link] . But if you wanted to do it with the back sitting up completely that's fine also xD
Pet peeve of mine is when I can see the lines through the grass. Maybe making more grass lines everyway that are a bit darker or something. Sorry but BIG PET PEEVE.
Also that back paw looks a bit...plump xD
Jesus this is a bad critique DON'T LOOK AT IT QAQ
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Thanks! I see what you mean about the foot this is Kinda old and I can see most of the obvious flaws when I look back at this I feel like the eyes are a bit too far apart XD
Thanks anyway ^^
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Yeah I had a feeling you would say something that you could see your mistakes. But I felt like critiquing [?] this one for some reason.
Oh, no problem~!
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Thanks alot! Serious! This is sooooo cute! <333 I like the flowers very alot also! And I love how you draw eyes! Thankyouthankyouthankyou!
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