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BornOnTheNinth [2019-12-05 04:19:33 +0000 UTC]
I wonder how Kore got those scars on her back. I don't they were Xander's doing, because they don't look surgical in nature.
And I like the detail of the island inhabitants just going along with the guilds and uniforms without knowing why. There are plenty of times in real life where people go along with traditions they don't understand "because everyone else is doing it".
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chateaugrief In reply to BornOnTheNinth [2019-12-05 15:06:12 +0000 UTC]
not Xander's doing, you're right. and going along, yes, especially in the workplace. sign this card, go to company christmas party, etc. to be fair though few companies have such elaborate costume rules as xander's.
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chateaugrief In reply to MelaClara [2017-02-04 21:41:15 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like it! It's nice to hear your thoughts. Sorry about the story confusion...that's always the trouble showing a confused character early on, you risk making the reader confused too. If you've got any particular things that you think I could have done better, by all means mention them! I'm always looking for a fresh opinion.
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CrazyDragy [2015-11-03 21:16:17 +0000 UTC]
The dress XD i like this its intresting
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chateaugrief In reply to CrazyDragy [2015-11-03 23:14:29 +0000 UTC]
thanks! I'm certainly having fun making it.
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