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WhiteWolfAlchemist [2008-12-22 19:44:43 +0000 UTC]
I think I know why her nose looks weird in the third panel.
What you want to do is just line her eyesockets with a darker colour (a couple of shades darker than skintone) and leave the bridge of her nose alone, or even lighten it slightly. It'll bring her nose forward and deepen her eyesockets.
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Comie In reply to WhiteWolfAlchemist [2008-12-22 22:57:15 +0000 UTC]
kays ;3 don't feel like it right now though, will do t'morrow! And perhaps the next page too... with a different way of colouring. This one looks messy and takes forever. I'll use less colours and more details, takes about same amount of time and looks cleaner.
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Aywren [2008-12-21 02:24:47 +0000 UTC]
This is neat, Comie! I love the colors and I think the background has a very artistic feel to it! You have me curious now -- keep going! The beginning is always the hardest part.
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Comie In reply to Aywren [2008-12-21 10:32:25 +0000 UTC]
hehe awright then xD Thanks!
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WhiteWolfAlchemist [2008-12-20 19:52:41 +0000 UTC]
First panel: Her forehead wants bringing forehead. It's too shallow and makes her look a little odd.
Third: Add just a touch of shading around her eyes to mark where her eyesockets end and her nose begins. It'll give the face more depth.
I rather like the texture the shading has. What brush are you using?
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Comie In reply to WhiteWolfAlchemist [2008-12-20 22:42:46 +0000 UTC]
thanks :3
just regular round brush with low flow and low opacity.
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WhiteWolfAlchemist In reply to Comie [2008-12-21 04:59:32 +0000 UTC]
Her forehead wants bringing forehead
oh god typo that second "forehead" should be "forwards"
And thanks.
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