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YumeLyd — koi protector

Published: 2012-08-20 15:38:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 647; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 1
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Description Ahh it's finished x.x
She's the koi spirit who protects the pond



Comments and critiques are greatly appreciated

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Comments: 26

Doko-Latte [2012-11-08 00:55:20 +0000 UTC]

I love this, amazing use of colours! I would suggest more shading to give some depth~ I love her gentle expression ^^
The background is so detailed, but I think you should use a less saturated shade, since they seem too bright and direct atention away from the girl.
Great job!

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YumeLyd In reply to Doko-Latte [2012-11-08 14:15:03 +0000 UTC]

i've been working on the shading yep,i thought about making a happy pleasant scenery with vibrant colors thats why..but you're right ^^ thanks again

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Doko-Latte In reply to YumeLyd [2012-11-09 06:22:46 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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springartist [2012-11-03 14:36:07 +0000 UTC]

The colors in this are very pastel. I like the bright colors. If you would like some crit., it could do with a little bit more shading, just to give it more dimension. I like how her hair swirls around in the water, and the style of her dress. Nice work. ^_^

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YumeLyd In reply to springartist [2012-11-04 10:30:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you,im glad you like it i appreciate your critique

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blacky91 [2012-10-14 15:44:40 +0000 UTC]



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The picture itself is pretty good, I love the strong colors and the background. The concept is pretty awesome too, it's so much as fantasy and yet so down to earth that you can still 'feel' it being 'real'. It's really hard to do that but you managed really well.
There are some things you could improve on, unless you want to make them your own style or something, but what 'I' would do is make the head a bit smaller for the body or make body a bit bigger. Also the waterfall looks a bit out of place, it looks great but it just seems to come out of nowhere, there's no real indication that there is a river or anything at the top of the mountain/hill that would really put the waterfall into place.
Either way great picture, I love it

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YumeLyd In reply to blacky91 [2012-10-14 18:44:50 +0000 UTC]

thank you for taking time to write a critique i really appreciate your help

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blacky91 In reply to YumeLyd [2012-10-14 19:36:18 +0000 UTC]

no problem whatsoever

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Risocaa [2012-09-29 17:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh! This is such a gorgeous picture! The girl is so pretty and have such a gentle face~ The reflection of the tree and the surrounding rocks is a nice touch as well :3 Great job!

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YumeLyd In reply to Risocaa [2012-09-29 20:06:43 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you so much for your sweet words!

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RoamingDragon [2012-09-07 16:41:05 +0000 UTC]

Such soft use of colors! This is well designed and vivid. Very breathtaking!

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YumeLyd In reply to RoamingDragon [2012-09-07 17:02:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks i'm glad you like it

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NoF4ith [2012-09-04 09:57:05 +0000 UTC]

amazing.

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YumeLyd In reply to NoF4ith [2012-09-04 10:00:31 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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NoF4ith In reply to YumeLyd [2012-09-04 10:01:23 +0000 UTC]

np

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FruitTartz [2012-08-31 23:01:56 +0000 UTC]

I love the background~ It creates a really nice atmosphere in the picture and the girl is very pretty >u< Awesome work~

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YumeLyd In reply to FruitTartz [2012-09-01 07:55:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much dear <3 glad you like it ^_^

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hika91 [2012-08-23 19:53:05 +0000 UTC]

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YumeLyd In reply to hika91 [2012-08-23 20:03:48 +0000 UTC]

ekana oti mporousa..
heh euxaristw pl pantws ^_^

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LunaBell [2012-08-22 20:44:24 +0000 UTC]

this is soo pretty

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YumeLyd In reply to LunaBell [2012-08-23 07:02:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks!i'm glad you think so ^_^

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8Bpencil [2012-08-20 20:21:44 +0000 UTC]

this is really goood

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YumeLyd In reply to 8Bpencil [2012-08-21 06:39:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks <3

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NightElf86 [2012-08-20 15:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, this is gorgeous! I love the concept and you did a great job on coloring! And she is so pretty!

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YumeLyd In reply to NightElf86 [2012-08-20 18:10:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much for your sweet words dear

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NightElf86 In reply to YumeLyd [2012-08-20 21:26:05 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome!

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