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Published: 2011-01-07 04:26:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 2860; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 50
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I was pretty sick over Christmas holidays so this page was delayed about a week. But it's up now. Thanks to everyone who has been reading my comic so far.Additional Pages
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Great stuff, but it's "lose"(pron. "looz" = mislay, can't find) not "loose" (pron. "looss" = untie, slacken). If you edit this for a book (and it's certainly good enough), you'll have to come down hard on the typos! Best of luck!
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Oh yeah, I'm not good at that stuff I should get an editor.
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though a little TACT may go a LONG way....
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I wish I could sound people out like Mitch XD,Ive only pulled it off a few times.
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Well keep at it, it's necessary for surviving marriage.
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Too right,I use it on teacher s when they tell me "You need to put my value and Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah,Matthew" then I just nod politely ,but keep at it as I stare off.
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sounds about right
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Love it xD I was thinking the Avatar thing too, but now that you said it was intentional, I'm okay with it. A few things, in the past couple of pages you spelled some you'res as your and reprimand as repramand. Also you spelled flight deck as fight deck twice, though maybe there is a fight deck?
Love this comic dude, I dig the 80's guy in space xD I just have a bit of a steel trap when I see writing errors. No harm intended!
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No thanks I'll address that when I can. Spelling and Grammar are no friends of mine, so thanks. I'll try and do another pass.
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Hahah, this is a great comic so far! Love it
Mitch, you perv >__> lol
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Thanks, it's lots of work but fun to do.
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Thanks, I hope you still with the story it's just starting really.
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I'm waiting for more!!
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I love that dress but he is 100% correct, she's extremely distracting. Great job so far! This is really well done.
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Thank you, there's nothing like a cocktail dress to bring out a woman's femininity is there?
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very very true XD I doubt Ill ever see a real man able to effortlessly pull off a cocktail dress
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the blue-boobz girl somehow resembles na'vi... I think. However, I think it would be more comfortable to navigate between the pages if you used "previous page" and "next page" instead of what you have now. (simply put next page tag)
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Although Avatar hadn't come out when I started this ride, I'm glad it did. The Clavarions in my comic were made to be a science fiction cliche. Now they are even more. It funny how things happen. Your right about the navigation issues, of course. I do have a website that makes it way easier and has more BG stuff. Please visit me there if you like. About the coding you gave; Does DA allow that kind of thing?
specimenb28.com
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Hell yeah it is. I started building my world long before avatar too, and found it a bit off... a ripoff
Anyways, I think DA allows this tag. Example: google.com
[link] ">google.com
If you link to DA, it won't show that funny "leaving deviantArt" page
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Thanks I'll look into it when I can.
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I will certainly do my best. Thank you muchly
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and why would they want to.
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Nope, not his fault. I feel for him, they practically stare back at you.
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so I'm not the only one?
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Glad to you're doing better. Great work as Always!
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Wow, that was fast. Thanks brother
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