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By:Iván “Decep” Mas [link]
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I love the art, but the dialog leaves much to be desired.
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Yeah! Megatron Origins! Mwhahaha!
Decepticons Forever! Autobots Never!
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Very nice!! I like the very unique visuals! Keep up the good work!
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Hey Man! thanks ! all is ok ?!
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Interesting artwork, though the inner dialogue makes little sense.
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I concur. Beautiful to look at, but difficult to follow.
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if you don´t read megatron origin is normal.
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I can't speak for ladyrazorsharp but I have read Megatron Origin and I recognize the scene. It's not that I don't understand what is going on, it's just that the dialogue doesn't make much sense at all.
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In what way is this comment useful?
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In what way is that one?
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Would give you the touche' if it didn't sidestep the point.
I don't appreciate pointless negative comments around here, so keep them to yourself please.
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I'm sorry, do you run DeviantART? I have every right to express my dislike of someone's writing.
Do you constantly hound DA pages looking for negative comments to complain about?
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I'm sorry, do you run DeviantART?
Nope, just this page. And your "rights" only go as far as your ability to post here without being blocked.
You're welcome to offer critique, which is what helps an artist grow. But all you're doing is bashing, which is useless.
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I'm sorry, but how is comparing his writing with someone else's constituting as "bashing"? (unless it's compared to MG-Dinobot's)
But hey, if you want criticism, here:
The writing was poor and cliché'd, reminiscent of Raksha's fanfiction of the 90s trying to justify the Decepticons' cruel acts.
Megatron ends up looking like a crybaby who can't get over being bullied by a handful of people and transferring his angst onto Autobots as a whole, rather than coming off as a merciless tyrant.
While he claims the scene is borrowed from Megatron Origins, the Autobot guards shot bloodthirsty rebels who'd already injured a senator and killed a guard, not unarmed bots begging for mercy.
The art, on the other hand, was pretty nice, although I'm not a fan of this "white outline" style.
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Wicked! Taken from the IDW story. The last panel reminds me of The movie when Ironhide gets blasted. Also the purple boxes look cool too.
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Good story and art; reminds me of a scene from Henry V.
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I don't think the comment on where it's taken from is really necessary. If people really don't know where it's from they ask anyway.
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For what?
I'm just stating my opinion.
You and everyone else are more than welcome to disagree with me.
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No problms.... it´s oks... don´t worry.
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Yeah, man. He's remembering an actual event from the Megatron Origin comic.
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Estás contestando "no tenía ni idea" al tío que SÍ está defendiendo tu mosaic? No te entiendo... xD
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Oh drat, is someone mocking me in Spanish again?
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LOL, absolutely not, I'm telling Iván not to be sarcastic in english as he's not really fluent and it doesn't sound like sarcasm
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Ah, I see.
It's just as well, as I have a dreadful time detecting sarcasm even at the best of times.
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