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mrvictorygreymon [2016-04-09 06:49:46 +0000 UTC]
you must be hiered by game freck you must
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Blak-Foxx In reply to ManiacalMew [2013-09-21 14:27:43 +0000 UTC]
tysm I really appreciate your feedback sorry it took so long to get back to you, but yeah thanks really ^^
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Spire-III [2013-08-27 01:26:23 +0000 UTC]
It's like if a Charizard and Sceptile mated. My favorite feature is its flame hair cupped by the leaf headdress. It becomes a torch, which is the first thing I always think of when Grass/Fire comes to mind.
I think Grass/Fire is my favorite unused type combination. There's something just so obvious and likable about it. For one: when thinking about it, there are several things that always come to mind (that I think a lot of people tap into), but it furthermore yields a lot of room for creativity. Grass and Fire are also more classical elements than Psychic and Electricity for instance, so when thinking of a possible Psychic/Electric PokΓ©mon, the imagination can run too wild (though the first thing I think of is some kind of alien technology-enhanced Mewtwo).
I think the arm and tail bulbs could use a lot of work though. Currently they appear as armor, when I think it'd work to your benefit to portray them as parts of the creature's body. Maybe the hands are too small, and instead of the arm bulbs tapering into small wrists, they grow into larger hands with claws capable of becoming superheated. I guess just overall, this PokΓ©mon has too much information, but not too many concepts. I think it can be simplified. Look at Charizard for instance. A super simple design really. Orange fire dragon. Things that make Charizard memorable: its two short horns, its large belly and small arms (kinda like a T. Rex), and a flame-tipped tail. Monibomb has a dorsal fin on its back, but it's hardly noticeable, let alone does it seem to serve much a purpose other than being a tacked on feature to complicate the design. Charizard has zero features on its back besides the wings, keeping the design sleek and simple. I can see a little Magmar in this design as well, namely the feet and tail separation/coloring, but also in how it appears to be wearing armor.
Ultimately this is your design and you can do what you want, but I do think it can be improved by converging and naturalizing the creature more. It reminds me of the tribal stage in Spore where you dress your species up with primitive gear.
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Blak-Foxx In reply to Spire-III [2013-08-27 01:47:37 +0000 UTC]
As always thanks for the feedback I see what you mean about charizard and sceptile xD my original design probably looked a bit too aquatic so I tried to bring it back to land lizard, but I also see what you mean about the dorsal fin it would lookΒ a lot simpler, but it was purely aesthetic there I imagine him being a pokemon that will go down on all fours at times and the fin would be a kind of neat looking addition in it's more usual poses ^_^ as for the arms and tail they're supposed to be gun powder barrels, I managed to naturalise it a lot on the tail by making it look mace like (inspired by that one dinosaur with the awesome mace tail) but on the arms I did struggle a tad, however! I have an idea since you've brought it up, not sure how much more natural it'll look but it'll at the very least look more believeable or rather more erm, practical cause as it is he has to turn down the flames when he's bending his arms (need I say why? xD) the way I have in mind should fix that, you said just in time too I was getting ready for some fanart lol, I'm not 100% invested in the hands either so I'll see what I can do ^_^ hopefully changes to the arms will help to fix this, I'm not sure I want to make it nearly as simple as charizard I think too much of the concept it came from will be lost but mark my words I will optimise xD good thing the battle cut doesn't show the arms heh x_x that would've killed me inside, big time
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RedDeadRAVAGE [2013-08-22 03:34:44 +0000 UTC]
It's awesome, just as I thought it'd be!
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Blak-Foxx In reply to RedDeadRAVAGE [2013-08-22 03:37:38 +0000 UTC]
I'm so glad you like it ^^ hopefully everyone else will feel the same way xD
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Blak-Foxx In reply to RedDeadRAVAGE [2013-08-22 03:42:11 +0000 UTC]
^^ I think that's me done for today xD will update my fakedex and call it a night lol
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RedDeadRAVAGE In reply to Blak-Foxx [2013-08-22 03:44:50 +0000 UTC]
Haha awesome, put in a days work xP
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Blak-Foxx In reply to RedDeadRAVAGE [2013-08-22 03:46:27 +0000 UTC]
Deffo has been a days work lol, been out most of the day too >.>
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DENKRON [2013-08-22 03:11:14 +0000 UTC]
FUCKING COOL
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Blak-Foxx In reply to DENKRON [2013-08-22 03:37:13 +0000 UTC]
What my fox icon? o:
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