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Name: Makoto Yorunohi 夜ノ氷 誠  (Group 3)

Gender: Male

Age: 23

Birthday: 10th October

Magical Element: Ice/ Darkness

Class Rank (Magic Skill): 4th (of 16)

Class Rank (Academic): 3rd (of 16)

Height: 5'12"/ 182 cm

Status: Single

Friends: Rentaro, Isamu, Kio

School: Thornwall Academy

Personality: Hard-working, honest, mature, wise, generous, easy-going


Pictures of Makoto:
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((The characters from this story are magic-users who are members of an “Experimental Magic Class”. The class was formed by gathering top students from various magic universities. They live, study and train together in the remote wilderness.))


Short Bio:

Makoto is different from the other members of the magic class, as he comes from a remote shaman village and possesses unique tribal magic. While most others have one or zero animal summons, Makoto, as a shaman, is bonded with several creature companions, all of whom are feline. Makoto is very wise, mature, calm, and strong. He is endlessly kind and giving, and tries to act as a father-figure in the group. He loves to be social, help others, and play with his cats. He is usually accompanied by his main summon companion: Murumuru the purple cat.

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In-depth Bio:

Makoto was born the son of a very powerful shaman in a secluded tribal village known as Talltra. Although magic use is commonplace even amongst regular humans, tribes such as Makoto’s had been living and practicing unique spiritual magic for many generations, making Makoto’s magic different from that of regular humans. The Talltra tribe is a small village of about six hundred people, all of whom had been separated from modern society their whole lives. It was a simple place where children and adults lived in humble wooden huts, cultivated the land, and spent much of their time meditating or practicing magic. The tribe had a magical bond with the feline spirits that roam the forest, and most of the tribe members are bonded to numerous “summons”; winged cat creatures that accompany them.

Being born the eldest child to the tribe’s top shaman, Makoto’s birth was treated with great importance, and even as a toddler he began learning of his shaman duties. His father took him out into the forest and taught him how to understand the land around him, introduced him to the ice-element magic that his tribe practiced, and showed him to the feline spirits that guarded the area so that they might give him their blessing. As a very young boy, Makoto showed great signs of promise, never crying, always listening thoughtfully and always showing a strong and stable personality. His parents taught him how to read and write and how to meditate, and then gave him numerous daily tasks, such as reading the sacred scrolls that recounted the tribe history and having him recite several tribal chants from memory. As a boy, Makoto showed great talent in magic, dual wielding both ice-element and darkness-element magic, as his father did. His parents later had a daughter, and Makoto loved playing with his baby sister and trying to teach her what he had learned about their tribe.

As Makoto was prepared to one day take over as head-shaman of the tribe, expectations on him were high. For generations the shamans of the tribe had had to fulfil several tasks in order to earn their status, one of the conditions being that they had to be bonded with five summons by the time they were eleven. Makoto was able to bond with summons very quickly in his youth; many cat spirits materialised, bonding themselves with his magic and partnering themselves to him. By the time he was nine, he already had four summons, and due to his skill with magic and his love for the cat creatures, his father deemed him well on track to getting his five summons before he turned eleven. Makoto’s very first summon, who he had bonded to when he was just six, was Murumuru the winged cat. Instead of appearing and disappearing as summons usually did, Murumuru stayed with Makoto permanently to protect and help him. Murumuru the cat was wise and insightful, able to speak the human language, and he instantly became Makoto’s best friend.

Though he was excelling as a shaman-in-practice and was due to get his fifth summon on time, there was a disastrous event that shattered everything. Makoto had been told little about rival clans that existed in the same forest, and one day there was a brutal attack on the Talltra tribe that no one had expected. One of their enemy clans – the Nyfera clan, who used fire and darkness magic and were bonded with demon dogs – attacked Makoto’s village one night in cold blood. The demon dogs, who were horrible and powerful fiery creatures, stormed through the village, slaughtering cats and humans and setting fire to the houses. Makoto, who was ten years old at the time, cowered inside with his sister as outside they heard the roar of flames and the screams of their neighbours. Soon enough, the wall of his room was blown in and Makoto looked into the eyes of one of the demon dogs as it snarled towards him.

The demon dog in his room lashed out, took hold of Makoto’s infant sister, and slaughtered her right before his eyes. Seconds before the dog was able to throw its bloody jaws upon Makoto himself, the demon was attacked and vanquished by the guarding cat spirits. Soon, the attack was diffused, and the remaining demon dogs turned and ran off into the night, cackling wickedly. Young Makoto, paralysed by horror, was taken in by his parents as they tried to extinguish the flame and tend to the victims. Makoto was traumatised and rendered mute by what he had seen, though his father, insisting that a future-shaman should have the mental constitution to brush aside such a thing, told Makoto to get his senses together. Makoto, however, was unable to recover from seeing his sister killed, and stopped responding to any orders from his father.

The shamans in the tribe became worried, as Makoto would not be able to ascend to the rank of shaman unless he met their very strict criteria, and many of his duties he was now unable to do due to his trauma. Not only was the boy rendered unresponsive and speechless by the death of his sister, but he had not bonded to a fifth summon by the time he was approaching eleven, and even his main summon, Murumuru, often disappeared. The tribespeople, despite praising Makoto so much before the attack, were now remarkably cold and insensitive towards him, not allowing his emotional ordeal to be an excuse for failing the strict tasks demanded of him. When Makoto turned eleven, his mental state had improved somewhat, but he had not bonded with five summons, as was required by all shamans-in-training. Having effectively failed to qualify as a shaman, his father became overwhelmingly disappointed in him, and the tribe instead began to discuss what was to be done with Makoto now.

Having received nearly no emotional support from his people, Makoto forced himself into a recovery, allowing time to heal his psychological wounds. Makoto had remained quite unaware of the scrutiny he was under, and didn’t believe that his father would go as far as to disown him due to failing a test. Makoto went back to studying, practicing magic, and regained most of his positivity and initiative over time. When he was thirteen, two more of his summons materialised, leaving him with seven – but still it was too late, and he could still not be accepted. Not understanding why people were now avoiding him, Makoto did everything possible to earn his family’s approval; working harder than ever before, studying and reciting scriptures well into the night, and even putting himself to physical labour around the village. Despite his effort, he was now considered a failure, and his father decided in secret to send him away while they figured out where he could fit into the tribe.

Soon after, Makoto was sent out of the tribe to attend a boarding school in a modern city. He was told it was for him to study the outside world and experience another culture, and Makoto believed this fully, not thinking (or refusing to think) that he was being sent away due to rejection. After arriving at the boarding school, Makoto vowed to better himself further as he experienced the outside world, excelling at studies and combat in his new environment. Makoto regained his composed and positive nature, finding happiness studying at the school, even if he didn’t make friends well due to being so different. At the boarding school he met Rentaro, a delinquent who continuously got into fights and who, because they were both ice-element users, declared Makoto to be his rival. Makoto wasn’t fussed by Rentaro’s aggressive attitude however, and instead ended up taking Rentaro under his wing to try to council him and teach him how to be a calmer person and to work out his issues. Though it started off with hatred, Makoto and Rentaro eventually became friends, as they were both outcasts in their own way and Makoto believed that Rentaro could use his help.

Makoto kept in contact with his family via letter, and when he graduated from the boarding school at the top of his grade, he was allowed to continue on to study at Thornwall Academy; a highly prestigious magic school. There he met up with Rentaro again, as now they were very close and Rentaro insisted on going to the same school as his friend. Makoto was proud that he had helped Rentaro become a better person, and believed that his family would be pleased to hear about his successful integration into modern society. Though he had done so well, Makoto was never invited back to the village. Despite being very wise, Makoto’s optimism disallowed him to think that his parents had sent him away for good, even if Rentaro had begun to suspect that, in reality, Makoto had been permanently banished from his tribe. Makoto and Rentaro became the top performing magic-users in the academy, meaning that when the Experimental Magic Class was being created, both of them were allowed to join.

Makoto grew into a very honest, kind and powerful person, and even when surrounded by powerful and intelligent people in the magic class, he remains a mature and respected figure that many of his classmates look up to. He does his best to guide those around him to the right path, and always acts as someone to talk to when people around him are troubled. He is the fourth strongest person in the class, and can command unique tribal magic as well as conjure up to fifteen different summons. Makoto believes he will return to his village as a shaman one day, even if those around him are sceptical of it. Makoto seems to have a very stable personality, although his childhood trauma left him with a crippling fear of dogs, and he never speaks about what happened to his sister.     

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Comments: 9

Akai--Me [2018-04-04 23:59:28 +0000 UTC]

I love Makoto so much! Mature, calm, strong, plays with cats, helps people... WHO DOESN'T WANT A PERFECT
MAN LIKE THIS ONE , HUH?! XDDD 

OHMYGODSHUT UP!!! Your Makoto has ALSO a little sister????!?!!!!?!?!?!? kjhfksehkrjhekhr How could this be? XDD MINE TOO!!! 
I mean, it's Kyo!!! djfhg ok, I'll keep reading. 

^-^ Murumuru <3 Aww! 

OH NO! ... ay... jee, no, why, poor Makoto, witnessing such tragedy... omg, I'm about to cry Q_Q Poor Makoto. aahhh ... I can't... 
Tsk. I hate Makoto's tribe. I hate it so much, the poor  guy was in pain, he had witnessed something so horrible, how could they
be so insensitive? It's ... ah! ... ...I'¡m getting too involved in the story XD But I'm just so sad for Makoto Q_Q 
Oh staaaahhhhppppp QAQ Stop, Goosuto, why do you torture Mako so much? "or refusing to think) that he was being sent away due to rejection" . 
You're so evil, you went too far with sweet, little Makoto! >_< But it's okay, at least he 

HA!!! choke on that, stupid tribe!!! You wanted him to conjure 5 summons? pffffff LOWKEY , he can 15 now! What? Regretting that you sent
him away? Oooh bububu TOO LATE NOW!! 

...
ehm. *cough* . Nice bio, very well-written. XDD 

I'm super touched by this story of Makoto, seeing how despite ALL the bad things that happened to him,
he kept smiling and trying his best... He had his ups and downs but he succeeded at becoming the best and being the kind person he was
in the first place. Determinate and honest, like his name says. 
Because of this -and because his twin is my son XD - .. Makoto has a very special place in my heart  
also... >////< the surname is so AWESOME!! Fire of the night , so mysterious and beautiful...

It was a pleasure to read, take your time to reply to all my shitty fangirling, senpai!!

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Buritsu In reply to Akai--Me [2018-04-06 06:37:35 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for the lack of contact Kai-kun, I'll be back mid April when my friend fucks off from my house loool

 

Mmm I love how you write comments as you read!! It’s great because you can react immediately, but it’s also funny because your mood keeps whiplashing and makes your comment look bipolar ROFL!

 

Ahh… I know Makoto… is so… ;v; he’s like the perfect gentle, honest person to offset all the asshole OCs I have hahaha. Ahah yeah, my Makoto has a sister, but as you know at this point, the whole thing doesn’t end so well :/ aaaghhhgh… what is this tragic story I have created?? xDD Waahhh… not that I enjoy making you sad with my evil story, but I kinda love that you got this involved… because I feel the SAME WAY?? Even though it’s a story I have control over, it’s so fucking sad ffs! Poor Makoto… he did nothing wrong, and was selfless and positive to the very end, but he got thrown away by his own family :’’( Makoto is so wise but in a way he is so naïve… and can’t even see that he was mistreated. *sniff* And his friend Rentaro even has a better understanding of what’s up xDD Rentaro pretty much knows that Makoto was essentially banished, but Rentaro lets Makoto retain his delusions in order to spare his feelings Q//_//Q

 

The important thing is, you are not wrong about your opinions… The kind of “twist” or whatever is that Makoto’s tribe is NOT the good one here. They are fucking assholes and have really outdated, cruel and rigid beliefs. Even though Prince Pepito is twisted af, the truth is that his tribe had good reason to attack Makoto’s tribe, neither of them are really the good guys here :/

 

Gsdafhafdhsaf anyway, thank you ;o; I’m so touched you like Makoto and found the story touching…. SNIFFFFF *cries all over Kai and falls on top of her*  I love your earnest reactions, even the angry ones xDDD makes me feel like my characters are alive to someone… other than just me…. It means so much to me.. bububububu *SNIFF*  

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Akai--Me [2018-03-22 09:33:26 +0000 UTC]

(Ú///A////Ù        )
This... this ikemen takes my breath away~ 
>///> aaahh Makoto!! I love him! xD 
Oh glord, you even chose the same kanji for his name !! the same as my Makoto, I mean xD
kdjhskjrh
gotta read this soon!! Tonight!!! <3

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Buritsu In reply to Akai--Me [2018-03-22 09:38:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh my GLORD I was wondering if your Mako-kun would have the same kanji name as my Mako-kun YESSS. MAKOTOSSSSS

OMGGGG You should upload that dual Makoto picture you drew for Christmas!!! I adore that picture!! A

Thank you Kai-kun Q//m//Q Makoto makes me think of you now xDDDDD ...I hope you like his story!!! (be warned, there are sad parts XDDD (of course....))

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Akai--Me In reply to Buritsu [2018-03-22 09:42:26 +0000 UTC]

They're the twinnest of twins xDD 

SKLGHLEHGSLHLH IF MY SENPAI WANTS SO, I SHALL DO IT!!! (just do it!)
Imma do it now. Cause yeh XD 

xDDD Awwww Q//m//Q Really? Yeah, my Makoto makes me think of your Makoto 
and thus of you as well XD
(I am always warned. BEcause all your OCs have a sad part in their bios Q_Q 👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Captain-Plunder [2018-03-21 04:11:10 +0000 UTC]

I was looking forward to seeing Makoto's info page and reading his story! Thank you for posting it!
First of all, the page looks great! I really like that you drew Murumuru as well : - ) I like the design of this beautiful winged cat and the pattern on its fur : - ) I also like how you drew Makoto and his facial expressions : - ) On the full-body picture his smile seems to be a bit sad, but on the close-up picture he looks optimistic and positive : - ) I think it shows that he tries not to reveal his sadness to the people around him, setting an example for them : - ) I like his story too, it is very interesting and intense. It is a story about a person who never gives up, despite his horrible experience. I really like his character's development. And your attention to the details is amazing, as usual!

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Buritsu In reply to Captain-Plunder [2018-03-22 05:17:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! I'm so happy you checked out my ref pictures and gave me some nice comments!! Ahh yes, I remember that you liked Murumuru and it makes me happy that you were looking forward to reading about them! I was thinking of doing a separate ref picture for Murumuru, but I thought I wanted to combine them to show the importance of Murumuru and Makoto always being together, haha! Ahh I'm very very pleased you think the layout is good... I get nervous about uploading these bio pictures, because I think the quality of art isn't very good and I always hate the picture as soon as it is upload, ahhh... But, it's a great relief to hear that you like the pictures ^_^

Yes! Makoto is overall a positive character, but his actual backstory is rather tragic and it's sad in a way that he had been mistreated and banished without even realising it was happening... but, at least due to his eternal optimism he is able to stay a happy person. ..Thank you!

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Khallandra [2018-03-21 00:59:38 +0000 UTC]

Really love this design and his story,  Murumuru too

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Buritsu In reply to Khallandra [2018-03-22 05:11:48 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh thank you so much!! I'm very happy you took a look at the ref, thank you, heehee, ...I'm glad you like him! >///<

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