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Sarky-Sparky [2010-07-11 19:34:32 +0000 UTC]

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Yay! This is one of my favouritest piccychures because of the number of characters and the little details and the fact that it just looks so colourful! They all look lovely together.

This is beautifully bright and colourful and clearly took a buttload of time to finish. Nine characters for crying out loud. That deserves applause in itself. Now, I love love love this picture. Love group pictures. But I do have a few things you you add to it. I mean, it looks gorgeous but incomplete.

As far as technical drawing goes, it's certainly good. I mean I know you and know what you're like and know there are some things you just won't do XD But some of the anatomy on the original base was (and is often) off and a little editing would make a lot of difference. It's mainly on Marik and Mai where the torso just isn't long enough and looks a bit odd. Bex's shoulder is way too droopy too. But the rest of it looks fine. The clothes (OMG FOLDS e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>) and hair looks great on all of them and that puzzle looks awesome. I admire the chain in particular XD Even little detains like Toe Fungi's headband and the stitching on Mai's corset make a different and look prettiful. And I love that you've even got all the little details on Tem's outfit on there too like the button and the collar and blah blah. For some reason though I like Jou's clothes the most. They just look awesomely drawn and shadeded. But, while we're on outfits, Marik's neck thing needs a very very pale or hard white highlight.

Now, the eyes. They're the weak points in an otherwise lovelyful picture. I mean, don't get me wrong, they're good but could use some work. I has tips. They do look better for having a second shade in them but it's way too pale. You need a more dramatic difference between shades to actually make it obvious and a thicker shadow under the lash line. The whites of the eyes also could benefit from having shading under the last line. A highlight in the bottom of the iris would look prettiful too =3 Aaand Seto has no eyelights? D= Oh and girls have longer eyelashes than guys so make the line thicker <3 Although Togi's eye does look very beautiful.

The orange BG colour is kind of bleh though and a bit of a shame having one bleh colour for all of them. It would have made more sense to have a pastel colour like you said you would and a different one of each like pale purple for Mai, green for Jou, yellow for Kukie, pink for Bex etc etc


Ah, sorry this sounds all doom and gloom T.T But you know I love it. It does look beautiful of course. Excellent choice of poses for each of the characters. It suits them all very well ^^

GENERIC AWESOME STAR SCORES BECAUSE YOU ARE GENERICALLY AWESOME. YES.

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HellDice [2010-11-08 16:34:16 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!! But no bakura?

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Bambifani [2010-11-07 10:37:18 +0000 UTC]

Cute~<3 I like how it's chibi-ish.

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Bakura83 [2010-11-07 10:22:06 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome
bwt i feal sad as bakura isn't there T^T
meh oh well i still luv this pic ^^

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darkangelatem [2010-11-07 02:14:09 +0000 UTC]

this is cute >w<

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YamiYuugi-Atemu [2010-07-10 21:04:16 +0000 UTC]

(( OMG, this is such an awesome idea!! I love this sooo much!!! ))

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DarkRavenStudios [2010-07-08 04:42:00 +0000 UTC]

wow awesome picture

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Ritzy-kun [2010-07-07 03:01:58 +0000 UTC]

Nice job~ ^^

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bluediamondpikachu93 [2010-07-07 02:16:48 +0000 UTC]

awesome pic it looks hot

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Rebecca-Hopkins [2010-07-07 02:15:37 +0000 UTC]

((XD Groupies?))

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