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Published: 2008-12-20 16:18:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 276; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Done. Don't like it much anymore. Sigh, for the next page I'm going for either grayscale or a different style of colouring. This takes too long and it doesn't look satisfactory enough.

Last panel is horrible. I couldn't seem to bother do it like the others. Oh and I forgot that weird yellow light I had going in the other panels. not really like you notice it much, especially since the background (of colour splodges) doesn't have the mysterious yellow in it. Leigh looks damn sickly.
Specially third panel. She's just dirty. I used the wrong colour for shading in the middle of her face. What's that mud you got there on your face, hun?

She's short, which explains the waiter thinking she's pretty young for coffee. But that's no excuse for 'im. He should just mind his own business >: She's 17. or something. I sort of forgot for the moment. He's the one at fault for judging by the cover anyways. I wish Leigh would get angrier. Maybe I will next page... when he brings her coffee... dun dun dun.


Original comment:
I've been working on this all day.

I did this in such an unorderly fashion that the next two panels after the first screwed up. The hair in particular. I didn't make sure I had all the colours somewhere I used for each shade and such like... which is why the skin is also different... And also why the second two are just simply so half-assed.

And the shirt. Anyhoo. The first frame has a photo manip bg. Because I felt like trying it out. Then I sloshed some colours over it.

This is the first page, hopefully. I might redo the colour. I have also yet to do the last fourth of the page. XD

Leigh looks mighty tired there. I wonder why? (All-nighters, trying to catch her a vampy.)

I have also yet to add text bubbles with the radio saying stuff. I forgot about it until now. It's supposed to be saying stuff about a serial killer who only targets blonde young women and blah...

I'm sick of this right now so I'm gonna leave it alone for a while.
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Comments: 7

WhiteWolfAlchemist [2008-12-22 19:44:43 +0000 UTC]

I think I know why her nose looks weird in the third panel.

What you want to do is just line her eyesockets with a darker colour (a couple of shades darker than skintone) and leave the bridge of her nose alone, or even lighten it slightly. It'll bring her nose forward and deepen her eyesockets.

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Comie In reply to WhiteWolfAlchemist [2008-12-22 22:57:15 +0000 UTC]

kays ;3 don't feel like it right now though, will do t'morrow! And perhaps the next page too... with a different way of colouring. This one looks messy and takes forever. I'll use less colours and more details, takes about same amount of time and looks cleaner.

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Aywren [2008-12-21 02:24:47 +0000 UTC]

This is neat, Comie! I love the colors and I think the background has a very artistic feel to it! You have me curious now -- keep going! The beginning is always the hardest part.

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Comie In reply to Aywren [2008-12-21 10:32:25 +0000 UTC]

hehe awright then xD Thanks!

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WhiteWolfAlchemist [2008-12-20 19:52:41 +0000 UTC]

First panel: Her forehead wants bringing forehead. It's too shallow and makes her look a little odd.

Third: Add just a touch of shading around her eyes to mark where her eyesockets end and her nose begins. It'll give the face more depth.

I rather like the texture the shading has. What brush are you using?

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Comie In reply to WhiteWolfAlchemist [2008-12-20 22:42:46 +0000 UTC]

thanks :3

just regular round brush with low flow and low opacity.

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WhiteWolfAlchemist In reply to Comie [2008-12-21 04:59:32 +0000 UTC]

Her forehead wants bringing forehead

oh god typo that second "forehead" should be "forwards"

And thanks.

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