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timeraider — A Man, Struggling
Published: 2010-11-20 04:25:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 618; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 11
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Page 139 from "Dragon Wing", Volume 1 of the Death Gate saga. Text blacked out to protect the innocent. The poem:A man, as any knife or sword,
Struggling to regain himself.
His bare hands could touch
Loud, deep voices
Thrumming inside of him;
He could swear
The voices were violent
And seemingly alive.
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A very resonating and powerful piece. I suppose the violent voices could seem...scary, but oddly I received the thought as empowering and strong.
Again, well done. I'm really enjoying this visual poetry!
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Thank you! I thought this one came out really well.
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You're quite welcome! 
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woah, i really wanna try this.
i love what you did with the words!
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This is excellent. I love the poem, even on the page, it's visually broken up with excellent flow. :] Well done.
(I really wish I could write critiques, but I can't. D: I'm sorry!!)
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I was very happy with this one, too. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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