Comments: 48
WeebleClock [2010-09-11 05:36:33 +0000 UTC]
This has such beautiful composition. You have SUCH a knack for composition; it's kind of frightening the way you grasp it. <3
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Bzoo53 [2007-08-10 03:15:13 +0000 UTC]
Really Good!!!!I like the way you drew riku, IT'S AWSOME!Lol, can't wait 2 c the next 1!
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VeniceGirl [2007-07-23 23:43:00 +0000 UTC]
whoa, you've really captured this scene well.
I especially love the angles.
Keep on drawing it! It's so good!
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oathkeeper3 [2007-06-09 21:36:21 +0000 UTC]
this is really good, you should continue!
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death-game [2007-06-03 07:12:09 +0000 UTC]
this page made me tear :<
<3 rikuu
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Midnight94 [2007-05-30 13:03:42 +0000 UTC]
You are a marvoulous artist. This comic has good drawing, impressive details, and a wonderful plot (even though we know it's Kingdom Hearts, but I like how you explain Kairi got to to the islands.)
I am so impressed, I would be honored if you taught me how to draw the Kingdom Hearts characters. Would you please? I am not as good an artist as you.
Oh by the way, I am anxiously waiting for the next page of this comic. I love it.
Midnight94, signing out.
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QueenofRandomIdiocy [2007-05-26 17:23:26 +0000 UTC]
I flew through the first twelve pages of your comic, and now I'm stuck craving MORE. It's like the darkness--addictive. This happens to be my favorite panel, now, by the way. *tear* Riku...how much I love him. Though your point back a few pages ago about Kairi getting so much crap for that one, hardly-explained line was very very true.
But I still love Riku. I also loved the creative wasy you found of getting around Ansem's crizz-azy costume. Where the flip does he shop? T.J. Haxx? Darkness "R" Us? The Crap? (Gap) Banana Freaking Republic??? (I didn't even have to modify that name; it was insane enough)
OMG RIKU IS SHINY! I wanna touch him...
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Toshi-Muffin [2007-05-15 22:07:43 +0000 UTC]
this comic is like crack. <3
GIMME ANOTHER PAAGE. D:
TTwTT
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Chamaelirium [2007-05-08 09:36:58 +0000 UTC]
*sighs* Beautiful. I'm enjoying this a whole bunch. Glad to see more appearing!
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oathkeeper3 [2007-05-03 03:08:05 +0000 UTC]
YAY! im so glade you didnt abandon it! +fav
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k-sanzo [2007-05-01 22:14:06 +0000 UTC]
yay! it still lives! X3
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cardigan [2007-04-30 23:44:49 +0000 UTC]
That's so... amazing. How well you understand and able to express the story behind Riku and Kairi. Thank you you're willing to share it with us *;_;*
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Saharen [2007-04-30 20:33:51 +0000 UTC]
I just read through all tweleve pages and I'm loving it :3 Great job so far, can't wait for the rest!!
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alyssafew In reply to Saharen [2007-05-01 10:34:30 +0000 UTC]
I'll be sure to work on it as soon as finals are over or I have a little spare time - whichever comes first!
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Saharen In reply to alyssafew [2007-05-01 20:57:33 +0000 UTC]
I'll be waiting eagerly :3 Good luck on the finals.
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alyssafew In reply to TheAmazingLadyShoe [2007-05-01 10:34:05 +0000 UTC]
Yup! The next page is super easy too, so I should be able to get back into the flow without too much trouble. XD
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onesky-onedestiny [2007-04-30 20:12:56 +0000 UTC]
*inappropriately happy for such a sad scene*
hooray! the next page! (now, if only i had waited a few more days before bugging you...)
and beautiful, to boot. i never understood this scene before watching it a half-million times during the beginning of my KH-craze, and you did an awesome job with summarizing it.
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PTGreat [2007-04-30 19:41:39 +0000 UTC]
Awesomeness!
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Steffel [2007-04-30 19:29:34 +0000 UTC]
A great moment and you really captured it.
I love the angle and Ansem's hand.
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alyssafew In reply to Steffel [2007-05-01 10:32:10 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Since this page and the next are the crux of the whole thing, I'm glad to hear I've done well.
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IndigoPhoenix In reply to alyssafew [2007-05-01 22:32:38 +0000 UTC]
Are you planning to take it all the way through KHII? Or just the original?
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Pathetic-Fangirl [2007-04-30 18:30:44 +0000 UTC]
Yay! A new page and it looks amazing.
My day is now complete.
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lady-dragonish [2007-04-30 18:03:33 +0000 UTC]
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Oh, lovely! particularly the riku's glowy... ness...
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alyssafew In reply to lady-dragonish [2007-05-01 10:29:20 +0000 UTC]
It took forever to find the right balance of light/dark on him and Ansem. Thank you!
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alyssafew In reply to LynxGriffin [2007-05-01 10:28:43 +0000 UTC]
Indeed! I've just done a rework of the script and I still have that wonderful line coming up in a few pages, I gotta get to that!
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devil-in-grey [2007-04-30 17:02:34 +0000 UTC]
x3 fantastic work as always Gem <3
oh, yesterday i decided to replay KH and while i was playing my friends kept commenting what a bitch Kairi was and what a lame character she is .__. you know.. it's very hard to not say anything to that xD i kept quiet though
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alyssafew In reply to devil-in-grey [2007-05-01 10:27:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
... T_T
I would've said something. D: Man, that's so sad.
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sakurabatou [2007-04-30 16:16:29 +0000 UTC]
YES. I've been waiting for this. <3
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lozzy45 [2007-04-30 11:39:41 +0000 UTC]
lovin em
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