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Published: 2011-01-01 01:49:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 13617; Favourites: 407; Downloads: 94
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Description +Chapter 2+

A doll of doubt, held by fading dreams
- From these tears, my heart spills
--- (A blade so sharp it cuts my seams)
- Too worn to bear my countless ills

And I'm fading...
I'm fading

Hope, so delicate, like feathers bound by thread
- For my echoed failures, this is the cost
--- (Discard me, I've no love left to shed)
- To the cold moonlight, I'll gladly be lost

And it's fading...
It's fading

The sky's vast embrace, how gently Angels fall
- Singed feathers.. gold feathers?
--- (Within these arms I don't feel so small...)
- Sun-soaked wings in obsidian tethers

And I'm fading...
Into you.

+Chapter 1+
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The poem's verses on the image is a little mixed around, so I wrote the actual order here. I wrote this poem about a year ago, when Ty did Chapter 1.
In retrospect, I am sad I didn't have more of Kaej (the boy) appear in my chapter, but also, part of Pheyd's story is that she didn't realize he was there all along, like the stars that surround her.
I know I shouldn't go divulging all the metaphorical meanings here, since we like keeping their story ambiguously poetic, but I really wanted to muse on how... Pheyd's burning angel wings are not divine punishment for being a bad angel, or something like that. Metaphorically speaking, everyone is an "angel" when they want to love someone. They're an angel because they love, give, and cherish unconditionally. The only reason Pheyd nearly loses her wings is simply because she worked herself thin, and ran out of love... which, naturally, turned into pain. You can only love for so long and get nothing in return, you know? But, as fate would have it, as the moon falls from grace, she lands in the arms of a shooting star...



Happy new year's eve, everyone!
Hopefully I'll have something to post tomorrow too.

art/character/story (c) *Tyshea and myself, please do not alter or redistribute this piece in any way.
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Comments: 91

Beedalee-Art In reply to ??? [2013-05-24 22:34:22 +0000 UTC]

Argh, thank you so much! I'm glad you like it! We may end up more or less doing a revamped/updated version of these with their new designs, but I assure there will be plenty of infectious poetry to go around!

Thank youuu

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Azurenite88 In reply to Beedalee-Art [2013-05-25 14:33:15 +0000 UTC]

Hooray for poetry, looking forward to it

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Primthekitty [2013-03-26 03:21:37 +0000 UTC]

I have no words for how amazing and beautiful this is.

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Beedalee-Art In reply to Primthekitty [2013-03-26 18:52:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Milonar [2013-02-15 10:07:22 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could find a word to describe the beautiful of this Artwork of yours. XD

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Beedalee-Art In reply to Milonar [2013-02-16 23:25:02 +0000 UTC]

Ah, you don't have to say anything! I'm happy you like it so much; thank you..

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hey-lilibee [2013-01-13 21:46:44 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely.

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Beedalee-Art In reply to hey-lilibee [2013-01-14 19:48:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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Panicagelfish [2012-11-15 17:55:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm lost for word and am nearly in tears. This is just so beatifully inchanting

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Beedalee-Art In reply to Panicagelfish [2012-11-15 19:32:43 +0000 UTC]

That means so much to me, thank you!

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Panicagelfish In reply to Beedalee-Art [2012-11-16 14:15:19 +0000 UTC]

you welcome

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OwlsAndCupcakes [2012-09-01 05:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Ai-Bee chan is amazingly wonderful

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Beedalee-Art In reply to OwlsAndCupcakes [2012-09-01 20:07:27 +0000 UTC]

T-thank you, haha!

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carmelrain [2012-05-23 00:28:39 +0000 UTC]

i love it. so much emotion and a rush of awe ran threw me in one big wave amazingggg

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Beedalee-Art In reply to carmelrain [2012-05-23 18:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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foreverholdyourpeace [2012-03-02 23:59:14 +0000 UTC]

wow,this gave me goosebumps

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Beedalee-Art In reply to foreverholdyourpeace [2012-03-04 01:31:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Naiai13music [2012-02-24 02:46:01 +0000 UTC]

aaawwww....so sweet...*smile*

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Beedalee-Art In reply to Naiai13music [2012-02-25 06:26:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Cloverdeer [2011-08-18 02:02:54 +0000 UTC]

whoa...so beautiful~~

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Beedalee-Art In reply to Cloverdeer [2011-08-18 18:51:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Cloverdeer In reply to Beedalee-Art [2011-08-18 19:22:14 +0000 UTC]

np~ :3

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ChisaiCho [2011-08-15 19:58:40 +0000 UTC]

this is.. WOAAAAAH
stunning.

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Beedalee-Art In reply to ChisaiCho [2011-08-15 21:05:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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ChisaiCho In reply to Beedalee-Art [2011-08-15 22:07:33 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome! <3

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Mizu-Star-Chibi [2011-08-13 20:31:11 +0000 UTC]

waaah...
it's so beautiful...

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Beedalee-Art In reply to Mizu-Star-Chibi [2011-08-15 04:02:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Mizu-Star-Chibi In reply to Beedalee-Art [2011-08-15 23:39:49 +0000 UTC]

no prob
i love these characters

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MadziaXD [2011-07-11 07:15:22 +0000 UTC]

you have a blog with such cool graphics as there please enter link please want to learn it czemak the answer

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BritsMc13 [2011-07-11 01:57:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I love the meanings behind all of this, and the thought you put into both the art and the poetry! Truly a beautiful piece

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Beedalee-Art In reply to BritsMc13 [2011-07-12 21:18:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thank you so much. I'm really happy you think so.

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messers-peaches [2011-06-29 18:16:40 +0000 UTC]

oh wow amazing i guss you and tyshea are best friends or boyfriend and girlfriend i dont know if your a boy or girl

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Beedalee-Art In reply to messers-peaches [2011-06-29 20:36:43 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you so much! We're both girls, I'm her girlfriend.

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messers-peaches In reply to Beedalee-Art [2011-06-29 22:11:56 +0000 UTC]

oh cool i love both of your art and if you dont mind me asking i have gay best friend and he dosent know how to come out to his family cause they not in love with the idea and he has asked me for help??? dont worry you dont have to anwser if you dont want to

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Beedalee-Art In reply to messers-peaches [2011-07-07 03:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Hoo well uhh XD;;
It's just hard because that's a really serious situation... If he's not 100% sure it's safe, all I could recommend was wait until he was in a situation where if he did get kicked out he had a place to live. It really depends on how close he is to his family, how understanding they'd be, stuff like that. I recommend trying to find GSA or LGBT groups/friends in his town or even online so he has someone to talk to more in depth. It depends on what kind of city you live in, so... Yeah... Just tell him to be careful with how he approaches them if he does decide to tell them.

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messers-peaches In reply to Beedalee-Art [2011-07-07 05:05:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you soooooooooooooooo much you've really helped

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Beedalee-Art In reply to messers-peaches [2011-07-07 22:07:43 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I'm really glad I helped any! I hope it goes well for your friend.

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messers-peaches In reply to Beedalee-Art [2011-07-08 04:26:37 +0000 UTC]

hehe i hope so too

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Yobi-chan [2011-06-25 10:54:48 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful and sweet... and so sad ;.;

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Beedalee-Art In reply to Yobi-chan [2011-06-27 05:24:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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Yobi-chan In reply to Beedalee-Art [2011-06-27 09:46:18 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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satoko-minazuki01 [2011-06-23 16:27:52 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww

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ChokoretoUsagi [2011-04-26 20:17:30 +0000 UTC]

i cried ;3; seriously OTL

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Beedalee-Art In reply to ChokoretoUsagi [2011-04-29 09:17:12 +0000 UTC]

Awww! ;///)(\//; I'm sorry! I didn't totally expect anyone to cry, argh//! That makes me happy too but I'm more sorry argh//
G-glad you liked it though, I think.. orz///

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ChokoretoUsagi In reply to Beedalee-Art [2011-04-30 21:50:42 +0000 UTC]

No apologies! It was beautiful ;u;

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SaturdayMoster [2011-01-30 01:15:39 +0000 UTC]

if therez like a book tell me where i can find it

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Beedalee-Art In reply to SaturdayMoster [2011-01-30 01:23:42 +0000 UTC]

There isn't a book or anything right now, but maybe someday!

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Elleybug [2011-01-08 09:33:25 +0000 UTC]

so much emotions. so beautiful
i love it : D

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Beedalee-Art In reply to Elleybug [2011-01-11 05:38:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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SnapShotDicer [2011-01-08 09:19:39 +0000 UTC]

1. I totally "yeeee'd" when I saw this in my inbox <333

2. Beautiful. Just beautiful. The art, the emotion, the meanings behind Pheyd's burnt wings, it's all wonderful <3

Lovely job, dear. :>

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