ElDragonRosado [2010-12-20 00:31:33 +0000 UTC]

hmm, I had not seen you in a while and it appears there is reason as you are not here.

... side note... I just looked at your profile and it says you are male. ... I thought you were female, or at least that is how I pictured you and referenced you in my mind. Interesting.....


Llap Shae

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SicadaLemmingMan [2009-05-09 18:09:39 +0000 UTC]

damn where the fuck has this fool been at?

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melancholy-otter [2008-08-19 04:18:51 +0000 UTC]

Heyyy, I believe I know you in person, which is very random and cooli.

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Subliminal-Rhapsody [2008-07-23 02:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Hey, hey, CRACKA!

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theuntitledpoet [2008-02-19 18:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for liking my work, you surprised me. You seem so accomplished in your own work or "deviations". Anyway, must be running away now...

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WTFA54 [2008-02-15 02:43:23 +0000 UTC]

i taged you. [link]

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WTFA54 [2008-02-03 15:27:32 +0000 UTC]

the symbol for zen is the circle. it is both everything and nothing (being an endless circle, and being Zero). thus zen is embracing the fact that you are both everything and nothing.

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NickMagnus [2008-01-30 14:39:21 +0000 UTC]

Hey man,

yeah i was finally able to redo that song, and i feel really good about it this time. i can sing the lyrics much easier, and after all the playing i did this morning there is no way im forgetting it this time lol!!

i really loved this line you came up with truly,

"And then a trip over a rock into a flash of mauve
The rabbit hole opened and pill-designed we dove
Out the other side, you still clutched my finger tight
As the liquorice swallows blew their sweets, lit up the night"

The "clutched my fingers" bit is classic, i almost wanted to go with it, but sorry man, i just had to write this song like my other songs. By me. you know . . . no hard feelings. i may want to lift that for another song if you don't mind??

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NickMagnus [2008-01-30 02:07:39 +0000 UTC]

still going over it now, it pisses me off when this happens to me. its like a change of emotions through out the day, that killed it. plus it being tricky. so i've got a vague idea of where i was going with it, but i forgot it really, and feel really bad because i had been asked to write it for someone, with a particular theme. i like the lyrics, but i need to simplify them. i think i'll submit the new version sometime late tonite, or possibly tomorrow, and i don't really want to give you the impression that im trying an "Alice n Wonderland" over and over . . . maybe its just the way my head works, that it seems similar to that. like the cat putting a pill in my mouth in the other one. i was just putting random thoughts down, and my imagination is sort of colourful naturally, its not as dark, and political like dylan's or as wry as someone's like matt groining / someone like that . . .

this ones suppose to be fairytale like

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NickMagnus [2008-01-30 01:00:47 +0000 UTC]

I like the imagery and the concept of this phantom redhead taking you tripping with the Beatles, or however you'd describe that kind of fantasy world. The verse after the second interlude just had me wondering a bit, because you were creating this vague sort of world, and then you injected a concrete character (Mister Zimmerman), but I think that could work if you just had more than just the walrus and the bard. Y'know, sort of a cultural injection type thing instead of being exclusive to those two.
For the missing line there, my brain gave me "To blow a song like a kiss through the peppermint lands", but I don't know if that entirely fits. You also might want to use that space for another character or two.
The last verse: I'm not suggesting you use this, but this just came into my head:
"And then a trip over a rock into a flash of mauve
The rabbit hole opened and pill-designed we dove
Out the other side, you still clutched my finger tight
As the liquorice swallows blew their sweets, lit up the night"

I dunno. What do you think?


i really did like it. i've decided to just resubmit this one. ive been going over it this evening and i can't even get the original chord progression to go with the lyrics anymore. the concept came sort of fast to me this morning, and this was a tricky one. so i'm gonna revise it a bit, and maybe make the lyrics less of a mouthful to say. i copy and pasted your comment for possible later use. when i do re-submit i would still like your take . . . so stay tuned.

peace

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SicadaLemmingMan [2007-12-13 20:53:30 +0000 UTC]

dude i re-issued my "boy who cried sheep" story, for the sake of more views. you were like the only one who commented. and i re-issuing it erased your nice "you-ish" comment. so im inviting you to restate something similar if you're up to it. im re posting this story, because im sure it got lost in the many posts, i posted the one day, and i know people and their short attention-spans who delete a bunch of deviations if submitted at once. so im sure plenty will comment this time.

peace

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WTFA54 [2007-11-06 14:29:45 +0000 UTC]

i'm blocking you until further notice.

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silverbeau [2007-08-24 21:31:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your kind words, hope you continue to enjoy my stuff, since I'm still enjoying yours.

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TheGregMan [2007-08-05 03:44:36 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thanks for the comment. I really like your stuff, I want to read it all, but I just don't have the time.

Do you have some personal favourites you'd like to recommend I read? I'd appreciate that!

I'm just wondering, how did you find my ballad so quickly? Usually it'd take a month before someone finds any of my work.

Talk to you later!

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totalenialation [2007-07-20 18:15:41 +0000 UTC]

"Ok, pay attention children, this is why having war mongering, money grubbing, power hunger, blood thirsty capitalist bastards for a government does not work, repeat, DOES NOT WORK! Now, does the rest of the world understand?" hell yea i agree. thats why i wroyte the poem.lol.anyway thx for the support man

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KennethSno [2007-06-26 08:37:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment and

I appreciate your taking the time to check out my work. I browse through yours and let you know what I think.

thanks again,
kenneth

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Frozencry [2007-06-17 04:37:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment and the add. It's appreciated

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apocathary [2007-06-06 03:20:58 +0000 UTC]

Cheers for the add mate

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totalenialation [2007-05-27 18:26:16 +0000 UTC]

yes well just adding more poems and hope you will comment thx your awsome

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toxicxdreamzx33 [2007-04-16 21:14:10 +0000 UTC]

thnxx for the add

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darkgamblor [2007-04-11 05:04:45 +0000 UTC]

Hehe. Oddly enough, it was about thought. Kind of an odd topic.

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cheshirecat24 [2007-04-08 02:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the watch!

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BrerAnansi [2007-04-07 19:58:43 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... I don't often watch writers, but I quite like this...

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GeneralPoetry [2007-03-25 21:51:45 +0000 UTC]

Hi, and sorry to bother you, I was wondering if your interested in joining my new club, ~GeneralPoetry Just a club for people who write literature to talk etc, if you do just add it to your watchlist and I will add you to the memberlist, and if you don't, then that's fine too.

Thanks

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delusion-of-habit [2007-03-23 08:59:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the fav and comment

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thacheeze [2007-03-21 01:18:06 +0000 UTC]

THANKS FOR FRIENDING ME!

You're friggin awesome! : )

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artistsagainstwar [2007-03-13 13:08:16 +0000 UTC]

Hello Thanx for joining AAW

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