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Zeiram3f — Chaos
Published: 2012-06-05 04:58:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1504; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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PSCS4 @ apx 10 hrsSo I've been toying with this series of 'beasts' for a year or two now. Chaos, Leadership, and Order (as I've currently titled them)... But I've never really been able to get the concepts down onto paper, but after a good dream and a half I finally visualized what I wanted them to look like.
So currently, these pictures are just experiments to spur my understanding of art, form, shadow, light etc... and so far I can see some progress in a single months time. Sigh*...
So far to go... Cheer me on, I'm gonna need it. =]
Critique all you want. I want to know what's good, and what's bad. What's present, and what's missing. Hit me.
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I can tell before even reading the description that a lot of work was put into this piece! great job
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Oh wow awesome concept. I love the way he blends into the smoke, and his head looks very scary. I recommend checking some refs or even tutorials for the hands though, they look... odd. Don't know. Too much perspective going on, and muscle-work seems off. Maybe even the entire pose of his arms could be altered. Apart from that, I say, go!
Keep at it!
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Thanks for the tips. I agree on the anatomical proportions, and especially the hands. For me, this was pure imagination and no reference, so I could have helped myself a little more had I actually used some reference. Muscle work is a bit odd, but since its 'skin' is to blend in with its 'armor' I'd say it kind of makes sense, but then again, I'm the creator, not the viewer... sooo, my assessment will always be somewhat biased
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I see you've already changed a lot. Good work! And yeah, sometimes it takes a fresh view to point out something. Though, sometimes you can choose not to agree with that view. That is the power of the creator 
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You're so very right. Fortunately I took the advice, as many people were confused about the right arm being over (foreshortened) or disproportioned, and so I buffed it, moved it back, as well as shrouded the hand some to signify distance, as well as some movement through the smoke. Sooo yah =]
And thank you again, I requested a critique; I got one. So, I appreciate it all sir. My final addition to this painting is done. She is complete.
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