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Zirngibl — Orange Juice Factory 2

Published: 2009-05-21 00:40:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1532; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 57
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Description This was fun, though my watercolor teacher didn't really like it. I think he thought it was too illustrative. He also told me it didn't "have feeling" or something like that. I suppose he was right. I guess it could be seen as a bit sterile. But I kind of wanted it to be that way!

I was looking to sort of combine the contour linework of, well, kind of like a comic book, with the penwork shading of lithography, sort of. Kind of an "old and modern" relationship in the look. Especially with those kind of retro colors... I then took the watercolor to the pen drawing for awhile... I also did some color correction in PS.

I wanted it to also have sort of a cel-shaded "design-ey" kind of vibe going on, like where the orange squares are.

Finally, for a little illustrative element, I've got a tiny figure standing on top of that giant stack of piping on the upper right area.

When I brought this in on its due date, I had only done a chunk of the pen work. I had no idea that the project carried such a big weight.

I had a pretty bad grade in the book for awhile afterwards because it was the only graded assignment I had so far. I'll have to learn my lesson (though I was able to raise it.)
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Comments: 17

xigbar4ever [2010-03-12 05:32:34 +0000 UTC]

It looks great! I don't know what your teacher was thinking, you get a huge feeling of being overwhelmed and surrounded by a towering factory.. i personally love it.

You did a really good job on this. I need to learn how to do this kind of art with water color paint haha.

i dont know if you're still in the class by now but art teachers can either be very supportive or total downers xD so dont get too discouraged by what they say

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vladimir-the-hamster [2009-05-26 00:51:51 +0000 UTC]

Well, if you wanted it to be that way, then wouldn't sterile be the feeling you wanted, so therefore you did draw this with feeling even though the feeling was the lack of it?

I don't really know what I'm saying anymore though. I like this piece a lot though. Its cool.

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Zirngibl In reply to vladimir-the-hamster [2009-08-11 21:44:41 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, an interesting statement.

I mean sterile in the sense of putting stuff that resembles architectural pre-visualization in a gallery setting... I think.

I guess I don't know what I'm saying anymore, either!

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tractern [2009-05-21 18:27:02 +0000 UTC]

haha!

Yeah- I see the figure on the right! A great detail!

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Zirngibl In reply to tractern [2009-05-22 19:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks-- I mainly put him in there to give a sense of scale.

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tractern In reply to Zirngibl [2009-05-23 00:58:38 +0000 UTC]

I think this works in the sense you wanted.

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amyjenc1 [2009-05-21 14:38:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh Mr. Wang..."you no use enough cula!!! use more...no not this brush.." Him walking away with your brushes...Amanda told me about that...hahaha

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Zirngibl In reply to amyjenc1 [2009-05-22 19:38:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, haha. I'm glad he kept bugging me though. It took a lot to get me over my fear of putting a bunch of color on at once.

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amyjenc1 In reply to Zirngibl [2009-05-24 01:46:58 +0000 UTC]

Haha...you and Eric both.

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that-car-bloke [2009-05-21 07:44:34 +0000 UTC]

incredible. all art teachers are too critical, it's annoying when its obvious you have talent.

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Zirngibl In reply to that-car-bloke [2009-05-21 13:43:40 +0000 UTC]

Well, to be honest I'd rather them be critical, I guess.

I think too often people think that all it takes is "talent" to be truly good at what one does, but miss the idea that it also takes judgement-- (knowing when and where to apply specific looks and techniques) to make stuff effectively.

I'm not saying I think this is your view, just saying that I know I still have a lot to learn, especially when it comes to the "judgement" side of things, and actually, I don't think most of my teachers are critical enough!

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that-car-bloke In reply to Zirngibl [2009-05-21 14:37:29 +0000 UTC]

ah you make a strong argument. and your correct, praise is nice, but i guess people want to her whats wrong with it so they can do it better the next time.

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SpudPaste [2009-05-21 00:41:36 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of Brazil, only a little more colourful

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Zirngibl In reply to SpudPaste [2009-05-21 13:38:09 +0000 UTC]

Interesting... how does it remind you of Brazil, exactly? Like, does it look like an industrial plant that you associate with the country?

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SpudPaste In reply to Zirngibl [2009-05-21 23:28:31 +0000 UTC]

Not the country, the movie Brazil by Terry Gilliam. It's setting is similar to this painting.

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Zirngibl In reply to SpudPaste [2009-05-22 21:19:40 +0000 UTC]

Interesting-- I like settings like that. I may want to check it out!

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SpudPaste In reply to Zirngibl [2009-05-23 02:03:15 +0000 UTC]

It's very good, one of the all-time best sci-fis according to critics. It's not a special effects extravaganza or anything, it's genius comes from it's satire.

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