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zhavas β analogy part one
Published: 2005-11-28 18:08:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 350; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 77
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WARNING: big filethis is my first premeditated narrative piece, ever.
alot of time went into this and I really wish I could have done something different, now that I think of it.
this is also the first piece I've ever made that is intended for submission online.
please dismantle and interpret.
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pencil, markers, ink, watercolors, typewriter, trashbin treasures, other stuff... on an enveloppe.
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[Its been a while since I gave advanced crit.....]
visually this is incredible, epic, how many different types of media have you used, masking tape, typewriter on plastic. Having said this, nothing looks forced or over done which works well it.
Absolutely love the composition of this piece, persepective is well depicted, and the conpilation of different images really adds visual depth.
Subject matter: its what everyone of us on this site thinks about, and asks ourselves.
A beautiful piece of sequential work
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Good work deserves:
+ good critique
+ much love and recognition
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J'aime beaucoup le travail
c'est fouilli, un peu comme un esprit qui vagabonde, c'est Γ§a l'inspiration...
Joli joli.
[clap clap]
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merci, c'est fait vraiment avec les moyens du bord, et c'est un peu ca l'intention.
genre les trucs au fond de ma poubelle et un tampon fait avec du scotch sur du carton
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J'aime beacoup personelement
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The fullview is big and somehow puzzling. I really like that.
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yes it is, and it took an hour to correctly scan it.
I thank you
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for now i'll just fave it 'cause i think it looks very cool, later on i'll read it and interpret 
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I think the clear plastic tape is the turning point in the piece. Reflection is like a dream that you can escape to until your mind returns to the dirt ground where it usually stays.
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exactly, and exactly.
thanks
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I've been trying to make out what has been typed on the clear piece of plastic taped over the center of the image.
I've pieced together everything except for the begining of the third line. Would you be willing to shed some light on this?
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I'll fetch it, I don't quite remember that bit.
-you should also assume that even the deepest of structured reflexions is based on something spontaneous and illogical.
I should rewrite that bit to include:
...in your own life.
at the end
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Thank you for the clarification, it's all coming together for me now.
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Wow, that's an incredible piece. The whole piece has so many interesting details in it, and I love the top distortion of the hallway. The whole piece works really well as a whole, but also as seperate parts as well.
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YES, that is what I wanted.
for each bit to potentially become a separate composition.
thanks.
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I can't believe how much I like this one.
even looking past the thought lying within, just the general style makes it all fit together so well. After seeing it like this, I could never imagine it drawn/painted on anything other than the back of an envelope
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me either, thanks for pointing that out.
and thanks for actually liking it!
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I've found that I like pretty much everything you dish out
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