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lolvcrtape [2014-03-23 16:44:17 +0000 UTC]

I like the idea you have here, but the execution could be better. You don't need to use an aperture level that high here because the enemies in the background are an important part of the picture, so they don't need to be blurred out. In a dark picture, the viewer notices the light areas with high contrast first. Those models have a lot of purple and bright lights on them, so they are distracting when the viewer should be looking at the main character at first. Some of those props and parts of the wall are a bit too bright, too.

It's helpful to keep in mind which characters and areas in a picture are the most important and have information or a theme to tell. Those should always stand out with contrast and bright lighting. Placing your main characters close to the middle of the picture also makes them look prominent and draw attention. I understand that the scene you have created for this poster has been hard to do lighting on because of the abundance of objects and characters. Anyway, I do believe that you can make this poster a lot better by improving the lighting.

Also, I'm sorry that I could'nt upload that tutorial about lighting big scenes last week.. I should be able to finish it today or tomorrow and hopefully it's going to be useful to you. Of course, you can always ask for help.

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Wesker86 [2014-03-17 04:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work! Good to see my girl Tali kicking more arse lol

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Dragon101k [2014-03-16 15:03:06 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...Mogłeś walnąć po lewej sondę. Byłoby bardziej kolorowo. Takie lekkie podświetlenie tego kanibala pewnie by fajnie wyglądało.

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Narox22 [2014-03-15 21:45:21 +0000 UTC]

Posing and camera angle could be better... but except that everything is great.

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markthesfmabuser [2014-03-15 21:27:00 +0000 UTC]

That is a very nice setup for almost everything!
Really love that light through the hole in the background and the characters in front of it.

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