Comments: 7
TheZeel [2015-02-23 15:06:34 +0000 UTC]
this is the most awesome looking pony ive ever seen, love the scar and that mustache
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Wisdom-Thumbs In reply to TheZeel [2015-02-23 22:22:28 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
*files emote away for future use*
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Levyathyn [2014-07-18 04:22:12 +0000 UTC]
Well, the sword and shield look second-priority. I know they were, but the difference in detail is a bit noticeable. Considering this thing's place as a sketch, though, all is forgiven. The shield, mostly, just looks plain, with no coat of arms or anything that would require its presence here. I like his backstory; a plain, sturdy soldier for his plain, sturdy instruments. Pragmatic in view and action, and your paragraph conveys the well. The clarification about the moustache was well-needed. The scar is well-done, and the details on his face are clearly more defined than the rest of the drawing. His moustache you stole from yourself, in real life, so no points there.
Overall not a bad character. Perhaps a fantasy staple, the steadfast, almost by-the-book lesser of two evils, a world-wear guard captain known for his straight, no-nonsense approach. But he seems to be a well done version of said character.
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Wisdom-Thumbs In reply to Levyathyn [2014-07-18 04:38:23 +0000 UTC]
Actually I wrote him up for Swordpony well before I grew the mustache. And his magnificent facial hair far outstrips my own.
He probably comes across better in the story itself, given time. He doesn't quite fit the archetype you described. Or maybe he does, and I just don't realize it. It's not like he's had any time to shine yet.
The shield is definitely the worst part of all this, but I figured I'd draw his sigil instead of his cutie mark, since that's what I did with the Lobster Knight.
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Levyathyn In reply to Wisdom-Thumbs [2014-07-18 05:24:02 +0000 UTC]
Well, to be fair, you've shown me a Cliff's Notes of the character, I can only see what's presented here and go off of that.
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SgtGrub [2014-07-16 08:21:51 +0000 UTC]
The scar looks gnarly, I gotta say.
Love the back story. A stallion that's worked for his position, and now is regretting it.
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Wisdom-Thumbs In reply to SgtGrub [2014-07-16 09:03:47 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't say he regrets it, but he definitely has regrets.
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