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Terri-chan — Obsession
Published: 2006-10-16 00:04:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 309; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 3
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Description I feel lost
I’ve never felt this way before
Everything about my life was fine
Until you threw it into fantastic chaos

Now the pieces of what I thought was my life
Are strewn across the floor at my feet
Shards of a mirror
Twisting the reflections into something
I don’t recognize anymore

I’m being ripped apart from the inside
From the memory of you
Your face dancing in my mind
I can still feel your voice in my head
Brushing between waking and dreams
Why do you fill up the part of me that no one sees or touches?

Driving me insane
I never asked for this
This maddening desire for you
I never wanted another person to fill my senses
So vivid I could touch you in my daydreams
How can I have another in my mind
When I don’t have room for myself?

Tell me how to get you out of my head
How to get the smell of you out of my senses
So thick and sweet I can practically
Roll it around on my tongue
Get your perfect features out of my dreams
You in my every thought is tearing my mind to shreds
I want you so bad that I hate you
And me
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Comments: 5

KleeAStrange [2007-10-02 10:01:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry I didnt comment sooner.

I just want to say that... this poem speaks to me. It really does. I know how this feels... and it hurts... a lot.

Thank your for exspressing something so powerful as this, friend.

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Terri-chan In reply to KleeAStrange [2007-10-03 00:39:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. It's nice to know that I picked the right words. That I am capable of conveying something profound with something as simple as words, makes me happy. Even if the only thing it made you feel was pain, that's okay. What matters is that I made you feel SOMETHING.

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xxbrizone [2007-08-12 02:19:17 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty sad...but good!

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Terri-chan In reply to xxbrizone [2007-08-12 14:23:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I didn't think anyone would ever comment.

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xxbrizone In reply to Terri-chan [2007-08-12 23:08:41 +0000 UTC]

no problem XD

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