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Wheatart โ L4dfg Round 1 vs Pion pg1
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Published: 2009-03-30 19:23:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 463; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Finally! I finished page one! Comic life has greatly improved the quality of my comics, and I can't wait to do the others! Now, for some explanations! Yes... Shift is drinking out of the fountain and Pion is stealing an apple. In a new town with no money or resources, what else are you going to do? My favorite panel is probably the eye close up, and no, I have no idea how to draw lemurs. Shift can be any animal she can think of, so why not make something up? I'm wondering if she can delve into mythology or not, I'm wondering if that'll give her too much power! I'm really excited to see ~lavitt 's entry now!Cover: [link]
Page 1: You're here!
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Shift and Shade belong to me
Pion belongs to
Fangirl universe belongs to
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Comments: 10
The arrangement of the panels are great! 
I think in the first panel the thief looks like he's unimportant...
The two following panels are great!
But again I'm confused with the las two ones:
Wich one do I've to read next?
Well because your wrote in american readline I would think the left one but the "Rumble could thell me the right one....
And than just the left panel of the last two ones confuse me, because what does that have to do with the recent action?
But these are just the only things I found!
I really enjoy how you did all the other pages!
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You would read American style. Or Canadian. It doesn't really matter too much for this strip because it's just concentrating on introducing the characters. If you want to learn more about them check out which is the OCT they are in. Pion is my opponent. The characters are trying to escape from masses of adoring fans, which would explain the rumble from their stampeding.
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Okey thank you!
I don't know If I'll read it (too much english, you know? xD) but I'll surely have a look!
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very nice
I would put my page up but I'm waiting
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What are you waiting for?
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to finish the rest and make the cover
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