HazelRose3637 [2018-08-11 07:21:33 +0000 UTC]
Dark, somber, and poignant. Very relatable poem!
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JustACapharnaum In reply to HazelRose3637 [2018-09-10 12:04:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I am glad you appreciate it
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pulbern [2017-11-18 02:15:27 +0000 UTC]
Chasing 'it', the human condition summed up!
JustACapharnaum In reply to pulbern [2017-12-30 14:32:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
Acerbical [2017-09-25 19:05:49 +0000 UTC]
Hello J,First off, wow! Just wow! I'm always fascinated by the way people can pull a poem from pages and books and you've done just that! Fascinate me.Secondly, the poetry founded here is beautiful, powerful realization. It impacts heavily on the mind. I don't think it as something depressing per se, but more of an awakening to the soul about how life can be fleeting. Thirdly, though it is words based on the character of the book, I think the way you used the imagery to draw on something else is quite lovely and was wonderfully executed. Overall, I enjoyed its somber nature. Keep up the wonderful work.
JustACapharnaum In reply to Acerbical [2017-11-07 05:59:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for your feedback! I find found poetry quite amusing Glad to know that you enjoy the poem!
justb [2017-09-25 06:18:40 +0000 UTC]
sweet
JustACapharnaum In reply to justb [2017-11-07 05:57:40 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
Yuukon [2017-09-24 14:29:50 +0000 UTC]
JustACapharnaum In reply to Yuukon [2017-11-07 05:57:29 +0000 UTC]