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BigWells [2021-01-11 15:17:21 +0000 UTC]
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TYBG48 [2019-08-08 23:52:44 +0000 UTC]
I honestly would have loved a version of this where the joker had turned the reader into a maniac like him and the reader would end up becoming the arch-nemesis of batgirl/Barbara since joker had him be manipulated and turn against batgirl. Batgirl/Barbara feels bad and regret for not telling the reader and one night for their final fight, the reader gets the upper hand and at the last minute, Barbara reveals to the reader that’s she’s Batgirl, maybe memories of the reader and Barbara starts flooding in and the reader starts getting out of control and that’s where Barbara steps in and gets the reader. Maybe times passes by after the reader did some time, and in that time Barbara would go visit the reader every day cause of her guilt but when the reader gets out, they resume their relationship and she decides to have the reader as her partner even if the reader still has his joker like persona and maniac tendencies traits to him but batgirl is convinced that the reader could be of help to her now and would like to spend time with him even if it takes convincing from Batman and Nightwing.
This was what I would like to have seen instead of the reader being a good ole’ simple civilian.
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VanguardofFire In reply to TYBG48 [2019-10-14 10:02:27 +0000 UTC]
Not a bad idea, actually...
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TYBG48 In reply to VanguardofFire [2019-10-17 22:51:53 +0000 UTC]
Sorry for the late reply! But yeah, just an idea that popped into my mind while reading this.
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MMPR426 [2019-07-09 19:34:52 +0000 UTC]
Awesome story, Vanguard! When I got to the part of the story where Y/N had just regained consciousness, I could swear that I heard Harley's and then Mistah J's voices in my head. It really freaked me out!!!
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Kranesthegamer [2018-06-06 17:31:27 +0000 UTC]
When i read that joker escaped and they were heading to Barbara's house i had a Killing Joke flashback.
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Vulkan221 [2016-07-31 18:22:45 +0000 UTC]
So romantic I love it.
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Riley3100 [2016-03-07 01:35:48 +0000 UTC]
This is great! I'd love to see more batgirl x readers in the future
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VanguardofFire In reply to Riley3100 [2016-07-20 20:35:20 +0000 UTC]
You will. This story is getting a sequel.
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khergitleader [2015-11-20 22:59:40 +0000 UTC]
i would have said at the end bit "there is a nice bed with our names on it i think we should oblige"
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derekmetaltron [2015-10-19 09:19:19 +0000 UTC]
That was excellent! You know the Batgirl character very well and her relationship with the reader is very adorable. And I'd definitely love to see a continuation or a one-shot with some other DC or Marvel heroines - I know you mentioned Super Girl and someone else suggested Power Girl but Wonder Woman and Zatanna (the comic version rather than the Young Justice version) would be cool. This might have also given me some interesting ideas for my own Male Reader style stories actually...
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derekmetaltron In reply to VanguardofFire [2015-10-19 13:11:28 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! I figure with Wonder Woman the logical plot might be to have the reader washed up on Themyscira like Steve Trevor did, or just working around the Justice League somehow. With Zatanna being her assistant makes total sense, or getting involved in something magical. Also on the Marvel side seeing how you did Seven Minutes in Heaven with the Dragon Age crew I figured something similar with the female X-Men would be awesome, say like Rogue, Storm, Kitty, Psylocke, Jean Grey, Emma Frost and the like.
Also would it be ok to ask you for help with Reader Insert style fiction if I need to? I got an idea for Agents of SHIELD/Ant Man story with an Inhuman Male Reader and also a Daredevil/Avengers Male Reader one with an MCU She Hulk as a romantic interest. Oh and a series of Doctor Who ones, though that might not have romance or be gender specific.
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VanguardofFire In reply to derekmetaltron [2015-10-19 15:02:09 +0000 UTC]
You've more or less nailed what I had in mind with Wonder Woman and Zatanna's One-Shots. I won't say anymore though in order to avoid spoilers.
An X-Men Seven Minutes in Heaven sounds very interesting, the only trouble being that: aside from Jean Grey, Storm, Kitty and Rogue, I'm unfamiliar with the other candidates. Maybe once I've cleared my schedule, I'll give it a whirl. I can just imagine Gambit being the one who suggests the game in the first place.
As for help regarding your own reader inserts:
Your ideas seem very interesting, my only concern is that She Hulk isn't in the MCU(though I hope she will be one day), but if you think you can make it work somehow then by all means go for it.
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derekmetaltron In reply to VanguardofFire [2015-10-19 15:33:10 +0000 UTC]
Nice to see that great minds think alike. I'm sure they'll be good regardless. But yeah, Gambit sounds just the sort of fellow to suggest that sort of game! Those four are certainly good additions regardless! Psylocke is a fav of mine because she's the sister of Captain Britain, one of my favourite super heroes in fiction.
Thanks! I have a good hook for the Inhuman story where your Inhuman character provides a reason to bring the Ant Man crew (the Pyms and Scott), Coulson's SHIELD (possibly minus May and Simmons since it might be pre Season 3) and eventually the New Avengers (Steve, Natasha, Wanda, Vision, Wilson and Rhodes) together. Not sure if there's going to be a romance included, though I am debating Daisy/Skye as an option (you being both Inhuman bros and all).
The She Hulk one is a bit more sketchy, basically your male character ends up joining Murdock and Nelson as an assistant along with Jennifer Walters, who of course is also an aspiring lawyer. And then basically the origin with Daredevil characters included, plus Bruce/Hulk I guess. I could I suppose use the comic versions instead though.
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Tomahawk2812 [2015-08-14 18:06:37 +0000 UTC]
More one-shots? Yes, please!
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Mega-adam [2015-08-14 17:09:12 +0000 UTC]
loved it :3
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Jotose [2015-08-14 08:19:07 +0000 UTC]
Great story my friend!
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CornelioBurris [2015-08-14 06:21:39 +0000 UTC]
I love it, can you do a power girl x male reader one?
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CornelioBurris In reply to VanguardofFire [2015-08-14 07:57:33 +0000 UTC]
Awsome, by the way I love your story 'a fresh start' it's amazing
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VanguardofFire In reply to CornelioBurris [2015-08-14 08:46:50 +0000 UTC]
My thanks! I'm glad you think my first Avengers story is awesome.
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CornelioBurris In reply to VanguardofFire [2015-08-14 20:11:04 +0000 UTC]
Yah, I really enjoyed the avengers, but which one shot are you gonna make next
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VanguardofFire In reply to CornelioBurris [2015-08-15 00:10:24 +0000 UTC]
The next one is Supergirl x Male Reader. Though there are plenty more OneShots to come.
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CornelioBurris In reply to VanguardofFire [2015-08-15 00:45:32 +0000 UTC]
Sweet, I always enjoy everyone one shots and storys like yours
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ravusWolf [2015-08-14 06:20:44 +0000 UTC]
neeeeds part 22222222
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ZeoZentnights [2015-08-14 05:18:52 +0000 UTC]
What are you planning on doing next?
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VanguardofFire In reply to ZeoZentnights [2015-08-14 07:32:00 +0000 UTC]
Quite a lot, actually. Though my next DC Fanfic is a Supergirl x Male Reader OneShot.
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Mega-adam [2015-08-14 04:35:48 +0000 UTC]
loved it :3
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SlimPickensUK [2015-08-14 04:25:20 +0000 UTC]
Excellently written, I must say. This DEFINITELY needs a continuation.
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SlimPickensUK In reply to VanguardofFire [2015-08-14 10:54:05 +0000 UTC]
Sure! Or another reader insert continuing this storyline with Babs.
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SlimPickensUK In reply to VanguardofFire [2015-08-14 11:07:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. This is quality writing and really deserves an epilogue or follow up insert.
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